for Power, Freedom and a French Flower1/10 c101 Beba Alq
Incredible! Usually I’m not interested in Harry& Fleur pairing but this story was so catching.. great writing loved every single word in it bravo..
Incredible! Usually I’m not interested in Harry& Fleur pairing but this story was so catching.. great writing loved every single word in it bravo..
1/7 c14 
3alix33
You meant "discovery of Salazar's quarters" and "The latter's physical features had changed".
3alix33You meant "discovery of Salazar's quarters" and "The latter's physical features had changed".
1/7 c13 alix33
You meant "Maybe I can learn more", "study and personal chamber, similar", "his abuse at his relatives' hands", "your mother unwittingly performed", "from my potions kit and" and "McGonagall who assigned detention".
I like the prospect of Harry being trained by Salazar Slytherin's portrait.
And of Harry exposing Gilderoy Lockhart as a fraud.
You meant "Maybe I can learn more", "study and personal chamber, similar", "his abuse at his relatives' hands", "your mother unwittingly performed", "from my potions kit and" and "McGonagall who assigned detention".
I like the prospect of Harry being trained by Salazar Slytherin's portrait.
And of Harry exposing Gilderoy Lockhart as a fraud.
1/7 c12 alix33
You meant "with the serpent's sensitive nostrils" and "of the Marauders' and your legacy".
You meant "with the serpent's sensitive nostrils" and "of the Marauders' and your legacy".
1/7 c11 alix33
You meant "with a Daily Prophet article".
According to the dictionaries that Google gives search results from "antechamber" should be one word.
You meant "with a Daily Prophet article".
According to the dictionaries that Google gives search results from "antechamber" should be one word.
1/7 c10 alix33
You meant "Lockhart wholeheartedly agreed" and according to the dictionaries that Google gives search results from "wholeheartedly" should be one word.
You meant "a shield, which crumbled under", "and sent a hair removal charm", "Or not one I could identify" and "we're back".
According to the dictionaries that Google gives search results from "Worst-case" in "Worst-case scenario" needed a hyphen.
You meant "Lockhart wholeheartedly agreed" and according to the dictionaries that Google gives search results from "wholeheartedly" should be one word.
You meant "a shield, which crumbled under", "and sent a hair removal charm", "Or not one I could identify" and "we're back".
According to the dictionaries that Google gives search results from "Worst-case" in "Worst-case scenario" needed a hyphen.
1/7 c9 alix33
According to the dictionaries that Google gives search results from "dumbfounded" should be one word.
According to the dictionaries that Google gives search results from "dumbfounded" should be one word.
1/7 c8 alix33
AW at the thought of what a choir of house elves singing the birthday song would sound like.
You meant "Auch got desperate and sent a couple", "A section of it started forming" or "Sections of it started forming", "to remember his lessons much" and "by calling the Knight Bus".
I approve very much of Harry's note taking at the duelling Tournament.
AW at the thought of what a choir of house elves singing the birthday song would sound like.
You meant "Auch got desperate and sent a couple", "A section of it started forming" or "Sections of it started forming", "to remember his lessons much" and "by calling the Knight Bus".
I approve very much of Harry's note taking at the duelling Tournament.
1/6 c7 alix33
I approve of every syllable of Harry's letter to the Flamels.
You meant "48 hours at the Dursleysand "by an elf called Ricky".
I approve of every syllable of Harry's letter to the Flamels.
You meant "48 hours at the Dursleysand "by an elf called Ricky".
1/6 c6 alix33
Those first years spreading the rumours about Harry using dark magic to kill the troll should IMO go and get knotted.
You meant "charms, jinxes and curses".
Yay at Harry vowing to keep his invisibility cloak on him at all times from now on.
I love the mental pic I got of Harry's note taking from those books in the Restricted Section.
Those first years spreading the rumours about Harry using dark magic to kill the troll should IMO go and get knotted.
You meant "charms, jinxes and curses".
Yay at Harry vowing to keep his invisibility cloak on him at all times from now on.
I love the mental pic I got of Harry's note taking from those books in the Restricted Section.
1/6 c5 alix33
How many hundred students are there already at the four house tables? Because "100 hundredthat's written in the chapter) makes no sense.
You meant "learnt about his parents' death on".
How many hundred students are there already at the four house tables? Because "100 hundredthat's written in the chapter) makes no sense.
You meant "learnt about his parents' death on".
1/6 c4 alix33
You meant "to avoid nasty imcidents, in which",
Hey there, Hedwig! I am SO chuffed to make your acquaintance.
Yay! at Harry having hidden his Hogwarts letter.
You meant "all pupils' clothespupil's means that that belongs to only one pupil).
Yay at every book Harry bought during his first visit to Borgin and Burkes.
I love the mental pic I got of Harry's high-quality trunk.
I approve of Harry's intention to assume the worst of Dumbles.
I am SO chuffed that the getting Harry to trust him ship had already sailed for Dumbles.
You meant "to avoid nasty imcidents, in which",
Hey there, Hedwig! I am SO chuffed to make your acquaintance.
Yay! at Harry having hidden his Hogwarts letter.
You meant "all pupils' clothespupil's means that that belongs to only one pupil).
Yay at every book Harry bought during his first visit to Borgin and Burkes.
I love the mental pic I got of Harry's high-quality trunk.
I approve of Harry's intention to assume the worst of Dumbles.
I am SO chuffed that the getting Harry to trust him ship had already sailed for Dumbles.
1/6 c3 alix33
I like Harry's scheme to make money loads.
I approve of Harry having read The Hobbit.
Yay! at Harry having found The Leaky Cauldron.
Yay! at the interaction between Harry and the Potter account manager Ragnok and the other Gringotts goblins.
The redwood wood and elder wood are IMO very pretty kinds of wood, if the pics I saw after I googled are to be believed.
I approve of Harry's resentment of wizarding Britain.
What did Harry have for lunch and dessert at Florean Fortescue's Ice Cream Parlour?
Yay! at Harry having bought that pretty owl, his Leaky Cauldron dinner and his first ever Knight Bus trip.
I like Harry's scheme to make money loads.
I approve of Harry having read The Hobbit.
Yay! at Harry having found The Leaky Cauldron.
Yay! at the interaction between Harry and the Potter account manager Ragnok and the other Gringotts goblins.
The redwood wood and elder wood are IMO very pretty kinds of wood, if the pics I saw after I googled are to be believed.
I approve of Harry's resentment of wizarding Britain.
What did Harry have for lunch and dessert at Florean Fortescue's Ice Cream Parlour?
Yay! at Harry having bought that pretty owl, his Leaky Cauldron dinner and his first ever Knight Bus trip.
1/6 c2 alix33
I like Harry's scheme to make money loads.
I approve of Harry having read The Hobbit.
Yay! at Harry having found The Leaky Cauldron.
Yay! at the interaction between Harry and the Potter account manager Ragnok and the other Gringotts goblins.
I like Harry's scheme to make money loads.
I approve of Harry having read The Hobbit.
Yay! at Harry having found The Leaky Cauldron.
Yay! at the interaction between Harry and the Potter account manager Ragnok and the other Gringotts goblins.