for She Don't Wanna Marry Me
37/1/2023 c5 browneyedgirl73
Cute short story. I liked the plot but…you need a beta…quick. You may bot realize it but bad grammar and spelling detract from a story. For instance, every time you used the word ‘maybe’, you spelled it mabey.
Cute short story. I liked the plot but…you need a beta…quick. You may bot realize it but bad grammar and spelling detract from a story. For instance, every time you used the word ‘maybe’, you spelled it mabey.
1/19/2023 c5 hannahclan
Great story . You sure have talent . Hope you are working on something new for us . Thank you .
Great story . You sure have talent . Hope you are working on something new for us . Thank you .
7/1/2022 c5 cctwilight
The demise of the wedding was something else! Loved that Bella admitted she didn't really love Jake. Bella finding Edward in their spot was just perfect! No doubt Edward will have Bella as his wife as soon as possible! Loved the story!
The demise of the wedding was something else! Loved that Bella admitted she didn't really love Jake. Bella finding Edward in their spot was just perfect! No doubt Edward will have Bella as his wife as soon as possible! Loved the story!
6/10/2022 c5 VryUnique
Love a HEA. They are both to blame, Edward should have came clean, Bella should have seen what was in front of her.
Thanks so much for sharing.
Crowley? Supernatural? Cool! Love that show.
Love a HEA. They are both to blame, Edward should have came clean, Bella should have seen what was in front of her.
Thanks so much for sharing.
Crowley? Supernatural? Cool! Love that show.
6/10/2022 c4 VryUnique
Intense! Jacob is obviously a piece of shit, probably cheating and smirking at Edward. I hope she calls it off.
Intense! Jacob is obviously a piece of shit, probably cheating and smirking at Edward. I hope she calls it off.
6/10/2022 c2 VryUnique
How could she not know how he feels? Not feel the same? MYbe she does feel for him but doesn’t realize he feels the same.
How could she not know how he feels? Not feel the same? MYbe she does feel for him but doesn’t realize he feels the same.