10/20/2023 c1 2A10riddick
Great rewrite! Can't wait for the next chapter!
I forget if the twins show up the first time or now, but this is a good start!
I would probably say gray Harry and Hermione.
For Dumbledore, I would say probably misguided because he thinks he is light, but in truth he is dark with his decisions and nobody realizes it. Do I make sense?
Great rewrite! Can't wait for the next chapter!
I forget if the twins show up the first time or now, but this is a good start!
I would probably say gray Harry and Hermione.
For Dumbledore, I would say probably misguided because he thinks he is light, but in truth he is dark with his decisions and nobody realizes it. Do I make sense?
10/19/2023 c1 Mopis
If you ever continue the fic I would make hermione like bellatrix and make her super loyal and obsessed with harry to the point she would fi. She could be super dark and would hex or curse someone how just looked at Harry wrong. I would make harry something like true neutral and make his own side and would use both light snd dark spells to battle Voldemort and Dumbledore.
If you ever continue the fic I would make hermione like bellatrix and make her super loyal and obsessed with harry to the point she would fi. She could be super dark and would hex or curse someone how just looked at Harry wrong. I would make harry something like true neutral and make his own side and would use both light snd dark spells to battle Voldemort and Dumbledore.
12/7/2021 c1 A10riddick
Great chapter! Can't wait for the next one!
The Ron confrontation paragraph is accidentally split into 2 paragraphs.
Great chapter! Can't wait for the next one!
The Ron confrontation paragraph is accidentally split into 2 paragraphs.
10/9/2021 c1 Haelstroner
Hey JT hope everything gets better for you mate excited for you to come back better and continue these stories to the end been a pleasure reading them. Hope you take care of yourself dude.
Hey JT hope everything gets better for you mate excited for you to come back better and continue these stories to the end been a pleasure reading them. Hope you take care of yourself dude.