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12/8 c198 1800009trumbullps.net
Great job with this chapter, Ironwood from new timeline or old? Hound becoming more corrupted from the Realm of Darkness. New experiments of Grimm. Keep up with the great work.
12/8 c198 8Jebest4781
Quite nice with how this went here.
12/5 c197 Guest
Well, it turns out we're getting on to the next part of the fairy tale.

Now, both arcs of 'atonement' and 'Roman's angels' are over. Well, it doesn't end there, at least. Now we're getting to the story of the chapter in the fairy tale "The Girl Fell through the World," known as the Grim fairy tale of RWBY. Even the part that Aqua is now captured by the Red King. His plan may reconsider the option used to control her because of any color that is related to red. To the colors of orange, purple, and pink.

This means Neo, Terra, and Ventus may end up hearing both sides from Oscar and Penny before going through the passage of time in the Ever After. Which makes the situation going to boil over. Especially Neo, what had happened to her is now going to kick her powers into overdrive to get that Red King Royal pompous hide to hardcore humility. Even the Red King would even have a hard time dealing with angry wielders of the keyblade.

It makes me a little bit curious anyway. I know the Red King tries to keep them as a prisoner or have her face off against the other wielders and humans. It makes me curious why he made Aqua become the Blue Queen.

Then, he must acquire certain information from the previous avatar when he arrives for some time before taking action. Which shows Aqua's promising potential before and after being empress. Which may be the reason behind the Red King's choice. Perhaps he even desired a name as well. Because she was the one who named the two brothers, which granted them great purpose.

If he granted a name from none other than Aqua because she knows the definition and depth of the names granted to those beings. He gave it a lot of thought about. Since he was informed that aqua is well-informed especially the world outside that is not related to the other humans of remnant. He certainly desired to become something much more than he was.

He was given the granted name "William," Even though he ascended twice, he actually remembered his first and second life, and now he lives in his third. Perhaps that will make him William III.

Especially get a few glimpses of certain individuals like Raven coming across with Vanitas. I have a certain feeling that it involves Raven trying to confront Aqua once again. Which means it's more likely crossing blades. Vanitas is offering a required key blade for Raven. I don't know if it will happen or not, but knowing Raven's character slightly. She doesn't exactly have the strength that resides within her.

Vanitas is connected to his counterpart of his brother Ventus. I do remember the Cannon version from Cross Union, Birth by Sleep, and Kingdom Hearts 3. Vanitas and Ventus have different attributes and styles in fighting. Each one of them has different qualities and abilities. However, I don't know if it's possible for what Xehanort says to be true, "that the keyblade is not his to bear," which means it could happen but not exactly through him precisely. He did recreated the destroy door in monsters world in monsters Inc movie.

Vanitas must come to Raven sensing her desperation and despair that she has no way to get out of what she is in right now. But she better not jump the gun on using dangerous underlings that will corrupt and destroy the user and those around.

Looking forward to what will happen next. This is still impressive work.
12/5 c197 Jebest4781
Looks good with how this went here.
12/4 c197 1800009trumbullps.net
Great job with this chapter.
12/4 c196 Guest
Wonderful work on the chapter. Even though that was the end of Roman's angels. This story leaves a very nice touching moment for Neo and many others to overcome the situation and push on through.

It makes me wonder what the next arc will be within your chapter.

This may be a stab in the dark only would it be 'silver and cold'.
It seems to have the ironic term and rhyme of 'silver and gold'.

Just thought it would be interesting for the season.

Although this is the story in your chapter, I would like to see the next one, hopefully soon.

Please keep it up and I love the work.
12/4 c196 Guest
Nice work from the beginning of Neo's station of Awakening. And the ending of the start of her new life with her sisters and Roman.

Especially Roman trying to figure out a way to get even or even get the upper hand on DiZ which is more than he could say. Until the authorities make their appearance. DiZ must have spoken out loud to get Roman out of there as soon as possible. Except this is not afraid of authorities to set up the next stage of his plan.

The volume of the book of Romans Angels closed, but new volumes start a new one.

What's going to be:

THE FINAL TEST:
I may not know within this arc. Leaves me curious about one of the foretellers within the five members of the Union leaders. Must be involved in this one perhaps something else in particular.

TROUBLE IN TIME:
This arc can be really looking forward. Trouble of the matter of time itself what's going to happen next or the timestream being disarray with so many enemies and allies will be appearing.

GREAT WAR:
This arc I may be looking forward and trying to keep myself cool headed on mostly of the outcomes. Oh boy, this may be knowing the few parts of what the main character is going to go through hopefully they'll be pleasant aftermath from this too.

SEARCH FOR AQUA:
I'm guessing everyone from the other side are looking for Aqua from the realm of light. Not only that of those group, the organization known as the 13 seekers of darkness are quite determined to fulfill the plan or acquiring intel on what Aqua knows or in better words what she's earn from the foretellers.

SILVER AND COLD:
This one must be after the great war in Aqua appearance and atlas after fighting in the Ever After

NEVERMORE:
This may be a stab in the dark but this arc may be circulating Raven or Qrow
Branwen life story. Or simply just Raven attempting to acquire something that she is not worthy of having from Aqua

BIRTH BY SLEEP:
I don't know about this segment of this arc. Which must involved with some of the other worlds or a hidden part within the stories.

EPILOGUE:
Whatever this next facts on both Kingdom hearts and RWBY stories cannons would be quite nice.

Current ones right now I'm eager to read next:

AGE OF FAIRY TALES :
Quite interesting that Oz and Aqua are playing the part of each of the fairy tales and many adventures within them.

ATONEMENT :
DiZ / Ansem Schnee life is not over yet be looking forward discontinues even Roman will one day have to come to him for his help to get out of Cinder's control that his team of the Gullwings found out and what the reported to him what they are truly planning. Which means secretly sabotaging the projects within the criminals and secretly revealing what they had found out. Especially siding with the good guys to allow them to get the upper hand.

KINGDOM OF SPIRA :
I am looking so much forward in this story as well. I'll be wondering what will happen next in the next chapter. Jecht The main character in this arc not only trying to find a way back. More importantly he is interested of finding his son Titus. Especially, when he goes on adventure with Sun and Zangan. I have a feeling that Jecht might see Sun almost similar to his own child. Mostly at times but I think he will tell them that why he is searching for the Ocean Knight that she may be the one knows the whereabouts of his son. Which means they're going to make a grand appearance and a reunion with Zangan pupils on the Island of Patch.

I hope soon enough perhaps this month of could match the theme for the season. Like within cold and silver arc. But it's only up to you what you post next.

I'm looking forward to the next story. keep it up. It's getting really interesting.
12/2 c196 10Just a Crazy-Man
Cool
12/1 c196 8Jebest4781
Nice to see how this entry turned out.
12/1 c196 1800009trumbullps.net
Great job with this chapter.
11/28 c195 Guest
Heartfelt challenging slice of Life of situations. It has sympathy for certain two individuals who were fortunate and unfortunate in how they were born and raised.

Very touching a lot of good character development.

Hopefully, you'll create another chapter soon.
11/27 c195 Jebest4781
Fun entry to see done here and wonder how things will progress from here.
11/26 c195 1800009trumbullps.net
Great job with this chapter.
11/26 c1 Guest
Sinceramente , dado la palabra Vanille en el nombre , me imaginaba que se habrian transformado en Heartless con apariencia de dulce
11/23 c194 Guest
Hopefully you keep up with the good work.

DiZ and Roman doing a fighting video game. That's pretty much friendly to settle things instead of Roman try to lie cheat and steal to achieve his goals except now Roman didn't just found the perfect crew he found a perfect team that he's now a part of that he's willing to be with.

Looking forward for the battle or the other chapter of the fairy tales and Aqua's adventure through time.
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