for The Cleaner11/4/2021 c1 Hopeful Reader
Another story and its not even Christmas yet!
You get our attention from the get go and I cannot wait to see how this one develops as Bella already sounds like a badass! Quite sure your less serious and looser outlined story will still be head and shoulders above all on this site. Cannot wait for the next chapter!
Another story and its not even Christmas yet!
You get our attention from the get go and I cannot wait to see how this one develops as Bella already sounds like a badass! Quite sure your less serious and looser outlined story will still be head and shoulders above all on this site. Cannot wait for the next chapter!
11/4/2021 c1 TwistStix
You got me! I assumed it was Edward until the very end. I really like that it isn’t. This is going to be such fun and I love the action fics and you do them so well.
You got me! I assumed it was Edward until the very end. I really like that it isn’t. This is going to be such fun and I love the action fics and you do them so well.
11/4/2021 c1 FrustratedLawStudent
Great start! Can't wait to see where you'll go from here! Thanks for aharing
Great start! Can't wait to see where you'll go from here! Thanks for aharing
11/3/2021 c1 trisha63
Well, Howdy Partner, here we are again, ready for another great adventure! I kinda like that our sharp-shooter this time is Bella, because why should the men have all of the fun! LOL As much as I loved OPERATION, it was extremely technical with it's descriptions of the weapons, areas, and everything military, often baffling this old mind of mine! Clearly, either you or someone close to you must have been in the military for you to have that detailed information and boy was it impressive. I think I am going to love this one just fine and I hope you can have fun and just let the words flow, without being weighed down with to much legwork. Take care and stay safe, Trisha :}
Well, Howdy Partner, here we are again, ready for another great adventure! I kinda like that our sharp-shooter this time is Bella, because why should the men have all of the fun! LOL As much as I loved OPERATION, it was extremely technical with it's descriptions of the weapons, areas, and everything military, often baffling this old mind of mine! Clearly, either you or someone close to you must have been in the military for you to have that detailed information and boy was it impressive. I think I am going to love this one just fine and I hope you can have fun and just let the words flow, without being weighed down with to much legwork. Take care and stay safe, Trisha :}
11/3/2021 c1 
2musicdaydreams
I was wondering if The Cleaner referred to Edward or Bella. Now I know. Looking forward to more.
2musicdaydreamsI was wondering if The Cleaner referred to Edward or Bella. Now I know. Looking forward to more.