for What is dead may never die (Theon SI)5/11 c71 Hoosthat
I sense a shift. Theon is simping for a dragon whore. The plot is heading towards cuckdom.
I sense a shift. Theon is simping for a dragon whore. The plot is heading towards cuckdom.
5/9 c131 vikinggold32
Wtf! One piece.. seriously? I'd be happier if it was a Jack sparrow cross.
But alright this is still entertaining and to hell with the language details. I used the translation lol
Wtf! One piece.. seriously? I'd be happier if it was a Jack sparrow cross.
But alright this is still entertaining and to hell with the language details. I used the translation lol
4/28 c50 ReedD.Isapoint
The grammar varies so wildly. Not particular skilled in English are you, author?
The grammar varies so wildly. Not particular skilled in English are you, author?
4/26 c31 ReedD.Isapoint
Are familiar with the concept of punctuation?
Are familiar with the concept of punctuation?
4/25 c16 ReedD.Isapoint
Dialogue as stiff as a dead man's penis. And there is no introspection at all. Hopefully this will get better in time in the later chapters.
Dialogue as stiff as a dead man's penis. And there is no introspection at all. Hopefully this will get better in time in the later chapters.
4/25 c15 ReedD.Isapoint
Sometimes the dialogue between characters are so stiff and emotionless. It's like robots talking to each other.
Sometimes the dialogue between characters are so stiff and emotionless. It's like robots talking to each other.
4/25 c13 ReedD.Isapoint
Lame us readers couldn't get to see the Ned's POV and aftermath in King's Landing when Theon's party left in a hurry. This is why first-person perspectives are so lame and limiting in stories. It's just bad. Hopefully in the other chapters, we'll get to see the POV on what happened in the court.
Lame us readers couldn't get to see the Ned's POV and aftermath in King's Landing when Theon's party left in a hurry. This is why first-person perspectives are so lame and limiting in stories. It's just bad. Hopefully in the other chapters, we'll get to see the POV on what happened in the court.
4/25 c8 ReedD.Isapoint
This is stupid. No respectable self-insert is going to get caught with their pants down by being caught off-guard around Littlefinger. Your Theon-SI is lacking more brains than I thought.
This is stupid. No respectable self-insert is going to get caught with their pants down by being caught off-guard around Littlefinger. Your Theon-SI is lacking more brains than I thought.
4/25 c1 ReedD.Isapoint
The first half of this story started off good enough, but it was a cringe-fest when the POV changed to (Self-Insert) Theon. Cry me a river, will you? Sheesh. I'll read on anyways, but I'll decrease my standards and will not expect much from this story whatsoever.
The first half of this story started off good enough, but it was a cringe-fest when the POV changed to (Self-Insert) Theon. Cry me a river, will you? Sheesh. I'll read on anyways, but I'll decrease my standards and will not expect much from this story whatsoever.
4/25 c130 NeedingOfLifeGoalDude
Damn, what an amazing twist. Did you inspired this out form "The Genius Prince's Guide to Raising a Nation Out of Debt" anime?
Jon has embraced his dark (Targaryen bastard) side, scheming sole to remove both Kevan and Bolton, whilst publically disguise his ruthless cunning by bring his wilding wife Val in a War Council filled with Northmen lords to be perceived as blunt youth, and as well gaining the knowledge how make a better forgery of Lord Tywin's handwriting for any upcoming schemes.
Althought he also regrettably cause the death of Robb. P.S.: I wonder if this would be reveal and what would be Arya's reaction when finding out that her favourite kin's deceitful actions ended up to the demise of her big brother?
Damn, what an amazing twist. Did you inspired this out form "The Genius Prince's Guide to Raising a Nation Out of Debt" anime?
Jon has embraced his dark (Targaryen bastard) side, scheming sole to remove both Kevan and Bolton, whilst publically disguise his ruthless cunning by bring his wilding wife Val in a War Council filled with Northmen lords to be perceived as blunt youth, and as well gaining the knowledge how make a better forgery of Lord Tywin's handwriting for any upcoming schemes.
Althought he also regrettably cause the death of Robb. P.S.: I wonder if this would be reveal and what would be Arya's reaction when finding out that her favourite kin's deceitful actions ended up to the demise of her big brother?
3/29 c72 Blackholelord
Dany is a complex thanks to that author of the novels and the TV series, she turn from a sweet young woman into a mad woman, all because they love to twist all our favorite characters around and let them drop dead. Dany was one of many such characters like Robb and so many others...
Dany is a complex thanks to that author of the novels and the TV series, she turn from a sweet young woman into a mad woman, all because they love to twist all our favorite characters around and let them drop dead. Dany was one of many such characters like Robb and so many others...
3/21 c127 
3jiubantai-taicho
Ooowwwww don’t tell me Theon has pulled an Edward Cullen was it? The twilight guy… Man how I hated my GF making me sit through those movies It was 2010 and she wanted to see the one in theaters but she had me watch the previous ones and all the sequels. I guess it could have been worse after all she did give me something in return
3jiubantai-taichoOoowwwww don’t tell me Theon has pulled an Edward Cullen was it? The twilight guy… Man how I hated my GF making me sit through those movies It was 2010 and she wanted to see the one in theaters but she had me watch the previous ones and all the sequels. I guess it could have been worse after all she did give me something in return
3/7 c122 Guest
Theon no futuro sera mais famoso que Brandon o construtor, Daemon Targaryen, Corpos Velaryon, por ele fez o que os outros não fizeram. Colocaram grandes cidades de essos de joelhos. .
Theon no futuro sera mais famoso que Brandon o construtor, Daemon Targaryen, Corpos Velaryon, por ele fez o que os outros não fizeram. Colocaram grandes cidades de essos de joelhos. .