for The Cleaner11/5/2023 c46 Hadley Hemingway
Well done! I read all the way from Colorado to Texas as we road tripped home, and I delighted in every single chapter. What a gift this fic is, and an incredible example of your writing talent. Love, loved it. I appreciate that you gave Bella a touch of sadness/ambivalence regarding Aro - a horrible villain, but a little boy lost at the very same time. I love a little ambiguity in my heroes and villains, and you wrote Aro and Edward so insightfully. Bella - one of my favorite Bellas EVER. I also appreciate the wry humor throughout - Rosalie and Emmett are hilarious here, but Alice is a real gem! An Alice-centric o/s would be stellar (in your spare time, I know). Thank you sooooo much for the effort you put into this story. I love this Twi genre, especially when its YOU writing!
Well done! I read all the way from Colorado to Texas as we road tripped home, and I delighted in every single chapter. What a gift this fic is, and an incredible example of your writing talent. Love, loved it. I appreciate that you gave Bella a touch of sadness/ambivalence regarding Aro - a horrible villain, but a little boy lost at the very same time. I love a little ambiguity in my heroes and villains, and you wrote Aro and Edward so insightfully. Bella - one of my favorite Bellas EVER. I also appreciate the wry humor throughout - Rosalie and Emmett are hilarious here, but Alice is a real gem! An Alice-centric o/s would be stellar (in your spare time, I know). Thank you sooooo much for the effort you put into this story. I love this Twi genre, especially when its YOU writing!
10/20/2023 c46 
3Evelyne-raconte
I really had a great time reading this fiction.
I almost feel sorry (almost, but not so much) for Misha.
Thank you for sharing your talented words with us.
3Evelyne-raconteI really had a great time reading this fiction.
I almost feel sorry (almost, but not so much) for Misha.
Thank you for sharing your talented words with us.
10/20/2023 c1 rachelke86
This is one of the best written fanfictions I’ve ever read! It’s obvious you out a lot of research with the amount of details you put into this story. Also loved this bad-ass Bella! This story could be a script from an Hollywood action movie ;-)
This is one of the best written fanfictions I’ve ever read! It’s obvious you out a lot of research with the amount of details you put into this story. Also loved this bad-ass Bella! This story could be a script from an Hollywood action movie ;-)
10/7/2023 c46 sangriaforlife27
Since I discovered this one, I spent my entire week rereading it. I hope you are planning for a sequel because these characters you have built are just too beautiful for a one-time thing. Thank you soooo much for this story.
Since I discovered this one, I spent my entire week rereading it. I hope you are planning for a sequel because these characters you have built are just too beautiful for a one-time thing. Thank you soooo much for this story.
10/2/2023 c14 musemum
... is Edward letting Bella know that he sends the "bits" to Esme
... is it because he's helping Carlisle...or something else?
I'm really hoping that it will be Bella who saves Edward in this story... just sayin
... is Edward letting Bella know that he sends the "bits" to Esme
... is it because he's helping Carlisle...or something else?
I'm really hoping that it will be Bella who saves Edward in this story... just sayin
10/1/2023 c4 musemum
thus just gets betterbetter! Love Bella's response to the champagne AND Edward's amusement at it.
thus just gets betterbetter! Love Bella's response to the champagne AND Edward's amusement at it.
9/24/2023 c46 1laura lou who
Damn! This story is off the charts amazing. I cant wait to read it again!
1laura lou whoDamn! This story is off the charts amazing. I cant wait to read it again!
7/19/2023 c46 Gran06
I absolutely loved this journey you haven shared with us! Is there any hope for a sequel? I am not ready to let this Bella and Edward go!
I absolutely loved this journey you haven shared with us! Is there any hope for a sequel? I am not ready to let this Bella and Edward go!