
3/28 c1 grantcourtney
Hi, I m Ella courtney ! I just finished reading your story, and I have to say it's absolutely captivating! Your storytelling is immersive, the characters feel so real, and the plot had me hooked from start to finish. I’d love to share a detailed review because your work deserves all the praise! Keep writing your talent is truly something special!
Hi, I m Ella courtney ! I just finished reading your story, and I have to say it's absolutely captivating! Your storytelling is immersive, the characters feel so real, and the plot had me hooked from start to finish. I’d love to share a detailed review because your work deserves all the praise! Keep writing your talent is truly something special!
3/10 c97 atengawchok
Naruto in the wrong right now! He needs to listen, not escalate the situation. Karin attacked the Hokage, that is already teason. So they need to teach him politcs or have him read drama, lol!
Naruto in the wrong right now! He needs to listen, not escalate the situation. Karin attacked the Hokage, that is already teason. So they need to teach him politcs or have him read drama, lol!
3/9 c97
2biginferno
not what i expected I thought he'd reward Tayuya for catching Karin's power play and punish Karin but instead complete opposite here

not what i expected I thought he'd reward Tayuya for catching Karin's power play and punish Karin but instead complete opposite here
2/28 c1 zaniarein247
Your story "Can our inner demons find love" is more than just words, it’s a masterpiece waiting to be seen!
With its rich world, compelling characters, and gripping plot, your narrative deserves to be brought to life visually.
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Your story "Can our inner demons find love" is more than just words, it’s a masterpiece waiting to be seen!
With its rich world, compelling characters, and gripping plot, your narrative deserves to be brought to life visually.
As a commissioned base artist with 4 years of experience, I specialize in transforming stories into stunning comics that captivate and inspire. Let’s work together to turn your vision into breathtaking art that speaks to the world!
Want to see my work? Just ask!
Discord: alimaggoon
Let’s create something unforgettable! I can’t wait to bring your story to life.
2/25 c95 biginferno
Naruto really needs to return and he needs to see the treason Karin is playing and the loyalty that Tayuya has for him almost really needs to lower Karin's position and move Tayuya higher up shes shown her loyalty to him and his wishes while Karin is going behind his back in power plays
Naruto really needs to return and he needs to see the treason Karin is playing and the loyalty that Tayuya has for him almost really needs to lower Karin's position and move Tayuya higher up shes shown her loyalty to him and his wishes while Karin is going behind his back in power plays
1/21 c95 luder23.la
I think the karin/Hinata confontation was handled well and im kinda on the fence with Fu. I really like Fus happiness and energy just not so much in this story i feel there might actually be too many relationships to be honest at this point. personally just stick to 3 wives and mama Sakura with the teo clan head side pieces lol.
I think the karin/Hinata confontation was handled well and im kinda on the fence with Fu. I really like Fus happiness and energy just not so much in this story i feel there might actually be too many relationships to be honest at this point. personally just stick to 3 wives and mama Sakura with the teo clan head side pieces lol.
1/4 c94 Guest
When the danger ends and when the war finally ends and return to normal Naruto and his girlfriend's especially ino kiren tayuya Hinata and Sakura definitely be in for a suprise they wouldn't expect that Mei saw and other unexpected surprises he has in store for them he has learned he has yet to unveil to them when Naruto sees Kiren again he should help her and make her realize her mistake and not make it any worse than it already is and see where she's gone wrong and open her eyes and help her the best he can and make her life better and feel safe happy and loved
When the danger ends and when the war finally ends and return to normal Naruto and his girlfriend's especially ino kiren tayuya Hinata and Sakura definitely be in for a suprise they wouldn't expect that Mei saw and other unexpected surprises he has in store for them he has learned he has yet to unveil to them when Naruto sees Kiren again he should help her and make her realize her mistake and not make it any worse than it already is and see where she's gone wrong and open her eyes and help her the best he can and make her life better and feel safe happy and loved
1/4 c94 Scarease
Pain sadly victim of Danzou ,Madara and Zetsu .Yes he killed people but unlike Orochimaru he did delight cause suffering ,he did not needlessly torture people ,he did kill but straight to the point killing not prolonged .Mean my eyes unredeemable ones are Hiden ,Orochimaru ,Danzou and Zetsu .
Atleast Pain try make better world and he man world had broken .
Killing someone a easy escape for action but to have taken so many lives and then live with guilt and remorse for these deeds .With his power he could done lot help restore world and help it as means of repentance .
Hiden killed people often purposely prolong their suffering ,Danzou and Orochimaru long list vile acts and deed for their selfish ambition .Zetzu not even human and been manipulating Humanity for Centuries creating broken system ,setting eradications of entire civilizations ,and like even longer list crimes .
Saying Pain is unredeemable when the Very ninja Village he wiped out had known to kidnap children for breeding programs ,countless war crimes preform for centuries by clans that formed the village .Ninja Village are Villages full of Hired Killers that do any deed so long profits the village slavery ,genicide ,terrorism ,fraud ,and list goes on .So can't say that Kumo was innocent when compared to long history of treaty breaking ,baby stealing ,and so on .
Out of all Villages two most bloody villages are Kumo and Kiri .
In way what he did saved likely hundred thousands lives that would killed ,tortured ,enslaved ,poisoned and such by Kumo .That reality of Ninja Village it village of Hired Killers ,assassins and theives.
He try put end to all wars .
Pain sadly victim of Danzou ,Madara and Zetsu .Yes he killed people but unlike Orochimaru he did delight cause suffering ,he did not needlessly torture people ,he did kill but straight to the point killing not prolonged .Mean my eyes unredeemable ones are Hiden ,Orochimaru ,Danzou and Zetsu .
Atleast Pain try make better world and he man world had broken .
Killing someone a easy escape for action but to have taken so many lives and then live with guilt and remorse for these deeds .With his power he could done lot help restore world and help it as means of repentance .
Hiden killed people often purposely prolong their suffering ,Danzou and Orochimaru long list vile acts and deed for their selfish ambition .Zetzu not even human and been manipulating Humanity for Centuries creating broken system ,setting eradications of entire civilizations ,and like even longer list crimes .
Saying Pain is unredeemable when the Very ninja Village he wiped out had known to kidnap children for breeding programs ,countless war crimes preform for centuries by clans that formed the village .Ninja Village are Villages full of Hired Killers that do any deed so long profits the village slavery ,genicide ,terrorism ,fraud ,and list goes on .So can't say that Kumo was innocent when compared to long history of treaty breaking ,baby stealing ,and so on .
Out of all Villages two most bloody villages are Kumo and Kiri .
In way what he did saved likely hundred thousands lives that would killed ,tortured ,enslaved ,poisoned and such by Kumo .That reality of Ninja Village it village of Hired Killers ,assassins and theives.
He try put end to all wars .