for Power, Freedom and a French Flower8/29 c78 santos.luis.contato
uninjured hand? when did Dumbledore injured his hand? in Canon, this time he already got the ring and the curse, but here, that's not the case...
uninjured hand? when did Dumbledore injured his hand? in Canon, this time he already got the ring and the curse, but here, that's not the case...
8/27 c49 santos.luis.contato
dude... Harry dont have the tracking spell of underage use of magic anymore... How the hell would they know he used magic there? this is your weak plot here author...
dude... Harry dont have the tracking spell of underage use of magic anymore... How the hell would they know he used magic there? this is your weak plot here author...
8/27 c41 santos.luis.contato
I dont get why made all of them disappear at the same time ... what id the caster throw another killing curse? he will have to cast the dragonfly again...
I dont get why made all of them disappear at the same time ... what id the caster throw another killing curse? he will have to cast the dragonfly again...
8/25 c24 santos.luis.contato
I dont really think the timeline is right... all of Sirius action, occur in only a month? only in September of 1993?
and talking about the duel... The whole championship was oversee by Frenchs? No one thought that maybe, they will be baised about their own champs? and why Harry keeps talking about his spells against Fleur (that was only water) and no one is taking action about her firing a dangerous fire spell that could have killed him? this is completely bulshit...
I dont really think the timeline is right... all of Sirius action, occur in only a month? only in September of 1993?
and talking about the duel... The whole championship was oversee by Frenchs? No one thought that maybe, they will be baised about their own champs? and why Harry keeps talking about his spells against Fleur (that was only water) and no one is taking action about her firing a dangerous fire spell that could have killed him? this is completely bulshit...
8/25 c20 santos.luis.contato
I still dont get why he was disqualified if it was her that shot him the foreball after he won the duel by summoning her wand... this is so bulshit...
I still dont get why he was disqualified if it was her that shot him the foreball after he won the duel by summoning her wand... this is so bulshit...
8/24 c9 santos.luis.contato
it was clearly stated that he was under the cloak... And then: Poof, he isnt anymore, just to make everyone see him there... Plot...
it was clearly stated that he was under the cloak... And then: Poof, he isnt anymore, just to make everyone see him there... Plot...
8/15 c22 
5TheFlowerOfTheCourt
You had Harry “train” by emptying out his “magical core” repeatedly, yet he blacks out from one spell even though he never blacked out before from running out of magic?
5TheFlowerOfTheCourtYou had Harry “train” by emptying out his “magical core” repeatedly, yet he blacks out from one spell even though he never blacked out before from running out of magic?
8/10 c28 rageouss
if there's anything I get from this is.. please can some of these idiots get a gun or something? I know it's dumb mentioning it in HP fics but cmon man
'Harry managed to roll out of the way of another killing curse, but there was no way he could dodge the dark purple cutting curse being sent his way by the tallest of his opponents.'
imagine if harry had a glock with runes and enchantments on it, the dude could walk up to voldemort and smoke his ass.
if there's anything I get from this is.. please can some of these idiots get a gun or something? I know it's dumb mentioning it in HP fics but cmon man
'Harry managed to roll out of the way of another killing curse, but there was no way he could dodge the dark purple cutting curse being sent his way by the tallest of his opponents.'
imagine if harry had a glock with runes and enchantments on it, the dude could walk up to voldemort and smoke his ass.
7/27 c4 Retarded
lol half the population believes in blood purity but he couldn't find anything to support it? They're just all collectively stupid and deluded? How dumb and dull, wish one writer wouldn't be such a moron and write yet another tired story about the same completely impossible bullshit.
lol half the population believes in blood purity but he couldn't find anything to support it? They're just all collectively stupid and deluded? How dumb and dull, wish one writer wouldn't be such a moron and write yet another tired story about the same completely impossible bullshit.
7/27 c102 Lukoshi
Thank you so much for this fantastic story. It's been everything I've looked for in a Flowerpot ship and the actual tale and Harry's character were so fantastically done. Cheers and my recommendations!
Thank you so much for this fantastic story. It's been everything I've looked for in a Flowerpot ship and the actual tale and Harry's character were so fantastically done. Cheers and my recommendations!