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10/26/2021 c1 BoredKing
This definitely has a Male a Wish feel to it and I love it.
10/25/2021 c2 14dawnsfire
I like your approach!

Is Umbridge still around? (Never was sure what happened to her in canon.) She might just show up with a squad, wanting to "protect" Harry from the evil creatures!
10/25/2021 c2 Forest1395101
I would recommend googling "list of mythological objects" and going straight to the vehicles section. I vote for Hades Chariot, lol
10/25/2021 c2 28Kairan1979
I'm suprised Harry was able to pry Hermione away from the library.
P.S. How about a flying chariot like the one they used to transport Grindewalt in the second Fantastic Beasts movie?
10/25/2021 c1 dakotafogarty
perhaps a ship/sub from ww1 or 2 modern compared to the wooden ships but not as reliant on electronics as the current ships. anything that needs electronics to work could be replaced with magic including the fuel. otherwise a magically enhanced ironclad would be interesting as well
10/25/2021 c2 1BeelzeBlue
A haunted ship would be awesome, some like pirates of the Caribbean Davy Jones level rising from the depths bs would be fantastic, this story is just all kinds of fun, dropped what I was reading when I saw a new chapter, can’t wait for the next one
10/24/2021 c1 28Kairan1979
I like the idea of Harry making the castle. Maybe borrow some of Hagrid's cute misunderstood beasts and let Neville surround the castle with the agressive plants?
10/23/2021 c1 Forest1395101
Lol, have him recruit a coven of Succubus. Except the Succubus reproduce asexually and have zero sex drive, lol
10/23/2021 c1 25stevem1
This is well written and a fun read. Hope to read some more.
10/23/2021 c1 dakotafogarty
excellent start for a story if you want a couple suggestions at one point have his appearance or presence altered to what is considered evil (temporary or not willing or not your choice). have him meet creatures/monsters/individuals that are considered dark/evil by circumstancediet, ability, ect) or were recruited by previous dark lords. have him become interested in magic or something else that is traditionally evil by the magical community for example trying to bring technology to the wizarding world or finding a way to make something dark like necromancy or rituals useful/good in some way.
10/23/2021 c1 1BeelzeBlue
This is awesome and I need more
10/23/2021 c1 James Birdsong
Great story
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