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This is one of the best story i've read so far.
This is one of the best story i've read so far.
7/6 c31 kagome0561
I loved this story so much. It's been such a long time since I've been able to read a full fic all the way through, but yours had me completely enthralled. My apologies for my previous short reviews. I was so into your story that I stayed up until 1am to finish readinf it and forgot to leave reviews as I finished each chapter so bow I'm going back to tell you how amazing your writing skills are and your ability to tell a great story especially over a sensitive topic. Thanks again!
I loved this story so much. It's been such a long time since I've been able to read a full fic all the way through, but yours had me completely enthralled. My apologies for my previous short reviews. I was so into your story that I stayed up until 1am to finish readinf it and forgot to leave reviews as I finished each chapter so bow I'm going back to tell you how amazing your writing skills are and your ability to tell a great story especially over a sensitive topic. Thanks again!
7/6 c30 kagome0561
Woah. So much to take in in this chapter. I'm so sad they broke up but I understand its probably good for Bella to experience life outside of her old forks bubble.
Woah. So much to take in in this chapter. I'm so sad they broke up but I understand its probably good for Bella to experience life outside of her old forks bubble.
7/6 c29 kagome0561
Edward is right. Bellas was brave. All of them were. I wish they didn't give him the possibility of parole. That'll definitely be a problem later.
Edward is right. Bellas was brave. All of them were. I wish they didn't give him the possibility of parole. That'll definitely be a problem later.
7/6 c28 kagome0561
I hope he gets sentenced for a very long time. He doesn't deserve to the light of day.
I hope he gets sentenced for a very long time. He doesn't deserve to the light of day.
7/6 c26 kagome0561
I really hope that's not his baby. Having a sibling their mom is your ex is so weird lol
I really hope that's not his baby. Having a sibling their mom is your ex is so weird lol
7/6 c22 kagome0561
Well since Edward's Grandpa is a lawyer hopefully he can help them with thus case.
Well since Edward's Grandpa is a lawyer hopefully he can help them with thus case.
7/6 c20 kagome0561
The nerve of her to do what she did and say she doesn't deserve what's happening to her. She's getting off easy in my opinion. I dont know why she expected Edward to help her after that.
The nerve of her to do what she did and say she doesn't deserve what's happening to her. She's getting off easy in my opinion. I dont know why she expected Edward to help her after that.
7/6 c18 kagome0561
I hate that thats how Rosalie feels. I understand the mindset she's in but it's so frustrating when there's other victims involved
I hate that thats how Rosalie feels. I understand the mindset she's in but it's so frustrating when there's other victims involved