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2/16/2023 c24 Kai
Your Atlantis reminds me, with its missing palaces and temples, of Mohenjo-Daro. Though the large gash through the city, even if filled with water, probably doesn't count as a bath...

"Take the reins and reign" Nicely done. :-)
2/14/2023 c19 Kai
Hehe, now with their own ore production they can make their own cauldrons. IF they get the cauldron bottom thicknesses right that is. With individual hand-crafting that's hard to achieve. Modern (muggle, of course) machine tools are way better at keeping very exact measurements. Something Harry could possibly even know because it's just as valid for drills.
2/14/2023 c18 Kai
If Harry Crow (hehe, a tribute to RobSt...) is absolutely adapted to lower altitudes he might have trouble breathing flying to/from Mt. Everest. But migratory birds crossing the Himalayas still keep a distance of 1,000 metres to the "ground" and regularly reach heights of 10,000 metres. They'll be better adapted to such heights than a sedentary crow, but still, with Harry's thin air magic? It SHOULD work.
2/13/2023 c13 alsdjhfgljkwebgh
Jesus, dude. A person is Parslemouth, they speak Parsletongue. It's not even hard to look that fact up. STOP SWITCHING THEM.

And also, really glad that snake said no, since snakes can't be poisonous, but they can be venomous. That's something taught to gradeschoolers, by the way. Not sure how you messed that one up.
2/6/2023 c4 Kai
How could Harry starve in France? Just go to a Carrefour or similar, put into your cart what you recognise without having to read the label, and try to pay. If it costs incomprehensible hundred four twenties ten seven in the end, well, there will be a display somewhere where you can see the number. Problem solved! :-)

The wolf was the Beast of Gévaudan or at least a conspecific, right? A bit further down: Ah, okay, it was. Thought so.
1/26/2023 c28 major wallace
Awesome work
1/8/2023 c28 Please read me
Before you rewrite this fanfiction I suggest you watch and read as many kingdom building anime as possible that way you can get some GENERAL JIST how to make Harry build his empire.
1/6/2023 c23 Guest
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12/30/2022 c25 1MakhaiArcanum
I’m prompted to comment mostly because of your comment about Crusader Kings III being a hell of a drug—I’ve just recently gotten into Crusader Kings II and I’ve found the same. But, of course, I should tell you that I’m loving your story, and I’m hoping there will be something else of yours to continue with once I’m done with this. If not, I suppose I’ll have to give you a follow and check back some time in the future.
12/19/2022 c28 TheMostPeculiarSerb1995
A most excellent, most wonderful story!
12/3/2022 c28 Mari Wollsch
super tory xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
11/20/2022 c12 noylj
It would be good if Harry could find love and relations. Suspect he is the only virgin in story.
How is he feeding the vamps when he is gone so often?
11/18/2022 c1 Osiris Sundavr
I’m so hooked just after this first chapter. You author have good taste. Make A Wish by Rorschach’s Blot was indeed a spectacular piece. Especially when everyone started to think that Harry was some ancient dark lord that personally sunk Atlantis and called Merlin a whiny pimply teen (or was it Atlantis’s version of a squib?) with good taste in food. I now wonder if you plan to do something similar?
11/12/2022 c1 4Wackuhdoodle
Just this first chapter has me hooked. Well done! Okay now that I got the fancy things done, Great Job! This is honestly hilarious and definitely something I could see happening to Harry!
10/30/2022 c10 kase519
I need an application to his island
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