for Power, Freedom and a French Flower10/19/2021 c8 Guest
Other than the fact that there are a lot of grammatical mistakes and some other mistakes like wrong dates ,this was an okay chapter.
Other than the fact that there are a lot of grammatical mistakes and some other mistakes like wrong dates ,this was an okay chapter.
10/21/2021 c10 
30Sparky She-Demon
I wish I could say that I was surprised that they continued with this foolishness. Are there Howlers in the future for Neville and Ron? Both of them certainly deserve it.
And maybe Harry could let Hermione's condition slip? That would make her life particularly difficult don't you think?
30Sparky She-DemonI wish I could say that I was surprised that they continued with this foolishness. Are there Howlers in the future for Neville and Ron? Both of them certainly deserve it.
And maybe Harry could let Hermione's condition slip? That would make her life particularly difficult don't you think?
10/19/2021 c7 Guest
Well that crude attempt at extortion turned out well.
Well that crude attempt at extortion turned out well.
10/20/2021 c9 30Sparky She-Demon
Looking forward to seeing what happens next? I wonder if Ron and Hermione are going to try and break into Ravenclaw?
30Sparky She-DemonLooking forward to seeing what happens next? I wonder if Ron and Hermione are going to try and break into Ravenclaw?
10/20/2021 c9 Bloodblossomz
the confrontation with the slythering seem really forced to me, the ministry handles owls and newts, so it doesnt rven matter if Quirrell was alive or not.
the confrontation with the slythering seem really forced to me, the ministry handles owls and newts, so it doesnt rven matter if Quirrell was alive or not.
10/20/2021 c9 1SiriusOrionBitch
Another great chapter! Still flows well and was a giod read! Well done! Take care,
SOB
1SiriusOrionBitchAnother great chapter! Still flows well and was a giod read! Well done! Take care,
SOB
10/18/2021 c5 Guest
Good chapter but be careful you crossed the line from snape being a bitter ass to being mentally unstable and nearly deranged.
Good chapter but be careful you crossed the line from snape being a bitter ass to being mentally unstable and nearly deranged.
10/18/2021 c4 Guest
Set up over, on to Hogwarts. Could do with a beta to proofread but overall good story so far.
Set up over, on to Hogwarts. Could do with a beta to proofread but overall good story so far.
10/19/2021 c8 3ANUBIS the god king
Nice job on the ch it's great as the the rest of them are keep up the good work and if you get stuck and need a little help with a ch I'd love to help
3ANUBIS the god kingNice job on the ch it's great as the the rest of them are keep up the good work and if you get stuck and need a little help with a ch I'd love to help