for Power, Freedom and a French Flower5/13/2024 c102 Guest
This was one of my absolute favorite reads in a long time! You managed to capture romance and action and drama but never make it truly about one amazingly done!
This was one of my absolute favorite reads in a long time! You managed to capture romance and action and drama but never make it truly about one amazingly done!
5/12/2024 c23 Guest
1000 is too low a price same with 10000.
1000 is too low a price same with 10000.
5/10/2024 c10 moaning-myrtl3
I really couldn’t blame Harry if he decided to go Dark Lord at this point in the story.
I really couldn’t blame Harry if he decided to go Dark Lord at this point in the story.
5/10/2024 c7 moaning-myrtl3
Hermione sounds like a jealous bitch here lol. But i also think that she wouldn’t have befriended Ron after he was the one who teased and put her in the girl bathroom/troll situation in the first place. Despite her being a complete know-it-all and has a penchant to prove herself to others, I think you really jacked up on her characterization. However, if it was on purpose and for the purpose of trying to make it look like Harry’s actually turning into a supposed Dark Lord then i guess that’s ok.
Btw i found this story after reading Fairborn Adventures and i thought it was quite a decent and interesting read.
Hermione sounds like a jealous bitch here lol. But i also think that she wouldn’t have befriended Ron after he was the one who teased and put her in the girl bathroom/troll situation in the first place. Despite her being a complete know-it-all and has a penchant to prove herself to others, I think you really jacked up on her characterization. However, if it was on purpose and for the purpose of trying to make it look like Harry’s actually turning into a supposed Dark Lord then i guess that’s ok.
Btw i found this story after reading Fairborn Adventures and i thought it was quite a decent and interesting read.
5/9/2024 c5 gryphindoros
i misspoke you are right idk that height sounded so wrong to me i apologise author
i misspoke you are right idk that height sounded so wrong to me i apologise author
195/3/2024 c3 Guest
And now I'm imagining his wand looking like a waifer stick with a handle so thanks for that. I like this so far though I have a few complaints that might seem non existent to others.
And now I'm imagining his wand looking like a waifer stick with a handle so thanks for that. I like this so far though I have a few complaints that might seem non existent to others.
4/24/2024 c62 Guest
You consistently use AM and PM by reduntantly following each with in the morning or in the afternoon. I find that a bit distracting as it is a tiny flaw. Your story is excellent. Thanks
You consistently use AM and PM by reduntantly following each with in the morning or in the afternoon. I find that a bit distracting as it is a tiny flaw. Your story is excellent. Thanks
4/23/2024 c5 Zane Tam
The Dursleys were abusive in essentially every conceivable way towards Harry. He was beaten by Dudley, often on Vernon's orders, and sometimes by his uncle himself. He was often denied food, and was given the bare minimum to keep alive.
The Dursleys were abusive in essentially every conceivable way towards Harry. He was beaten by Dudley, often on Vernon's orders, and sometimes by his uncle himself. He was often denied food, and was given the bare minimum to keep alive.
4/22/2024 c51 Guest
These two cloaks were taken from their owners no less than ( no MORE than ) 48 hours ago. This one..." He held up the cloak in his right hand: "Was taken roughly a minute before the other one." Excellent story. Interesting plot.
These two cloaks were taken from their owners no less than ( no MORE than ) 48 hours ago. This one..." He held up the cloak in his right hand: "Was taken roughly a minute before the other one." Excellent story. Interesting plot.