for Power, Freedom and a French Flower11/2/2021 c21 Ms-Fleur
Mate, I love that you update daily, keep this up, you will get more subscribers and reviews. I will personally take the time to write a comment.
I enjoyed the chapter and liked how Harry used the magical oath as pretty much every fic, Harry disregards it. Also, next time anyone questions Harry, he should say it is family secret which it would be as no one can use the spell, apart from him and maybe Voldermort.
I like how this Harry was smart to question Sirus and made a plan. Yes, he can do the spell right now, but this way, Harry can find out everything about his enemies and then catch Pettigrew in the hall, front of everyone and Fudge won't be able to sweep this under the rug.
But Harry should make connections and also, maybe he should use this a opportunity to get the press on his side, I can imagine they want to interview him so, maybe, he used to apologise to the Delacours as he mentioned before. This can give him the opportunity to start a fresh with them at the next duelling tournment.
Mate, I love that you update daily, keep this up, you will get more subscribers and reviews. I will personally take the time to write a comment.
I enjoyed the chapter and liked how Harry used the magical oath as pretty much every fic, Harry disregards it. Also, next time anyone questions Harry, he should say it is family secret which it would be as no one can use the spell, apart from him and maybe Voldermort.
I like how this Harry was smart to question Sirus and made a plan. Yes, he can do the spell right now, but this way, Harry can find out everything about his enemies and then catch Pettigrew in the hall, front of everyone and Fudge won't be able to sweep this under the rug.
But Harry should make connections and also, maybe he should use this a opportunity to get the press on his side, I can imagine they want to interview him so, maybe, he used to apologise to the Delacours as he mentioned before. This can give him the opportunity to start a fresh with them at the next duelling tournment.
11/2/2021 c21 
2Riyu the dragon
You're the best. Really, your fast upgrades are just awesome. As is the story. Keep going!
2Riyu the dragonYou're the best. Really, your fast upgrades are just awesome. As is the story. Keep going!
11/2/2021 c16 Batros940
Considering how the sacrifices for the rituals have been harmless I don't see why Harry doesn't tell Albus that he used the eyes of the basilisk to improve his eyesight. Or that the other ingredients are easy harmless and easy to get with enough money. Basically that Harry isn't killing anything to get the rituals done.
Considering how the sacrifices for the rituals have been harmless I don't see why Harry doesn't tell Albus that he used the eyes of the basilisk to improve his eyesight. Or that the other ingredients are easy harmless and easy to get with enough money. Basically that Harry isn't killing anything to get the rituals done.
11/2/2021 c20 jslee102
Great to see him use the new spell, I wonder at how all these people in the compartment will feel about him after saving them, but also feeling all the negative feeling he put into the spell.
I'm still not sure what to think about the dueling tournament. I think I'm wishing his Occulumency would give him more control over his emotions as he seems to show his cards a little much. My imagining of his character had him showing as little as possible of his abilities while winning and his cockiness detracts from that. I may be merging his character with other stories I read, so if I have the wrong feel, let me know.
Great to see him use the new spell, I wonder at how all these people in the compartment will feel about him after saving them, but also feeling all the negative feeling he put into the spell.
I'm still not sure what to think about the dueling tournament. I think I'm wishing his Occulumency would give him more control over his emotions as he seems to show his cards a little much. My imagining of his character had him showing as little as possible of his abilities while winning and his cockiness detracts from that. I may be merging his character with other stories I read, so if I have the wrong feel, let me know.
11/1/2021 c20 3Ordinarily Prudent
Achieve not archive is the word you were looking for. You can use a beta or give it a second read before publishing.
3Ordinarily PrudentAchieve not archive is the word you were looking for. You can use a beta or give it a second read before publishing.
11/1/2021 c20 Saknght
To hell with the haters, this story is dope. Follow your muse because every chapter is incredibly entertaining.
To hell with the haters, this story is dope. Follow your muse because every chapter is incredibly entertaining.
11/1/2021 c20 2lostxinxthexdarkness
Great chapter, I’m excited to see how things play out from where this chapter left off!
Keep up the great work!
2lostxinxthexdarknessGreat chapter, I’m excited to see how things play out from where this chapter left off!
Keep up the great work!
11/1/2021 c20 Smutley Do-Wrong
And cliffie end of chapter.
There was a hand protruding from the cloak, and it was glistening, grayish, slimy-looking, and scabbed ... As though the creature beneath the cloak sensed Harry's gaze, the hand was suddenly withdrawn into the folds of its black cloak, embarrassed...from heartbreak of dementor psoriasis.
those Veela, Harry. They might be insanely beautiful but also very proud and feisty. Great lovers too!" he grinned.
Yep. After sex with a Veela witch, sex with non Veela is like a mere hug shaking hands in comparison.
Another canon JKR creature Fleur.
Consider some day, the opportunities available by having human Veela witches, tropes and reconciliation with canon creature "propaganda" add props and filler and ideas like snowflakes in a blizzard.
Surely there's snowflake lifespan in lava, for how long Peter will stay under radar, unlike the many fanfics which ride canon rails thru much of year 3.
And cliffie end of chapter.
There was a hand protruding from the cloak, and it was glistening, grayish, slimy-looking, and scabbed ... As though the creature beneath the cloak sensed Harry's gaze, the hand was suddenly withdrawn into the folds of its black cloak, embarrassed...from heartbreak of dementor psoriasis.
those Veela, Harry. They might be insanely beautiful but also very proud and feisty. Great lovers too!" he grinned.
Yep. After sex with a Veela witch, sex with non Veela is like a mere hug shaking hands in comparison.
Another canon JKR creature Fleur.
Consider some day, the opportunities available by having human Veela witches, tropes and reconciliation with canon creature "propaganda" add props and filler and ideas like snowflakes in a blizzard.
Surely there's snowflake lifespan in lava, for how long Peter will stay under radar, unlike the many fanfics which ride canon rails thru much of year 3.
11/1/2021 c20 rashid.asifur
Another great chapter! I liked seeing Harry's heroic side in this chapter, especially after how he acted during the tournament. As always, I am eager to find out what happens next!
Another great chapter! I liked seeing Harry's heroic side in this chapter, especially after how he acted during the tournament. As always, I am eager to find out what happens next!
11/1/2021 c20 0DINS0N
I still think that Fleur was partially responsible. Honestly i'm especially surprised that the Prophet isn't labelling her as some Dark Creature that tried to kill Britains BWL.
I still think that Fleur was partially responsible. Honestly i'm especially surprised that the Prophet isn't labelling her as some Dark Creature that tried to kill Britains BWL.
11/1/2021 c20 SKFF
Glad to see Harry socialise a bit more.
Hopefully this might help to temper some of his more violent characteristics long term, not completely though.
Keen to see if the spell works, and what questions will come if it does…
Glad to see Harry socialise a bit more.
Hopefully this might help to temper some of his more violent characteristics long term, not completely though.
Keen to see if the spell works, and what questions will come if it does…
11/1/2021 c20 30Sparky She-Demon
Why is it that Harry is the only one getting into trouble? Fleur threw a fireball at him after the duel was done. Shouldn't she be getting into trouble as well?
On another note, glad to see Harry socializing a little.
30Sparky She-DemonWhy is it that Harry is the only one getting into trouble? Fleur threw a fireball at him after the duel was done. Shouldn't she be getting into trouble as well?
On another note, glad to see Harry socializing a little.