for Arc Royale5/10 c41 Mrxd
I just realized fate is just archer emiya of this story he's sarcastic af an asshole is like over a 1000 years old, has been in multiple timelines, hates his younger self ends up sacrificing himself to save the others shiiiiiit
I just realized fate is just archer emiya of this story he's sarcastic af an asshole is like over a 1000 years old, has been in multiple timelines, hates his younger self ends up sacrificing himself to save the others shiiiiiit
4/5 c1 BoondogleKrieger
A summary I made to congratulate this story.
When making a choice, a path opens up, only to add up as more are made. From all of them lay a different life where that person was the same but is now as distinct as the station they inhabit. Some good, some bad, it is a whole variety from desirable to outright aversion, yet it is possible to become any of them. In the end it is the choices and drive that mostly determine the chosen destination besides outside factors. To work for the path that is preferred is the best one can hope for, for there will be no hand that will give it to them.
A summary I made to congratulate this story.
When making a choice, a path opens up, only to add up as more are made. From all of them lay a different life where that person was the same but is now as distinct as the station they inhabit. Some good, some bad, it is a whole variety from desirable to outright aversion, yet it is possible to become any of them. In the end it is the choices and drive that mostly determine the chosen destination besides outside factors. To work for the path that is preferred is the best one can hope for, for there will be no hand that will give it to them.
2/27 c41 Xareth
I would love to see you make a fic where the canon version react to the different moments the other Jaunes you made had like them seeing fate or knights backstories and seeing the arc corp nonsense you could do a poll for each chapter or each fic shown and could even keep it at an irregular schedule because its not like they will see everything just parts.
I would love to see you make a fic where the canon version react to the different moments the other Jaunes you made had like them seeing fate or knights backstories and seeing the arc corp nonsense you could do a poll for each chapter or each fic shown and could even keep it at an irregular schedule because its not like they will see everything just parts.
2/18 c5 daios3139
Holy Shit Jaune warchief, I hope he is as in Civil War that man of man, The King of The North.
Holy Shit Jaune warchief, I hope he is as in Civil War that man of man, The King of The North.
12/11/2024 c41 Falox2
I really liked this story, but I would have loved to see things have consequences, like Grimm’s parting. Another missed opportunity I think would be to have had ghost Jaune posses Amber considering you made a big deal of swapping her out and how she was supposedly being woken up. Overall though, awesome story
I really liked this story, but I would have loved to see things have consequences, like Grimm’s parting. Another missed opportunity I think would be to have had ghost Jaune posses Amber considering you made a big deal of swapping her out and how she was supposedly being woken up. Overall though, awesome story
12/7/2024 c18 
9Mark123100
You claim to not be a fan of autobiographical celebrity culture, but you always take the time to talk about your views and your family and your life and even your pet peeves in your notes, without fail. It's... odd.
9Mark123100You claim to not be a fan of autobiographical celebrity culture, but you always take the time to talk about your views and your family and your life and even your pet peeves in your notes, without fail. It's... odd.
12/7/2024 c14 Mark123100
Narcissistic? Your brother's probably just in awe of your amazing author skills...
Narcissistic? Your brother's probably just in awe of your amazing author skills...
12/7/2024 c13 Mark123100
Why ask about stuff in the author's notes when you wrote the story in the first place?
Why ask about stuff in the author's notes when you wrote the story in the first place?
12/7/2024 c1 Mark123100
In hindsight, Fate was a capital Ain this story and his original story. It's a wonder that he got so much narrative focus here, that the others characters and Jaunes would put up with his tude. You really have a thing for favoring the angsty, sarcastic ones...
In hindsight, Fate was a capital Ain this story and his original story. It's a wonder that he got so much narrative focus here, that the others characters and Jaunes would put up with his tude. You really have a thing for favoring the angsty, sarcastic ones...
12/6/2024 c41 9Uraharaisgod
Great story, was kind of hoping we'd get to see if Grimm/Sheep's final message had any effect on Salem, if combined with her now mortality she might have changed, but I guess not.
9UraharaisgodGreat story, was kind of hoping we'd get to see if Grimm/Sheep's final message had any effect on Salem, if combined with her now mortality she might have changed, but I guess not.