for Power, Freedom and a French Flower
110/18 c102 darthkratos24
You know I've had my odd moments with this story. I've seen a few flaws but I got to admit... This is a good story. Thank you for the enjoyable read
You know I've had my odd moments with this story. I've seen a few flaws but I got to admit... This is a good story. Thank you for the enjoyable read
10/16 c41 darthkratos24
Really that's how it goes? You have harry notices the no doubt stronger compulsion spell on the locket but for some reason he doesn't recognise the one on the cup because he suddenly became stupid and forgot that he was being guided to win?
Really that's how it goes? You have harry notices the no doubt stronger compulsion spell on the locket but for some reason he doesn't recognise the one on the cup because he suddenly became stupid and forgot that he was being guided to win?
10/15 c36 darthkratos24
So far I stand corrected, and it seems you even poked fun of the trope I pointed out that was a fun surprise
So far I stand corrected, and it seems you even poked fun of the trope I pointed out that was a fun surprise
10/15 c32 darthkratos24
Ah! There it is I was wondering when the pointless drama would pop up that would "break" apart the two only for them to suddenly get over it in a few chapters? I wonder if they'll also be dumb ass phase where they "date" other people to make one jealous or something just as ridiculously pointless.
Ah! There it is I was wondering when the pointless drama would pop up that would "break" apart the two only for them to suddenly get over it in a few chapters? I wonder if they'll also be dumb ass phase where they "date" other people to make one jealous or something just as ridiculously pointless.
10/14 c15 darthkratos24
I mean you got the Room of Requirements completely wrong but it's admirable you tried at least explaining it though I'm pretty sure you didn't need to try making something up about it as it's rather self explained in the other name "room of lost things" is probably where it gets it's stuff from as a lots gotten lost over the hundreds maybe thousands of years
I mean you got the Room of Requirements completely wrong but it's admirable you tried at least explaining it though I'm pretty sure you didn't need to try making something up about it as it's rather self explained in the other name "room of lost things" is probably where it gets it's stuff from as a lots gotten lost over the hundreds maybe thousands of years
10/14 c102 BorisCresnov
Amazing story! Love it! Love the happy ending for Harry and Fluer. It's a nice change to the fanfics that have dark or sad endings for the couple.
Amazing story! Love it! Love the happy ending for Harry and Fluer. It's a nice change to the fanfics that have dark or sad endings for the couple.
10/13 c5 darthkratos24
There's a lot wrong here but the one that really really stands out is... Why the hell is Albus asking about why an 11 year old girl is in the bathroom? Oh I don't know Albus maybe she's peeing you damn pedo
There's a lot wrong here but the one that really really stands out is... Why the hell is Albus asking about why an 11 year old girl is in the bathroom? Oh I don't know Albus maybe she's peeing you damn pedo