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8/8 c62 19nagiten
he didnt read the letter? and will he remember the mirrors or use kreacher if he get the canon memory or will tom use fleur?
8/8 c61 nagiten
oh boy
dont lie to her you fool ohh god oh you broodying fool over dramatic cocky nearsight fool you dont have to go it doesnt harry just stop the scar with a fang? i mean if the scar where the thing is it simple.
8/8 c60 nagiten
oh harry you survive you know this you have seen it...
i would of made harry just be a black horse... the closet thing to threstral one could get without been a magical animagus , what with the theory ones partonus is ones animagus but this is nice useful.
8/8 c59 nagiten
hmm nice
gee your a fool harry twice now you have seen Animagus on the map yet you dont expect that? and you call yourself smart harry... think boy think, you know others can became such, you should expect that even when it not the case.
8/8 c58 nagiten
ohh that was close
harry my boy you got Sloopy and cocky
8/8 c57 nagiten
so weasley granger and longbottom think themselves able to teach others? oh poor diluted fools
harry you should have paid more attention to what you were writing on never let your mind wanderer never stop paying attention to your surroundings when an enemy is near. no matter what you think of them you got cocky harry
8/8 c56 nagiten
oh boy here we go
umm they are a topic for discussion she said she was fully qualified to be such you need O's in owls and newts.. so she brought it up it could be said she made the topic open.
8/8 c54 nagiten
oh boy dig a deeper hole why dont you umbridge.
who will attack students' kids? rapists serial killers werewolfs vampires giants dementors dark wizard human traffickers slavers magical hating muggles...a lot is out there hell in hogwart teachers and other students the whimping willow and other fauna would attack them and other creatures in the forest...hell peeves would attack them.
Umbridge realizes fleur father is powerful right? has the ear of the French minister right? all harry would have to do is tell said man, then propose to fleur and she would be future lady of houses potter Peverell black Slytherin
8/8 c53 nagiten
interesting
he didnt use the winnings for the joke shop like he did in canon he invested and saved it since he couldn't use the thousand so ''wastefully' since he is on the poorer side of rich. i see no reason she had to take a leap of faith and make harry prefect? every time he broke rules it was in the end for the safety of all.. a stronger smarter harry means more people live longer. and he saved everyone ass yearly...more so then he did in canon. which he should of bene made prefect cause ron? really? sure book ron is slightly better but he is also worse at times.
8/8 c52 nagiten
nice and why doesnt fleur just move in to grimuald?
and granger your boyfriend was a known attempted rapist and possible actually one an attempted serial killer. a dark wizard who would have raped you, you ruined your own chances of prefect for doing the Polyjuice stunt. so you ruined your own future and it wasn't your spot...he earned the academics, they aren't yours just because you think only you can be smart. harry didnt spend thousand galleons on the twins he spend 250. he didnt give them the prize money in this story.
8/8 c50 nagiten
nice.
harry just let them railroad him he was to meek and weak and naive i mean year after year the adults let him down yet he still trust them? he comes from an abused background yet trust so easily and so quickly? i'm sorry but after second year at best i would if I was harry not trust easily or be so quick to submit and bend over

also isnt it improper use not misuse?
8/7 c44 nagiten
surpised harry didnt do an oath to make people see tommy was back or declare he would submit to truth serum. dumbledore realizes he made an empty threat right? if he kills harry if dumbledore see harry doing something he doesnt agree with or like...he's dooming everyone.
8/7 c43 nagiten
interesting
dumbledore you let a death eater teach for years you allowed one to come with his own army and still didnt know one of your oldest friends was not your friend ...
8/7 c42 nagiten
well that was fun.
why didnt he run after casting his two cursed fires? he could of got out sooner if he did so but he just stood there.
8/7 c38 nagiten
oh that might have sparked a evne greater flame in harry
didnt flitwick give harry his mother journal in his first year?
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