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9/24/2023 c29 19DRAGONDAVE45
You, and Harry, seem to have forgotten about the snake in the pet shop.
9/13/2023 c19 12stealacandy
I think you may have meant "brutally subduing", not "submitting".

Also, the spell is "Sonorus", not "soronus".
9/13/2023 c17 stealacandy
It's Herpo the Foul, not the Fool...
9/12/2023 c43 stealacandy
McGonaggal didn't belittle Harry. She may have chastise, castigate or berate him. But no belittling was involved.
9/12/2023 c28 stealacandy
It's "return", not "retain".
9/12/2023 c100 stealacandy
That's "intruding", not "introducing".
9/12/2023 c99 stealacandy
That's "critics", not "criticizers".

Also, Harry's wand wasn't submitted by a stronger wand.
Possibly it _has_ submitted _to_ another wand.
Or it was - or has been - subjugated - by that other wand.
Or subjected. Or subordinated. Or supplanted. Or surpassed.
Or suborned. Or had its allegiance subverted.
Or it had been trounced, overcome and undone.
9/11/2023 c80 stealacandy
It's "exception", not "expectation".
9/11/2023 c79 stealacandy
It's "overlook", not "oversee".
9/9/2023 c102 Tomon
Amazing story, really liked how the Fleur stayed relevant and true partner through the whole story and how every developed.

Truly a captivating tale through and through and I'm very thankful for the opportunity to read it.
9/7/2023 c101 53EdTheBeast
An excellent story. A must read that has only a love from Harry to his French Flower. Do not think that anyone would say this is a bad story. Enough romance, adventure, and politics. Would like to know though if the Minister died or not, as he was not mentioned near the end.
9/5/2023 c53 EdTheBeast
Mistake here. If you are using that death, then they should have seen them when leaving last year, not arriving this year.
8/31/2023 c93 santos.luis.contato
dude... You let them bite Sirius? now what? He will turn into a werewolf? or there is some plot that will let hom merge his animagus form with the werewolf?
8/29/2023 c78 santos.luis.contato
uninjured hand? when did Dumbledore injured his hand? in Canon, this time he already got the ring and the curse, but here, that's not the case...
8/27/2023 c49 santos.luis.contato
dude... Harry dont have the tracking spell of underage use of magic anymore... How the hell would they know he used magic there? this is your weak plot here author...
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