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10/18/2021 c5 Guest
Good chapter but be careful you crossed the line from snape being a bitter ass to being mentally unstable and nearly deranged.
10/18/2021 c4 Guest
Set up over, on to Hogwarts. Could do with a beta to proofread but overall good story so far.
10/20/2021 c8 Jacob Fritzsching
Please update your story soon!
10/20/2021 c8 1SiriusOrionBitch
Great read, cant wait for more! Take care,

SOB
10/19/2021 c8 30Sparky She-Demon
Loving this story so far!
10/19/2021 c8 3ANUBIS the god king
Nice job on the ch it's great as the the rest of them are keep up the good work and if you get stuck and need a little help with a ch I'd love to help
10/19/2021 c8 Jiuubi
amazing chapter continue
10/19/2021 c8 28Kairan1979
Glad to see Dobby didn't get Harry in trouble, though I imagine there's going to be a talk with Dumbledore about his absense.
10/19/2021 c8 beatshield
great story so far
10/19/2021 c8 Byvavavoom
nice chapter
10/19/2021 c7 Azathriel
I like the story, but please get a beta or a better one.
10/18/2021 c7 Kairan1979
I wonder if Dobby will try to bother Harry while he is at Flamels' home.
P.S. Hermione is hopeless.
10/18/2021 c6 3ANUBIS the god king
Your story is amazing so far I really enjoy your work with the wand and how you have portrayed harry it's incredibly well done I hope to see more of your work . I would also enjoy if you would give my collaboration story a look it's called (the journey of the heart) I would love a review from you on what me and my writing partner has so far . And just maybe we can learn a thing or two from each other's work
10/18/2021 c6 PrimeSpectre
Thanks for the chapter ! And what is your update schedule ?
10/17/2021 c6 28Kairan1979
And Hermione didn't even try to befriend Harry after he saved her?
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