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10/14/2021 c12 Shyguy the master
Great story, but the others are a lot better.
10/14/2021 c11 Shyguy the master
The evil bstard is dead, ding dong the cockatoo's dead.
10/14/2021 c10 Shyguy the master
Yay, Blu and Jewel are together again
10/14/2021 c9 Shyguy the master
Intense chapter. It's a dangerous game of hide and seak in a corridor filled with enemies.
10/14/2021 c8 Shyguy the master
I like puzzles, but hate clip shows, so this chapter is kind of hit or miss. What saves it is we learn more than we did before. I like that about your writing.
10/14/2021 c7 Shyguy the master
Blu is quite clever to convince Jose to change teams.
10/14/2021 c6 Shyguy the master
Relax, Raffy is on the case!
10/14/2021 c5 Shyguy the master
I feel so bad for Jewel, I've lost a lover myself, and it is horrible to experience the pain of loss. You also capture the feeling of that horrible sixth sense really well.
10/14/2021 c4 Shyguy the master
Poor Blu
10/14/2021 c12 Scarlet ripper
I love how you included "i wanna party".
Thus ends arc 2. See you for arc 3
10/14/2021 c11 Scarlet ripper
The only bad part of this story so far is Jose defeating Nigel is identical to Amber defeating Roger. Both sacrifice themselves, both go over a ledge of some sorts, and all four fall to their deaths. It's not a deal breaker but it is something I've noticed.
10/14/2021 c10 Scarlet ripper
Finally Nico and Pedro do something in these stories
10/14/2021 c9 Scarlet ripper
I hope Jewel finds Blu
10/14/2021 c8 Scarlet ripper
I'm not sure about everyone else but I like these kinds of chapters
10/14/2021 c7 Scarlet ripper
Love it
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