for Power, Freedom and a French Flower11/25/2023 c19 
5BarbedCaress
You have nothing to apologize for.
It is a dueling competition.
Everyone is there by choice.
And only the water bubble at the end was likely lethal and even the because he lost focus.
Ps Trash talk and unbalancing your opponent's mind is part of it.
Don't like it?
Don't step on the platform.
5BarbedCaressYou have nothing to apologize for.
It is a dueling competition.
Everyone is there by choice.
And only the water bubble at the end was likely lethal and even the because he lost focus.
Ps Trash talk and unbalancing your opponent's mind is part of it.
Don't like it?
Don't step on the platform.
11/25/2023 c3 FrostyBehemoth
Finding a beginners guide to occlumency? Fucking really? just no, there's a reason almost no one knows about it, let alone kids his age. And it's just sitting in a book shop? really? It seems you've got no creative flare at all. because that's ridiculous. You literally CAN'T have anyone knowing it. And if it's in a book shop, EVERYONE WOULD. Fuckkkkk.
Finding a beginners guide to occlumency? Fucking really? just no, there's a reason almost no one knows about it, let alone kids his age. And it's just sitting in a book shop? really? It seems you've got no creative flare at all. because that's ridiculous. You literally CAN'T have anyone knowing it. And if it's in a book shop, EVERYONE WOULD. Fuckkkkk.
11/20/2023 c33 1Blapzapp
not a huge fan of fleur acting so toxic and making harry jealous intentionally to get back at him and he just accepts it like a lost puppy trying to win her back after ever time instead of a strong willed young man he was in the beginning of the story. Then showing her the ROR? its like showing your favorite fishing spot or relaxing special place to someone just to win them back, especially when they are emotionally abusive towards you
1Blapzappnot a huge fan of fleur acting so toxic and making harry jealous intentionally to get back at him and he just accepts it like a lost puppy trying to win her back after ever time instead of a strong willed young man he was in the beginning of the story. Then showing her the ROR? its like showing your favorite fishing spot or relaxing special place to someone just to win them back, especially when they are emotionally abusive towards you
11/20/2023 c17 LtKettch
If Dumbles knows about this summer job, he must be going through the roof. I was almost expecting him to walk in and drag Harry out by his ear.
Great work so far.
If Dumbles knows about this summer job, he must be going through the roof. I was almost expecting him to walk in and drag Harry out by his ear.
Great work so far.
11/19/2023 c33 gryphindoros
why would he show her the room she has been nothing but a cto him this makes literally no sense right here
why would he show her the room she has been nothing but a cto him this makes literally no sense right here
11/19/2023 c4 LtKettch
Great job with the story so far. Independent Harry stories are always fun. I like the twist you’ve added with his wand.
Poor foolish Albus, he worries about Harry’s similarities to Tom, but doesn’t see the large hand he has in their existence.
Great job with the story so far. Independent Harry stories are always fun. I like the twist you’ve added with his wand.
Poor foolish Albus, he worries about Harry’s similarities to Tom, but doesn’t see the large hand he has in their existence.
11/17/2023 c101 bobel1990
Love The Story from Front to Back , maybe when Fleur had her Princess Streak in Jest or for Real Idk it was a bit much for me .
Also with the "I am Fleur Delacour" was a bit meh.
Awesome Story from an Awesome Author
98/100!
I wantet to finish this before i continue with "Fairborn Adventures"
Gj Man
Love The Story from Front to Back , maybe when Fleur had her Princess Streak in Jest or for Real Idk it was a bit much for me .
Also with the "I am Fleur Delacour" was a bit meh.
Awesome Story from an Awesome Author
98/100!
I wantet to finish this before i continue with "Fairborn Adventures"
Gj Man
11/15/2023 c102 Kyuubi88
Ill be honest i wasnt sure about reading this story. How eber it turned out extremely well i truly enjoyed reading this it was an amazing story bravo on a great story!
Ill be honest i wasnt sure about reading this story. How eber it turned out extremely well i truly enjoyed reading this it was an amazing story bravo on a great story!
11/2/2023 c102 GhostnKC
having read the entire story in a few days I will say that I loved it. Normally I don't go with a Harry/Fluor pair but you made it absolutely perfect. I'm looking forward to reading more of your stories. Congratulations you earned a spot on my followed authors list.
having read the entire story in a few days I will say that I loved it. Normally I don't go with a Harry/Fluor pair but you made it absolutely perfect. I'm looking forward to reading more of your stories. Congratulations you earned a spot on my followed authors list.
10/31/2023 c19 GhostnKC
I k ow this story is complete but harry insulting fello competitors is a little off-putting. otherwise this is ine great story
I k ow this story is complete but harry insulting fello competitors is a little off-putting. otherwise this is ine great story
10/26/2023 c102 blwhpenguin
Thank you for this amazing story, I've been looking for something like this for a long time.
Thank you for this amazing story, I've been looking for something like this for a long time.
10/24/2023 c99 A. Swan
Help I can't read ch. 100! I click on it and it comes up blank!? Everything after comes up but the big Hogwarts battle is blank! I can't read on if the climax ch. Is missing. Other than a few errors here and there its a great story!
Help I can't read ch. 100! I click on it and it comes up blank!? Everything after comes up but the big Hogwarts battle is blank! I can't read on if the climax ch. Is missing. Other than a few errors here and there its a great story!