
1/26/2023 c34 Legolidis900
You sure as hell know how to write a good story there are a few spelling errors but that is ok
I d reccomend in the bountys you made it like this
30.000.000 instead of this 30000000
You sure as hell know how to write a good story there are a few spelling errors but that is ok
I d reccomend in the bountys you made it like this
30.000.000 instead of this 30000000
1/25/2023 c26 Legolidis900
This is a great story and on the one hand i want to ready these 8 chapters as fast as i can
On the other hand that will mean there will be no chapters left to read
I see that the story aint abandoned but its been a month till the last chapter and i havent seen a single story updated in 2023
Again good job wordsmith
This is a great story and on the one hand i want to ready these 8 chapters as fast as i can
On the other hand that will mean there will be no chapters left to read
I see that the story aint abandoned but its been a month till the last chapter and i havent seen a single story updated in 2023
Again good job wordsmith
12/28/2022 c25 Thebootytroll
All I have to say is he didn’t have this much trouble with krieg in the anime
All I have to say is he didn’t have this much trouble with krieg in the anime
12/25/2022 c34
14Power of Magic
That was quite the chapter, and I'll be looking forward to seeing how the next one goes. That was an interesting idea having Robin confront Vivi, and I should think that Crocodile knows about Robin's ability to read the Poneglyphs, which is why he wants her alive. It'll be interesting how things will go fighting the Baroque Works agents in Whiskey Peak with Luffy and Robin helping Zoro

That was quite the chapter, and I'll be looking forward to seeing how the next one goes. That was an interesting idea having Robin confront Vivi, and I should think that Crocodile knows about Robin's ability to read the Poneglyphs, which is why he wants her alive. It'll be interesting how things will go fighting the Baroque Works agents in Whiskey Peak with Luffy and Robin helping Zoro
12/25/2022 c34 SomeGuy2020
Vivi really got played. It was pretty great, ngl. And now that Luffy is awake along with Robin, this oughta be an interesting turnout for the Whiskey Peak arc. Great job on the chapter. And have a Merry Christmas
Vivi really got played. It was pretty great, ngl. And now that Luffy is awake along with Robin, this oughta be an interesting turnout for the Whiskey Peak arc. Great job on the chapter. And have a Merry Christmas
12/9/2022 c33 Power of Magic
That was quite a chapter, and I'll be looking forward to seeing what happens in the next one. Here's hoping that Robin doesn't fall for the bounty hunters tricks at Whiskey Peak, and that she helps Zoro fight them (and maybe Luffy too, if Robin wakes him up)
That was quite a chapter, and I'll be looking forward to seeing what happens in the next one. Here's hoping that Robin doesn't fall for the bounty hunters tricks at Whiskey Peak, and that she helps Zoro fight them (and maybe Luffy too, if Robin wakes him up)
12/9/2022 c32 Mrkilljoy4
I would say domino effect just rehashing the same storyline has been done so many times i dont mind it overall but what is the point of creating changes to a storyline if nothing changes.
I would say domino effect just rehashing the same storyline has been done so many times i dont mind it overall but what is the point of creating changes to a storyline if nothing changes.
12/7/2022 c32 SomeGuy2020
First i wanna mention how much i like and enjoy the changes and adaptations in this story. It intrigues me with how different the turnout is. Secondly, i honestly thought this was just gonna be a story about the events in which things change with Robin not being where she was before. Though id be lying if i were to say i wasnt curious about the oc you had in mind. My vote however, will stand with the effect of Robins absence. Good day!
First i wanna mention how much i like and enjoy the changes and adaptations in this story. It intrigues me with how different the turnout is. Secondly, i honestly thought this was just gonna be a story about the events in which things change with Robin not being where she was before. Though id be lying if i were to say i wasnt curious about the oc you had in mind. My vote however, will stand with the effect of Robins absence. Good day!
12/7/2022 c32 SomeGuy2020
First i wanna mention how much i like and enjoy the changes and adaptations in this story. It intrigues me with how different the turnout is. Secondly, i honestly thought this was just gonna be a story about the events in which things change with Robin not being where she was before. Though id be lying if i were to say i wasnt curious about the oc you had in mind. My vote however, will stand with the effect of Robins absence. Good day!
First i wanna mention how much i like and enjoy the changes and adaptations in this story. It intrigues me with how different the turnout is. Secondly, i honestly thought this was just gonna be a story about the events in which things change with Robin not being where she was before. Though id be lying if i were to say i wasnt curious about the oc you had in mind. My vote however, will stand with the effect of Robins absence. Good day!
11/29/2022 c32 Lejani Berd-DI
Thanks for the chapter, although I felt it fast, well it doesn't matter, it was still good. As for you to add a character that occupies the position of Robin, I still have not decided, so what can I tell you that it will be what you decide. Surprise us.
Thanks for the chapter, although I felt it fast, well it doesn't matter, it was still good. As for you to add a character that occupies the position of Robin, I still have not decided, so what can I tell you that it will be what you decide. Surprise us.
11/28/2022 c32 erasenpai946
I expect a domino effect in Alabasta, there's no point in anyone in Robin's place (since no one but her can read stones)
I expect a domino effect in Alabasta, there's no point in anyone in Robin's place (since no one but her can read stones)
11/27/2022 c32 GamingShark1014
Great chapter, it was interesting seeing the differences from the original. I think oc replace is better but honestly both have there pro's and con's so its your choice.
Great chapter, it was interesting seeing the differences from the original. I think oc replace is better but honestly both have there pro's and con's so its your choice.
11/27/2022 c32 Power of Magic
That was a cool chapter, and I'll be looking forward to seeing what happens in the next one. It'll be interesting if Robin mentions who saved her and Luffy, and I'm fine if you use an original character or not in the Alabasta Arc, as they both have pro's and con's
That was a cool chapter, and I'll be looking forward to seeing what happens in the next one. It'll be interesting if Robin mentions who saved her and Luffy, and I'm fine if you use an original character or not in the Alabasta Arc, as they both have pro's and con's