
11/14/2021 c6
3Nan girl
Uhh...I am unknowingly feeling suspicious of Gabe..Good call on the boys following Naylor. What is Naylor doing there?

Uhh...I am unknowingly feeling suspicious of Gabe..Good call on the boys following Naylor. What is Naylor doing there?
11/14/2021 c5 Nan girl
Great chapter...Now we know who was murdered and what actually happened. Let's see what happens next.
Great chapter...Now we know who was murdered and what actually happened. Let's see what happens next.
11/14/2021 c7
1beachgirlsrule
Great chapter! I was really able to picture everything that happened when the boys got inside. I liked the just knock in the door approach, I thought it was funny. Hopefully they get medical attention for Gabe soon, but I’m sure things won’t go exactly to plan. I’ll be eagerly awaiting the next update. Great job!

Great chapter! I was really able to picture everything that happened when the boys got inside. I liked the just knock in the door approach, I thought it was funny. Hopefully they get medical attention for Gabe soon, but I’m sure things won’t go exactly to plan. I’ll be eagerly awaiting the next update. Great job!
11/11/2021 c6
20angelicalkiss
I keep wondering if Gabe is in on this maybe? just a thought especially since we haven't seen him yet and we don't know who the killer is. as for Naylor, I have words but I will try to keep them clean. he's an assh*le. plain and simple. oh wait that's not clean. oh well. it's true. I agree with Joe tho. I hate dirty cops. I can't wait to see what's next! go get 'em!

I keep wondering if Gabe is in on this maybe? just a thought especially since we haven't seen him yet and we don't know who the killer is. as for Naylor, I have words but I will try to keep them clean. he's an assh*le. plain and simple. oh wait that's not clean. oh well. it's true. I agree with Joe tho. I hate dirty cops. I can't wait to see what's next! go get 'em!
11/7/2021 c6 BMSH
I hope you have a lovely trip. I hope that I can write a coherent post! This chapter didn't resonate with me. At first I thought it was the focus on others - but I enjoyed the BB&L chapter. Maybe not enough development around Kathy or the reveal of the corruption being too easy? Not sure. Either way, looking forward to what the boys will do!
I hope you have a lovely trip. I hope that I can write a coherent post! This chapter didn't resonate with me. At first I thought it was the focus on others - but I enjoyed the BB&L chapter. Maybe not enough development around Kathy or the reveal of the corruption being too easy? Not sure. Either way, looking forward to what the boys will do!
11/7/2021 c6
1beachgirlsrule
Oh boy these cops are more like the mafia than cops. Hopefully Frank and Joe don’t get into too much trouble trying to handle this, I’m sure they’ll need Carson’s help. Keep up the good work!

Oh boy these cops are more like the mafia than cops. Hopefully Frank and Joe don’t get into too much trouble trying to handle this, I’m sure they’ll need Carson’s help. Keep up the good work!
11/7/2021 c6 Candylou
Frank and joe have their work cut out for them. Taking on dirty cops. I know they have carson's help, but they could also use rent on hardy's help. It times like this. Update as soon as you can.
Frank and joe have their work cut out for them. Taking on dirty cops. I know they have carson's help, but they could also use rent on hardy's help. It times like this. Update as soon as you can.
11/7/2021 c6 sm2003495
Wow, it's almost showdown..can't imagine part of a town where the police and the underbelly work together. So glad the hardys got caught up in this.. amazing read as always, waiting for the next update!
Wow, it's almost showdown..can't imagine part of a town where the police and the underbelly work together. So glad the hardys got caught up in this.. amazing read as always, waiting for the next update!
11/3/2021 c5 sm2003495
Glad for once that it is stormy..the Hardys can help Kathy, feel really bad about the whole thing..hope the Hardys get enough firepower to bring down the Chief..waiting for the next chapter!
Glad for once that it is stormy..the Hardys can help Kathy, feel really bad about the whole thing..hope the Hardys get enough firepower to bring down the Chief..waiting for the next chapter!
11/2/2021 c5 max2013
Naylor and Hayes are soooo dirty-thankfully Frank and Joe are going to nail their*** to the wall!
Naylor and Hayes are soooo dirty-thankfully Frank and Joe are going to nail their*** to the wall!
11/2/2021 c5 beachgirlsrule
Interesting very interesting, seems very suspicious that the gunman and the officer appear to nod at each other. I agree that it feels like someone trying to send a message. I love the moments between the boys and the women in their lives it’s very sweet. Can’t wait for see what happens next.
Interesting very interesting, seems very suspicious that the gunman and the officer appear to nod at each other. I agree that it feels like someone trying to send a message. I love the moments between the boys and the women in their lives it’s very sweet. Can’t wait for see what happens next.
11/2/2021 c5
20angelicalkiss
so now we know who the victim is. I agree with the hardys that the murder was a warning to someone and more than likely Kathy. poor woman. Naylor is definitely not a good cop. whatever he's up to I think we'll find out soon. maybe he was coming back to the hotel to talk to Kathy. lots of speculation, I know. I guess I'll have to wait and see!

so now we know who the victim is. I agree with the hardys that the murder was a warning to someone and more than likely Kathy. poor woman. Naylor is definitely not a good cop. whatever he's up to I think we'll find out soon. maybe he was coming back to the hotel to talk to Kathy. lots of speculation, I know. I guess I'll have to wait and see!