for One Piece Fates Intertwined10/29/2022 c30 Guest
Good chap
Good chap
10/28/2022 c30 Chronolocked
So how is the whole thing with Crocodile later on gonna go down? Since Robin never was with him.
So how is the whole thing with Crocodile later on gonna go down? Since Robin never was with him.
10/11/2022 c29 ro781727
Looking forward to Luffy AND Robin getting their first bounties from that rat faced marine.
Looking forward to Luffy AND Robin getting their first bounties from that rat faced marine.
10/4/2022 c28 erasenpai946
Nami is an idiot to think that Arlog would keep the deal, but it was a good chapter (just the exaggerated drama that has for Luffy to face Arlong, Nami's theater but ignoring it until it was a cool chapter)
Nami is an idiot to think that Arlog would keep the deal, but it was a good chapter (just the exaggerated drama that has for Luffy to face Arlong, Nami's theater but ignoring it until it was a cool chapter)
10/3/2022 c11 A. J Savage
While really cute, they don't need to flirt in every moment just because they are a couple !
While really cute, they don't need to flirt in every moment just because they are a couple !
10/3/2022 c10 A. J Savage
Great to see there relasonship finally develop fully.
Although it is resolved nicely, you should make issues take more time than one chapter !
Great to see there relasonship finally develop fully.
Although it is resolved nicely, you should make issues take more time than one chapter !
10/3/2022 c28 Guest
You should try to show more emotions and urgency in these scenes because the feel a tad bit slow and way too calm.
You should try to show more emotions and urgency in these scenes because the feel a tad bit slow and way too calm.
10/2/2022 c28 Guest
Great chap
Great chap
9/8/2022 c27 Jailer87
Please don't take too long to update the next few chapters, it would be nice to read the story in a continuous flow.
Please don't take too long to update the next few chapters, it would be nice to read the story in a continuous flow.
9/8/2022 c27 
14Power of Magic
That was quite a chapter, and I look forward to the next one. Poor Usopp, trying to scare Arlong like that, but he just makes things worse (still, Luffy is gonna end up kicking the living snot out of Arlong, which'll be fun). I think I know who Arlong is having Hachi bring over, and it'll be interesting how this'll go
14Power of MagicThat was quite a chapter, and I look forward to the next one. Poor Usopp, trying to scare Arlong like that, but he just makes things worse (still, Luffy is gonna end up kicking the living snot out of Arlong, which'll be fun). I think I know who Arlong is having Hachi bring over, and it'll be interesting how this'll go