10/16/2021 c1 Guest
Welcome back! So excited to see the start of a new story from you! This story already has my full attention, you've set it up so well. Poor Bambam, this has got to be one of the worst morning afters ever.
Welcome back! So excited to see the start of a new story from you! This story already has my full attention, you've set it up so well. Poor Bambam, this has got to be one of the worst morning afters ever.
10/16/2021 c1 3Nan girl
Hurrray!
You are back!
Interesting beginnings to the story...Looking forward to the next update
Hurrray!
You are back!
Interesting beginnings to the story...Looking forward to the next update
10/15/2021 c1 1beachgirlsrule
Very intriguing story. Can’t wait to see where this goes. Excited that it’s in the same universe as vengeance.
Very intriguing story. Can’t wait to see where this goes. Excited that it’s in the same universe as vengeance.
10/15/2021 c1 sm2003495
Wow, soo happy to see this story and that too in the same universe as vengeance! Wow, and you are off to a great start too..poor Bambang, first the heartbreak and then the arrest..the assassin sounds very professional..can't wait for the update..yayy!
Wow, soo happy to see this story and that too in the same universe as vengeance! Wow, and you are off to a great start too..poor Bambang, first the heartbreak and then the arrest..the assassin sounds very professional..can't wait for the update..yayy!
10/15/2021 c1 17leyapearl
Laura is standing by the window, not the widow. I freaked a little when I saw that... :)
Anyway, a new Jilsen story! Yay! And this one, if you will pardon the pun, definitely starts out with a bang. I can't wait to read the whole thing and find out what happened!
Laura is standing by the window, not the widow. I freaked a little when I saw that... :)
Anyway, a new Jilsen story! Yay! And this one, if you will pardon the pun, definitely starts out with a bang. I can't wait to read the whole thing and find out what happened!
10/14/2021 c1 BMSH
I remember three but I'll have to go back later - I'm tired. I love finding errors - I can't write, but I can fix! Love the start. There's always a nice bit of texture to your stories. Bambam should be cleared on the forensics alone. Too bad about Lou - Bambam thought she might be the one and poof.
I remember three but I'll have to go back later - I'm tired. I love finding errors - I can't write, but I can fix! Love the start. There's always a nice bit of texture to your stories. Bambam should be cleared on the forensics alone. Too bad about Lou - Bambam thought she might be the one and poof.
10/14/2021 c1 max2013
HAPPY, HAPPY DANCE-YOU'RE BACK! Poor BamBam-I like him and should have realized that meant bad things for him-looking forward to more!
HAPPY, HAPPY DANCE-YOU'RE BACK! Poor BamBam-I like him and should have realized that meant bad things for him-looking forward to more!