21h c41 FatedWait
It was a great work. It's been a long time since I could continue. But, having started all over again, he finished it in a couple of days. Thank you for all your work.
Это была отличная работа. Давным давно не смог продолжить. Но, начав все сначала, закончил за пару дней. Спасибо за весь ваш труд.
It was a great work. It's been a long time since I could continue. But, having started all over again, he finished it in a couple of days. Thank you for all your work.
Это была отличная работа. Давным давно не смог продолжить. Но, начав все сначала, закончил за пару дней. Спасибо за весь ваш труд.
10/23 c41 3lycanoda
Like most of your stories this is a fantastic read. It pulls you in. I literally started reading this today and I read the entirety of it. your character work is fantastic, your pacing as well amazing. the one thing I wish I could’ve seen would have been Salem’s reaction to sheep/Grimm body being delivered to her and the Salem of the story knowing without question someone was loyal, and someone loved amazing work please keep going.
Like most of your stories this is a fantastic read. It pulls you in. I literally started reading this today and I read the entirety of it. your character work is fantastic, your pacing as well amazing. the one thing I wish I could’ve seen would have been Salem’s reaction to sheep/Grimm body being delivered to her and the Salem of the story knowing without question someone was loyal, and someone loved amazing work please keep going.
7/20 c41 guest
Lame ending, but it's literally impossible to not be lame without entirely removing gods' nonsense from this setting. At least the battle royale until that was pretty cool. This deserves a 7/10, author.
Lame ending, but it's literally impossible to not be lame without entirely removing gods' nonsense from this setting. At least the battle royale until that was pretty cool. This deserves a 7/10, author.
7/20 c30 guest
It's less ludicrous bullshit than the Worm version of this whole thing.
It's less ludicrous bullshit than the Worm version of this whole thing.
5/13 c41 It's quite clear
Jaune aubergined Blake.
Jaune aubergined Blake.
4/25 c1 5HaziX WeeK
as im rereadi g this story, i got to say
they literally lost the strongest jaune they could have, dreamer(in your wildest dreams) could rewrite reality, so the fact they Excluded him was good
as im rereadi g this story, i got to say
they literally lost the strongest jaune they could have, dreamer(in your wildest dreams) could rewrite reality, so the fact they Excluded him was good
4/16 c41 netAp
Eh. Reread it 5 times already and it still awesome. It will be super interesting to read something in the same format. Like Jaune got semblance to summon his other self in panic or once a week or some different tricky condition. Maybe lose his memories on summon or fully aware of situation or just like someone guid him. I think something like this would really interesting story
Eh. Reread it 5 times already and it still awesome. It will be super interesting to read something in the same format. Like Jaune got semblance to summon his other self in panic or once a week or some different tricky condition. Maybe lose his memories on summon or fully aware of situation or just like someone guid him. I think something like this would really interesting story
4/2 c41 ledesmajoaquin418
La historia tuvo un concepto interesante, un final que considero bastante bueno el final, te conocí por unos videos narrados por loquendo de tus fics, no me arrepiento de decidir leerlos directamente
La historia tuvo un concepto interesante, un final que considero bastante bueno el final, te conocí por unos videos narrados por loquendo de tus fics, no me arrepiento de decidir leerlos directamente
4/1 c41 ndabdm
I 100% thought that ghost juane was attached to the fall maiden. I thought that this entire time, he’d just been sitting down there, bored out of his god damn mind because the only person in any amount of radius is in a coma. And that he was going to be the winner by process of elimination.
I 100% thought that ghost juane was attached to the fall maiden. I thought that this entire time, he’d just been sitting down there, bored out of his god damn mind because the only person in any amount of radius is in a coma. And that he was going to be the winner by process of elimination.
2/22 c12 Orion B
(FOR CH 10) its such a shame jaune was very obviously set up to be ooblecks summon here but you retconned (implausibly, imo) him to be ozpins summon instead. i mean, why would oz call agent as rat? thats an oobleck thing
(FOR CH 10) its such a shame jaune was very obviously set up to be ooblecks summon here but you retconned (implausibly, imo) him to be ozpins summon instead. i mean, why would oz call agent as rat? thats an oobleck thing