for Need a Little Help (From My Friends)10/15/2022 c13 Candylou
So glad joe and Vanessa's baby came without complication. Also good the Hardy's, Carson, and Hannah are having a great time. Bambam's life turned around for the better. Great story
So glad joe and Vanessa's baby came without complication. Also good the Hardy's, Carson, and Hannah are having a great time. Bambam's life turned around for the better. Great story
10/7/2022 c12 
79Paulina Ann
Well, I'm behind on checking on you. :) Glad to find another chapter up. Thing are winding down. Nice work as always.
79Paulina AnnWell, I'm behind on checking on you. :) Glad to find another chapter up. Thing are winding down. Nice work as always.
9/14/2022 c12 20angelicalkiss
Goody, goody! Hayes is going to jail for a very long time! Take your time in finishing the story. I know how it goes myself.
20angelicalkissGoody, goody! Hayes is going to jail for a very long time! Take your time in finishing the story. I know how it goes myself.
9/14/2022 c11 angelicalkiss
Poor Gabe. I feel so bad for him. He loved Lauren very much and now she's gone. Joe is the perfect person to try to comfort him too since he knows how Gabe is feeling. Oh, Frank's good. Very observant and I hope that his theory on Griff is correct. I was thinking the same thing since Griff was so adamant that Harley had done it. Looking forward to the end!
Poor Gabe. I feel so bad for him. He loved Lauren very much and now she's gone. Joe is the perfect person to try to comfort him too since he knows how Gabe is feeling. Oh, Frank's good. Very observant and I hope that his theory on Griff is correct. I was thinking the same thing since Griff was so adamant that Harley had done it. Looking forward to the end!
9/14/2022 c10 angelicalkiss
Interesting that Price had an insider but the same guy beat the crap out of Gabe. Griff is right though in saying that he had no choice but he could've been a little bit nicer about it. I'm wondering where Frank is going with his theory and exactly what his theory is on who the killer is.
Interesting that Price had an insider but the same guy beat the crap out of Gabe. Griff is right though in saying that he had no choice but he could've been a little bit nicer about it. I'm wondering where Frank is going with his theory and exactly what his theory is on who the killer is.
8/8/2022 c12 17leyapearl
Good for Timmons and Hawker. It's good to see there are good cops in this town as well as bad. It looks like BamBam and Lou are on the way to a nice relationship. Great chapter. The interplay between Frank and Hawker was great, and it was good to see Joe find the evidence to put Hayes away for a long time.
17leyapearlGood for Timmons and Hawker. It's good to see there are good cops in this town as well as bad. It looks like BamBam and Lou are on the way to a nice relationship. Great chapter. The interplay between Frank and Hawker was great, and it was good to see Joe find the evidence to put Hayes away for a long time.
8/8/2022 c12 max2013
So close you can almost taste it-almost but NOT quite! Waiting for the conclusion-WAITING IS SOOO NOT MY FORTE-but what choice do I have(sigh) oh poor me!
So close you can almost taste it-almost but NOT quite! Waiting for the conclusion-WAITING IS SOOO NOT MY FORTE-but what choice do I have(sigh) oh poor me!
8/8/2022 c12 sm2003495
So very glad to see this update.. its been so long since I checked this site too :) yaayyy..and awesome that the Hardys found evidence against Hayes.. think the town will be happy to get rid of all the corruption :) really happy to read this chapter.. (am I repeating myself :D ) and cant wait for the next!
So very glad to see this update.. its been so long since I checked this site too :) yaayyy..and awesome that the Hardys found evidence against Hayes.. think the town will be happy to get rid of all the corruption :) really happy to read this chapter.. (am I repeating myself :D ) and cant wait for the next!
8/7/2022 c1 Erin mansfield
You should make BamBams story told all in one way, meaning the story started out as a story being told and then suddenly the reader is experiencing it with the character. There was no transition to warn the reader this was going to happen, and there should be. Infringing story so far.
You should make BamBams story told all in one way, meaning the story started out as a story being told and then suddenly the reader is experiencing it with the character. There was no transition to warn the reader this was going to happen, and there should be. Infringing story so far.
8/7/2022 c12 1beachgirlsrule
Yay a new chapter! So excited to get the notification. Things seem to be wrapping up nicely, we’ve got the paper evidence, the expensive purchases and BamBam looks like he got the girl after all. Also the burgers sounded really good, lol. I can’t wait for the next chapter.
1beachgirlsruleYay a new chapter! So excited to get the notification. Things seem to be wrapping up nicely, we’ve got the paper evidence, the expensive purchases and BamBam looks like he got the girl after all. Also the burgers sounded really good, lol. I can’t wait for the next chapter.
6/8/2022 c11 Analise S
I have been awol from fanfiction for a while. I still really love your writing and your stories. Thank you.
I have been awol from fanfiction for a while. I still really love your writing and your stories. Thank you.