
9/12/2023 c43 stealacandy
McGonaggal didn't belittle Harry. She may have chastise, castigate or berate him. But no belittling was involved.
McGonaggal didn't belittle Harry. She may have chastise, castigate or berate him. But no belittling was involved.
9/12/2023 c99 stealacandy
That's "critics", not "criticizers".
Also, Harry's wand wasn't submitted by a stronger wand.
Possibly it _has_ submitted _to_ another wand.
Or it was - or has been - subjugated - by that other wand.
Or subjected. Or subordinated. Or supplanted. Or surpassed.
Or suborned. Or had its allegiance subverted.
Or it had been trounced, overcome and undone.
That's "critics", not "criticizers".
Also, Harry's wand wasn't submitted by a stronger wand.
Possibly it _has_ submitted _to_ another wand.
Or it was - or has been - subjugated - by that other wand.
Or subjected. Or subordinated. Or supplanted. Or surpassed.
Or suborned. Or had its allegiance subverted.
Or it had been trounced, overcome and undone.
9/9/2023 c102 Tomon
Amazing story, really liked how the Fleur stayed relevant and true partner through the whole story and how every developed.
Truly a captivating tale through and through and I'm very thankful for the opportunity to read it.
Amazing story, really liked how the Fleur stayed relevant and true partner through the whole story and how every developed.
Truly a captivating tale through and through and I'm very thankful for the opportunity to read it.
9/7/2023 c101
59EdTheBeast
An excellent story. A must read that has only a love from Harry to his French Flower. Do not think that anyone would say this is a bad story. Enough romance, adventure, and politics. Would like to know though if the Minister died or not, as he was not mentioned near the end.

An excellent story. A must read that has only a love from Harry to his French Flower. Do not think that anyone would say this is a bad story. Enough romance, adventure, and politics. Would like to know though if the Minister died or not, as he was not mentioned near the end.
9/5/2023 c53 EdTheBeast
Mistake here. If you are using that death, then they should have seen them when leaving last year, not arriving this year.
Mistake here. If you are using that death, then they should have seen them when leaving last year, not arriving this year.
8/31/2023 c93 santos.luis.contato
dude... You let them bite Sirius? now what? He will turn into a werewolf? or there is some plot that will let hom merge his animagus form with the werewolf?
dude... You let them bite Sirius? now what? He will turn into a werewolf? or there is some plot that will let hom merge his animagus form with the werewolf?
8/29/2023 c78 santos.luis.contato
uninjured hand? when did Dumbledore injured his hand? in Canon, this time he already got the ring and the curse, but here, that's not the case...
uninjured hand? when did Dumbledore injured his hand? in Canon, this time he already got the ring and the curse, but here, that's not the case...
8/27/2023 c49 santos.luis.contato
dude... Harry dont have the tracking spell of underage use of magic anymore... How the hell would they know he used magic there? this is your weak plot here author...
dude... Harry dont have the tracking spell of underage use of magic anymore... How the hell would they know he used magic there? this is your weak plot here author...
8/27/2023 c41 santos.luis.contato
I dont get why made all of them disappear at the same time ... what id the caster throw another killing curse? he will have to cast the dragonfly again...
I dont get why made all of them disappear at the same time ... what id the caster throw another killing curse? he will have to cast the dragonfly again...