
4/11/2023 c2 Stachelbeere
I think you overlooked his anti powers in this last scene.
They touched. Or are hair and gloves in the way?
I think you overlooked his anti powers in this last scene.
They touched. Or are hair and gloves in the way?
3/31/2023 c2 LyingChicken
I really do hope Oswald has been training his body just as much as his Devil Fruit or trying to figure out Haki. The Sea stone weights were a good start but if he plans to not only kill his family but get AWAY with it and do the "D" name proud he's gonna have to be pretty powerful.
Also I understand that he kinda hates his family but it'd be dumb to not take advantage of it. You're filthy rich hire combat tutors or something.
That said I really like the direction the story has gone. The start is really different from any One Piece fiction I've read and I'm actually really excited to see where it'll go since you're not just reposting canon.
I really do hope Oswald has been training his body just as much as his Devil Fruit or trying to figure out Haki. The Sea stone weights were a good start but if he plans to not only kill his family but get AWAY with it and do the "D" name proud he's gonna have to be pretty powerful.
Also I understand that he kinda hates his family but it'd be dumb to not take advantage of it. You're filthy rich hire combat tutors or something.
That said I really like the direction the story has gone. The start is really different from any One Piece fiction I've read and I'm actually really excited to see where it'll go since you're not just reposting canon.
3/16/2023 c2 WaterfallsFireflys
I need more of this. There are almost no fics like this and I hope it updates one day.
I need more of this. There are almost no fics like this and I hope it updates one day.
2/15/2023 c2 KingOfEmptyness
the start was good but the "sister" burden isn't cool although i don't know what you will do with her in the future
the start was good but the "sister" burden isn't cool although i don't know what you will do with her in the future
12/22/2022 c2 ZooFan
I’m glad I decided to read your whole story first before commenting about it because that D initial in a dragon family name weirded me out for a spilt second but your explanation totally makes sense for it. Also your original fruit is quite interesting I’m thinking it’s a zoan fruit for the sea devil himself and having the weakness of other devil fruit used since technically they stole from the sea devil is quite clever. I’m quite interested in the changes your character will have to this series at large, though I do wonder if anything after the date your character know of the story will surprise him while living in this world or does he get updated with each update
I’m glad I decided to read your whole story first before commenting about it because that D initial in a dragon family name weirded me out for a spilt second but your explanation totally makes sense for it. Also your original fruit is quite interesting I’m thinking it’s a zoan fruit for the sea devil himself and having the weakness of other devil fruit used since technically they stole from the sea devil is quite clever. I’m quite interested in the changes your character will have to this series at large, though I do wonder if anything after the date your character know of the story will surprise him while living in this world or does he get updated with each update
12/9/2022 c2 lordoftentacle
I love this fic not surprising as I love most of your fics, but damn it why do you update so slow! Good job on this fic, can't wait for the next chapter, respectfully go fuck yourself. Thank you!
I love this fic not surprising as I love most of your fics, but damn it why do you update so slow! Good job on this fic, can't wait for the next chapter, respectfully go fuck yourself. Thank you!
11/13/2022 c2 Guest
Once again we wait, and wait, and wait, until finally we have another great chapter. And then we once again wait, and wait, and wait, and wait, and wait, and wait some more
Once again we wait, and wait, and wait, until finally we have another great chapter. And then we once again wait, and wait, and wait, and wait, and wait, and wait some more
10/26/2022 c2
7Reichenfaust
Does this mean that the MC will be able to make a 'Susan'no' Gundam with his seastone generating ability?
Or his own ship?
This ability is f'n awesome, and may be even more broken than the Rad-Rad Fruit I came up with for the Garp-SI I'm writing!

Does this mean that the MC will be able to make a 'Susan'no' Gundam with his seastone generating ability?
Or his own ship?
This ability is f'n awesome, and may be even more broken than the Rad-Rad Fruit I came up with for the Garp-SI I'm writing!
10/10/2022 c2 Mistletainn
The chapter was pretty much a filler, but I'd take that over a longer lack of update any day. Looking forward to the eventual mass murder, hope it won't take too long...
Also, if your pooper is fragile, just poop on those that try to flame you. Preferably with a wet one :v
The chapter was pretty much a filler, but I'd take that over a longer lack of update any day. Looking forward to the eventual mass murder, hope it won't take too long...
Also, if your pooper is fragile, just poop on those that try to flame you. Preferably with a wet one :v