for The Astonishing Spider-Man & Talon11/21 c1 Musiclover64
Do we ever see Laura and peters, children and family? in the future and will we get an epilogue to the story it seems open ended so far but I really do love it and can I use your story for my own?
Do we ever see Laura and peters, children and family? in the future and will we get an epilogue to the story it seems open ended so far but I really do love it and can I use your story for my own?
10/17 c24 OGs82306
Well folks its been a year since the last update. I love this story but i think it is unfortunately abandoned and unlikely to be continued.
Well folks its been a year since the last update. I love this story but i think it is unfortunately abandoned and unlikely to be continued.
10/12 c24 Guest
I really love this story, the way you write the characters is astonishing :) and the interaction between peter and laura are very good.
This story birthday is coming up and a new chapter would be a really cool surprise. wink
But i hope you are okay and nothing bad has happened in your life, be strong and i hope you come back someday.
I really love this story, the way you write the characters is astonishing :) and the interaction between peter and laura are very good.
This story birthday is coming up and a new chapter would be a really cool surprise. wink
But i hope you are okay and nothing bad has happened in your life, be strong and i hope you come back someday.
10/10 c24 Guest
I love this story! I think the way you write the characters is fantastic, you definitely made me like the Peter x Laura ship more, i really hope you continue this story in the future.
Soon is going this story birthday and a new chapter would be a really good gift.
I really hope that everything is going okay on your life, take your time with whatever you need and be strong.
I love this story! I think the way you write the characters is fantastic, you definitely made me like the Peter x Laura ship more, i really hope you continue this story in the future.
Soon is going this story birthday and a new chapter would be a really good gift.
I really hope that everything is going okay on your life, take your time with whatever you need and be strong.
8/22 c24 Sage327
This story is freaking fantastic! Why'd you stop?! D: Like you, I adore Laura, and after reading this, am a fan of the whole Peter x Laura ship. It's a great read. Really wish for you to keep going with this. :) Please? XD
This story is freaking fantastic! Why'd you stop?! D: Like you, I adore Laura, and after reading this, am a fan of the whole Peter x Laura ship. It's a great read. Really wish for you to keep going with this. :) Please? XD
6/25 c24 Guest
God this is one of the best Laura and Peter fics better than my Moments in Time stuff I wrote. Please keep this going man and hey if you’re taking your time keep on doing what you’re doing. A lot of these Laura and Peter fics never get finished but this one is really special. I love your writing style and the way you write the characters absolutely beautiful. Could we someday down the line see Laura upgrade her code name to Wolverine if we do an epilogue time skip in the far future? Hope to see more wonderf fic stayed up all night reading it
God this is one of the best Laura and Peter fics better than my Moments in Time stuff I wrote. Please keep this going man and hey if you’re taking your time keep on doing what you’re doing. A lot of these Laura and Peter fics never get finished but this one is really special. I love your writing style and the way you write the characters absolutely beautiful. Could we someday down the line see Laura upgrade her code name to Wolverine if we do an epilogue time skip in the far future? Hope to see more wonderf fic stayed up all night reading it
6/9 c24 Xalcal
Hey are you going to update this soon? Really great story hope you don’t abandon it
Hey are you going to update this soon? Really great story hope you don’t abandon it
6/8 c24 Bobbonito
Amazing story hope you come back and update this story hope we see peter and Laura’s romance evolve more
Amazing story hope you come back and update this story hope we see peter and Laura’s romance evolve more
5/29 c10 
6W1rath56
This is a really amazing fic. The characterization for Peter and Laura is nothing short of amazing. It’s a nice and thrilling, slow burn romance that has a lot of great moments.
There is very little I would say is wrong with this fic.
Until this chapter.
Don’t get me wrong, I do like the X-men and I like him being involved and interacting with them, but him enrolling at the school is entirely purposeless.
He already has a good grasp of his abilities, like was stated in this chapter and figuring out the stingers isn’t much of a problem. There is also little anyone in the Academy can teach him that he doesn’t already know or can’t learn since he would be second or third smartest there.
All it really does is expose his identity as Spider-Man to a bunch of random people and all it would take is one of them to betray him and tell a villian or better yet they could have their mind scoured and they can find out then plus his weakness.
Also, he will be a whole hour away. Sure they have transportation but any crime that goes on will be done by the time an hour is up. And it was 50 minutes by driving so Imagine by bus or train?
The academy is really more of a crutch and I understand why he needs to leave so Aunt May can not have to worry about him but thats what Shield or the fantastic four which is practically his family could be doing.
6W1rath56This is a really amazing fic. The characterization for Peter and Laura is nothing short of amazing. It’s a nice and thrilling, slow burn romance that has a lot of great moments.
There is very little I would say is wrong with this fic.
Until this chapter.
Don’t get me wrong, I do like the X-men and I like him being involved and interacting with them, but him enrolling at the school is entirely purposeless.
He already has a good grasp of his abilities, like was stated in this chapter and figuring out the stingers isn’t much of a problem. There is also little anyone in the Academy can teach him that he doesn’t already know or can’t learn since he would be second or third smartest there.
All it really does is expose his identity as Spider-Man to a bunch of random people and all it would take is one of them to betray him and tell a villian or better yet they could have their mind scoured and they can find out then plus his weakness.
Also, he will be a whole hour away. Sure they have transportation but any crime that goes on will be done by the time an hour is up. And it was 50 minutes by driving so Imagine by bus or train?
The academy is really more of a crutch and I understand why he needs to leave so Aunt May can not have to worry about him but thats what Shield or the fantastic four which is practically his family could be doing.
5/2 c19 The atraveler
Me hiciste llorar como una perra hdp, pero gracias, es el mejor fanfic que he leido
Me hiciste llorar como una perra hdp, pero gracias, es el mejor fanfic que he leido
4/29 c24 Salsasan
Hope you continue this story
Hope you continue this story
4/29 c24 Sixdry
Hope you update this story it’s amazing
Hope you update this story it’s amazing
4/28 c24 Sixdry
Amazing story I hope you pick it up again I really enjoyed reading it and your writing and creativity with both these characters is amazing hope you give this story a chance again at being updated really enjoyed this piece of art
Amazing story I hope you pick it up again I really enjoyed reading it and your writing and creativity with both these characters is amazing hope you give this story a chance again at being updated really enjoyed this piece of art