for What is dead may never die (Theon SI)10/27 c1 Lot1t
Pfft, it took half of the first chapter to realize that the hero is a pathetic nobody. The same can be said about the author, in the end it was he who fucked up this nonsense.
Pfft, it took half of the first chapter to realize that the hero is a pathetic nobody. The same can be said about the author, in the end it was he who fucked up this nonsense.
10/11 c3 guest
ahhh i really wanna read this but the grammer is doing my head in lol
ahhh i really wanna read this but the grammer is doing my head in lol
10/11 c2 guest
I came from your hiruzen story your grammar and writing has really improved from the looks of things
I came from your hiruzen story your grammar and writing has really improved from the looks of things
9/17 c122 vikinggold32
Finished reading it good story, theon is quite funny I wonder when people will kneel to him instead of the mother dragon.
Looking forward to theon's adventures in the 7 kingdoms and how the "other" will accept his fate.
If you can lack pov of other characters, pov of one person one page is too stiff. Like I also want to know what anguy thoros etc is thinking.
Finished reading it good story, theon is quite funny I wonder when people will kneel to him instead of the mother dragon.
Looking forward to theon's adventures in the 7 kingdoms and how the "other" will accept his fate.
If you can lack pov of other characters, pov of one person one page is too stiff. Like I also want to know what anguy thoros etc is thinking.
9/17 c122 kakathot
Take your time, I fucking love this story and Theon is easily among my favourite characters from any fanfic I have ever read. I would you rather take your time than rush through it.
Take your time, I fucking love this story and Theon is easily among my favourite characters from any fanfic I have ever read. I would you rather take your time than rush through it.
9/16 c27 kakathot
Theon is fucking hilarious, this story might not be as detailed or deep as other fan fics I have read but Theon alone more than makes up for it.
I'll read a decent story with an entertaining main character over a good story with a boring main character any day of the week
good fucking work so far, this story is funny
Theon is fucking hilarious, this story might not be as detailed or deep as other fan fics I have read but Theon alone more than makes up for it.
I'll read a decent story with an entertaining main character over a good story with a boring main character any day of the week
good fucking work so far, this story is funny
9/15 c66 vikinggold32
Chp 66:
Theon should not only give Alysanne a city but also a child.
I know theon has good morals about women but alysa has accepted her fate, how many times did she try to give service to theon? They should have made love.
In the original story theon was portrayed as loving to make love. What kind of king doesn't even have a woman in his bed.
Chp 66:
Theon should not only give Alysanne a city but also a child.
I know theon has good morals about women but alysa has accepted her fate, how many times did she try to give service to theon? They should have made love.
In the original story theon was portrayed as loving to make love. What kind of king doesn't even have a woman in his bed.
9/10 c45 Guest
So the MC died and pretty much got replaced with an ice that sucks, good fanfic up untill here.
Peace.
So the MC died and pretty much got replaced with an ice that sucks, good fanfic up untill here.
Peace.
9/7 c122 fj6104
What the f## happen to this story? When did theon turn from a great King to Dany's dog..
What the f## happen to this story? When did theon turn from a great King to Dany's dog..
9/7 c122 
3jiubantai-taicho
Ok this is getting fucking annoying why is Daenerys teh one that ‘gave’ the gold?! That gold was HIS not hers. What the fuck are people begging HER when it is HIM that broke them?! Why is he taking that as a fucking cucked simp instead of making sure everyone knows that HE is the one that’s winning cities it is HIS gold that pays for everything it is HE who they owe whatever they got to not the fucking used dragon pussy, the fucking worthless whore that’s actually worth NOTHING! Besides he ain’t even fucking her so he is a fucking simp.
3jiubantai-taichoOk this is getting fucking annoying why is Daenerys teh one that ‘gave’ the gold?! That gold was HIS not hers. What the fuck are people begging HER when it is HIM that broke them?! Why is he taking that as a fucking cucked simp instead of making sure everyone knows that HE is the one that’s winning cities it is HIS gold that pays for everything it is HE who they owe whatever they got to not the fucking used dragon pussy, the fucking worthless whore that’s actually worth NOTHING! Besides he ain’t even fucking her so he is a fucking simp.