for Power, Freedom and a French Flower9/26 c2 
1Darknessdawns
Again I was left curious about things. Why didn't the Department of Education workers remove Harry from the Dursley's? With the amount of long term abuse present it didn't really make sense. Didn't they have the police check his living situation? No one would leave a child to sleep in a cupboard. I think this might need a bit more explanation since it just looks like they left Harry to the abuse. Maybe it's due to a ward or something? Magical interference?
Anyway, just ignore my nitpicking. I'm curious to see where this goes.
1DarknessdawnsAgain I was left curious about things. Why didn't the Department of Education workers remove Harry from the Dursley's? With the amount of long term abuse present it didn't really make sense. Didn't they have the police check his living situation? No one would leave a child to sleep in a cupboard. I think this might need a bit more explanation since it just looks like they left Harry to the abuse. Maybe it's due to a ward or something? Magical interference?
Anyway, just ignore my nitpicking. I'm curious to see where this goes.
9/26 c1 Darknessdawns
Department of Education? I would have never believed that was the name of the department that looked over child welfare if I hadn't done a Google search.
Department of Education? I would have never believed that was the name of the department that looked over child welfare if I hadn't done a Google search.
9/13 c19 12stealacandy
I think you may have meant "brutally subduing", not "submitting".
Also, the spell is "Sonorus", not "soronus".
12stealacandyI think you may have meant "brutally subduing", not "submitting".
Also, the spell is "Sonorus", not "soronus".
9/12 c43 stealacandy
McGonaggal didn't belittle Harry. She may have chastise, castigate or berate him. But no belittling was involved.
McGonaggal didn't belittle Harry. She may have chastise, castigate or berate him. But no belittling was involved.
9/12 c99 stealacandy
That's "critics", not "criticizers".
Also, Harry's wand wasn't submitted by a stronger wand.
Possibly it _has_ submitted _to_ another wand.
Or it was - or has been - subjugated - by that other wand.
Or subjected. Or subordinated. Or supplanted. Or surpassed.
Or suborned. Or had its allegiance subverted.
Or it had been trounced, overcome and undone.
That's "critics", not "criticizers".
Also, Harry's wand wasn't submitted by a stronger wand.
Possibly it _has_ submitted _to_ another wand.
Or it was - or has been - subjugated - by that other wand.
Or subjected. Or subordinated. Or supplanted. Or surpassed.
Or suborned. Or had its allegiance subverted.
Or it had been trounced, overcome and undone.
9/9 c102 Tomon
Amazing story, really liked how the Fleur stayed relevant and true partner through the whole story and how every developed.
Truly a captivating tale through and through and I'm very thankful for the opportunity to read it.
Amazing story, really liked how the Fleur stayed relevant and true partner through the whole story and how every developed.
Truly a captivating tale through and through and I'm very thankful for the opportunity to read it.
9/7 c101 52EdTheBeast
An excellent story. A must read that has only a love from Harry to his French Flower. Do not think that anyone would say this is a bad story. Enough romance, adventure, and politics. Would like to know though if the Minister died or not, as he was not mentioned near the end.
52EdTheBeastAn excellent story. A must read that has only a love from Harry to his French Flower. Do not think that anyone would say this is a bad story. Enough romance, adventure, and politics. Would like to know though if the Minister died or not, as he was not mentioned near the end.
9/5 c53 EdTheBeast
Mistake here. If you are using that death, then they should have seen them when leaving last year, not arriving this year.
Mistake here. If you are using that death, then they should have seen them when leaving last year, not arriving this year.
8/31 c93 santos.luis.contato
dude... You let them bite Sirius? now what? He will turn into a werewolf? or there is some plot that will let hom merge his animagus form with the werewolf?
dude... You let them bite Sirius? now what? He will turn into a werewolf? or there is some plot that will let hom merge his animagus form with the werewolf?