for Power, Freedom and a French Flower8/21/2024 c102 Obsidian09
Fantastic! I love this fic. There are a few things that feel unnecessary since you never used them again, like Harry's animagus form but overall this story is really, really good. Thank you so much for writing it.
PS: I don't know if you'll read this review but you should mark the fic as completed, at first I didn't know whether to read it or not since it was so many chapters and I didn't know if it was unfinished.
Fantastic! I love this fic. There are a few things that feel unnecessary since you never used them again, like Harry's animagus form but overall this story is really, really good. Thank you so much for writing it.
PS: I don't know if you'll read this review but you should mark the fic as completed, at first I didn't know whether to read it or not since it was so many chapters and I didn't know if it was unfinished.
8/14/2024 c73 one eyed gamer
This is so awesome so far. I am 3njoying this one way too much But Great story so far
This is so awesome so far. I am 3njoying this one way too much But Great story so far
8/8/2024 c68 
19nagiten
hmm interesting
so harry hasn't bothered to talk to the younger kids about their hands? that seems kinda of cold and heartless.. i mean he talks to them he learns about the blood quils.
19nagitenhmm interesting
so harry hasn't bothered to talk to the younger kids about their hands? that seems kinda of cold and heartless.. i mean he talks to them he learns about the blood quils.
8/8/2024 c63 nagiten
oh william you want another chewing out by harry? you encroach on his domain again..you will get burned...and it might not even be harry that does the burning.
shouldnt they be newt results not owls? hasnt he already done potions for most of the year by this point?
oh william you want another chewing out by harry? you encroach on his domain again..you will get burned...and it might not even be harry that does the burning.
shouldnt they be newt results not owls? hasnt he already done potions for most of the year by this point?
8/8/2024 c62 nagiten
he didnt read the letter? and will he remember the mirrors or use kreacher if he get the canon memory or will tom use fleur?
he didnt read the letter? and will he remember the mirrors or use kreacher if he get the canon memory or will tom use fleur?
8/8/2024 c61 nagiten
oh boy
dont lie to her you fool ohh god oh you broodying fool over dramatic cocky nearsight fool you dont have to go it doesnt harry just stop the scar with a fang? i mean if the scar where the thing is it simple.
oh boy
dont lie to her you fool ohh god oh you broodying fool over dramatic cocky nearsight fool you dont have to go it doesnt harry just stop the scar with a fang? i mean if the scar where the thing is it simple.
8/8/2024 c60 nagiten
oh harry you survive you know this you have seen it...
i would of made harry just be a black horse... the closet thing to threstral one could get without been a magical animagus , what with the theory ones partonus is ones animagus but this is nice useful.
oh harry you survive you know this you have seen it...
i would of made harry just be a black horse... the closet thing to threstral one could get without been a magical animagus , what with the theory ones partonus is ones animagus but this is nice useful.
8/8/2024 c59 nagiten
hmm nice
gee your a fool harry twice now you have seen Animagus on the map yet you dont expect that? and you call yourself smart harry... think boy think, you know others can became such, you should expect that even when it not the case.
hmm nice
gee your a fool harry twice now you have seen Animagus on the map yet you dont expect that? and you call yourself smart harry... think boy think, you know others can became such, you should expect that even when it not the case.
8/8/2024 c57 nagiten
so weasley granger and longbottom think themselves able to teach others? oh poor diluted fools
harry you should have paid more attention to what you were writing on never let your mind wanderer never stop paying attention to your surroundings when an enemy is near. no matter what you think of them you got cocky harry
so weasley granger and longbottom think themselves able to teach others? oh poor diluted fools
harry you should have paid more attention to what you were writing on never let your mind wanderer never stop paying attention to your surroundings when an enemy is near. no matter what you think of them you got cocky harry
8/8/2024 c56 nagiten
oh boy here we go
umm they are a topic for discussion she said she was fully qualified to be such you need O's in owls and newts.. so she brought it up it could be said she made the topic open.
oh boy here we go
umm they are a topic for discussion she said she was fully qualified to be such you need O's in owls and newts.. so she brought it up it could be said she made the topic open.
8/8/2024 c54 nagiten
oh boy dig a deeper hole why dont you umbridge.
who will attack students' kids? rapists serial killers werewolfs vampires giants dementors dark wizard human traffickers slavers magical hating muggles...a lot is out there hell in hogwart teachers and other students the whimping willow and other fauna would attack them and other creatures in the forest...hell peeves would attack them.
Umbridge realizes fleur father is powerful right? has the ear of the French minister right? all harry would have to do is tell said man, then propose to fleur and she would be future lady of houses potter Peverell black Slytherin
oh boy dig a deeper hole why dont you umbridge.
who will attack students' kids? rapists serial killers werewolfs vampires giants dementors dark wizard human traffickers slavers magical hating muggles...a lot is out there hell in hogwart teachers and other students the whimping willow and other fauna would attack them and other creatures in the forest...hell peeves would attack them.
Umbridge realizes fleur father is powerful right? has the ear of the French minister right? all harry would have to do is tell said man, then propose to fleur and she would be future lady of houses potter Peverell black Slytherin
8/8/2024 c53 nagiten
interesting
he didnt use the winnings for the joke shop like he did in canon he invested and saved it since he couldn't use the thousand so ''wastefully' since he is on the poorer side of rich. i see no reason she had to take a leap of faith and make harry prefect? every time he broke rules it was in the end for the safety of all.. a stronger smarter harry means more people live longer. and he saved everyone ass yearly...more so then he did in canon. which he should of bene made prefect cause ron? really? sure book ron is slightly better but he is also worse at times.
interesting
he didnt use the winnings for the joke shop like he did in canon he invested and saved it since he couldn't use the thousand so ''wastefully' since he is on the poorer side of rich. i see no reason she had to take a leap of faith and make harry prefect? every time he broke rules it was in the end for the safety of all.. a stronger smarter harry means more people live longer. and he saved everyone ass yearly...more so then he did in canon. which he should of bene made prefect cause ron? really? sure book ron is slightly better but he is also worse at times.
8/8/2024 c52 nagiten
nice and why doesnt fleur just move in to grimuald?
and granger your boyfriend was a known attempted rapist and possible actually one an attempted serial killer. a dark wizard who would have raped you, you ruined your own chances of prefect for doing the Polyjuice stunt. so you ruined your own future and it wasn't your spot...he earned the academics, they aren't yours just because you think only you can be smart. harry didnt spend thousand galleons on the twins he spend 250. he didnt give them the prize money in this story.
nice and why doesnt fleur just move in to grimuald?
and granger your boyfriend was a known attempted rapist and possible actually one an attempted serial killer. a dark wizard who would have raped you, you ruined your own chances of prefect for doing the Polyjuice stunt. so you ruined your own future and it wasn't your spot...he earned the academics, they aren't yours just because you think only you can be smart. harry didnt spend thousand galleons on the twins he spend 250. he didnt give them the prize money in this story.
8/8/2024 c50 nagiten
nice.
harry just let them railroad him he was to meek and weak and naive i mean year after year the adults let him down yet he still trust them? he comes from an abused background yet trust so easily and so quickly? i'm sorry but after second year at best i would if I was harry not trust easily or be so quick to submit and bend over
also isnt it improper use not misuse?
nice.
harry just let them railroad him he was to meek and weak and naive i mean year after year the adults let him down yet he still trust them? he comes from an abused background yet trust so easily and so quickly? i'm sorry but after second year at best i would if I was harry not trust easily or be so quick to submit and bend over
also isnt it improper use not misuse?