for Power, Freedom and a French Flower4/18/2024 c7 Guest
Dear Nick. Sorry old chap. Your trinket was blasted to smithereens. It was for the greater good. Toodles, Al
Dear Nick. Sorry old chap. Your trinket was blasted to smithereens. It was for the greater good. Toodles, Al
4/16/2024 c5 Yikes
Was going to give the benefit of the doubt, because usually reviews that are around 1k-2k and over is automatically good in my book, but after finishing chapter 4 I find it odd that you forgot the snake (?) That harry talked to at the shop, read a few comments in the review and them mentioning you forgetting in some chapters makes me want to drop the series.
Was going to give the benefit of the doubt, because usually reviews that are around 1k-2k and over is automatically good in my book, but after finishing chapter 4 I find it odd that you forgot the snake (?) That harry talked to at the shop, read a few comments in the review and them mentioning you forgetting in some chapters makes me want to drop the series.
4/10/2024 c43 Wantaknow
how come no one stopped the minister from threatening harry? it sounded like he wanted harry dead. if it was my kid i would be calling miss bones or wizard duel, the minister is not above the law. so i Wantaknow
how come no one stopped the minister from threatening harry? it sounded like he wanted harry dead. if it was my kid i would be calling miss bones or wizard duel, the minister is not above the law. so i Wantaknow
4/9/2024 c72 Redreadred214
Yes!, ding dong the crazy witch is dead! Bravo! Thank you so very much. love it!
Yes!, ding dong the crazy witch is dead! Bravo! Thank you so very much. love it!
4/7/2024 c21 AnneMargaret64
I'm surprised you didn't make Luna best friends with Harry when he was in his second year of school because she was a Ravenclaw too
I'm surprised you didn't make Luna best friends with Harry when he was in his second year of school because she was a Ravenclaw too
4/7/2024 c17 DeiOlympi
Hey, little FYI, Apple didn't get into the phone business until they released the first iPhone on June 29th 2007. Back in 1993 they were still on their line of computers called the Macintosh.
Hey, little FYI, Apple didn't get into the phone business until they released the first iPhone on June 29th 2007. Back in 1993 they were still on their line of computers called the Macintosh.
4/6/2024 c1 xionice52
Just finished bingeing this after 4 days of intense reading. I absolutely loved it. If this fanfiction story was an emoji it’d be the 100 emoji. Excellent writing.
Just finished bingeing this after 4 days of intense reading. I absolutely loved it. If this fanfiction story was an emoji it’d be the 100 emoji. Excellent writing.
4/5/2024 c11 Dretnuh
Never undersrand that, like “Enough chit chat, poor Ginny’s life force is almost gone.” It’s like uhhhh yeah Tom I think realistically you’re best course of action would be to continue the chit chat so they have no time to act while Ginny slowly fades away….
Never undersrand that, like “Enough chit chat, poor Ginny’s life force is almost gone.” It’s like uhhhh yeah Tom I think realistically you’re best course of action would be to continue the chit chat so they have no time to act while Ginny slowly fades away….
4/5/2024 c8 Dretnuh
Why didn’t he come back for this snake after he is publicly exposed as a parselmouth?
Why didn’t he come back for this snake after he is publicly exposed as a parselmouth?
4/5/2024 c2 Dretnuh
Wait so the goblins didn’t even do a blood test or something? They were just like “he returned a goblin greeting he’s definitely a potter!” ?
Wait so the goblins didn’t even do a blood test or something? They were just like “he returned a goblin greeting he’s definitely a potter!” ?
4/5/2024 c2 Dretnuh
Ummm… Harry would be 10 in May of 1991 would he not….? His birthday is like July 31st and he was born in 1980… so yeahhh… he would definitely still be 10 here.
Ummm… Harry would be 10 in May of 1991 would he not….? His birthday is like July 31st and he was born in 1980… so yeahhh… he would definitely still be 10 here.
3/30/2024 c89 kittiekind
Did you forget that Harry read about unsupported flight in the parselbook of Herpo?
I agree with most of the comments, very good story, but it seems you forget what you have changed or written before.
You also need someone to fix spelling, incorrect word use, tenses, multiples, homophones, etc.
Maybe just check words that you are unfamiliar with in a dictionary.
Did you forget that Harry read about unsupported flight in the parselbook of Herpo?
I agree with most of the comments, very good story, but it seems you forget what you have changed or written before.
You also need someone to fix spelling, incorrect word use, tenses, multiples, homophones, etc.
Maybe just check words that you are unfamiliar with in a dictionary.
3/24/2024 c33 
3Missneonkst
how are tehy even supposed to be together!? for a whole 3 years, its just hot and cold, like and hate!
3Missneonksthow are tehy even supposed to be together!? for a whole 3 years, its just hot and cold, like and hate!
3/24/2024 c13 1MandoWalker
Wow hes such a little hero aint he. Like this is so pathetic how he saves everyone
1MandoWalkerWow hes such a little hero aint he. Like this is so pathetic how he saves everyone