12/21/2023 c1 Ariadne Venegas
I really like this spin in the challenge!
So he doesn’t have an harem, he is not really married, didn’t win a lot of money but he have a really good time and found a friend maybe something more!
I really like this spin in the challenge!
So he doesn’t have an harem, he is not really married, didn’t win a lot of money but he have a really good time and found a friend maybe something more!
8/31/2022 c1 1Celexs Draconia
This was a fun read. It went in ways that i wasnt expecting, excellent work.
Cel
This was a fun read. It went in ways that i wasnt expecting, excellent work.
Cel
8/14/2022 c1 envirosue
This was great fun to read. Thank you so much for writing this heart warming bit of fun. Sincerely, there were parts I laughed out loud, well done!
This was great fun to read. Thank you so much for writing this heart warming bit of fun. Sincerely, there were parts I laughed out loud, well done!
7/27/2022 c1 reviewer
Hilarious fic with an unexpectedly sweet ending
Hilarious fic with an unexpectedly sweet ending
6/27/2022 c1 Neotono
I read this before months ago then couldn't find it again despite looking for ages. I'm glad that I stumbled upon it again.
I read this before months ago then couldn't find it again despite looking for ages. I'm glad that I stumbled upon it again.
5/8/2022 c1 Ingriz
This definitely felt like a Vegas trip. Booze, checking on friends, tattoos, girls, and booze.
Great fic.
This definitely felt like a Vegas trip. Booze, checking on friends, tattoos, girls, and booze.
Great fic.
4/17/2022 c1 1asmellysmell
Actually incredible. Really wish there were more fics like this: short and sweet.
Actually incredible. Really wish there were more fics like this: short and sweet.
3/14/2022 c1 1Majerus
Holy crap, this goes from punch line to punch line, it had me laughing regularly, I am well and truly hooked!
"
"What the bloody hell happened?" he said, after his brain finally rebooted. "Why's your shirt all wet and why in Merlin's saggy bollocks are you wearing Nagini's American cousin for trousers? Did someone mug you?"
"
*oh crap oh crap oh crap that had me about crying*
"
"Please don't sue me," she said, taking deep breaths in to calm herself. "I'm still paying off my broomstick loans. I know I shouldn't have bought the Viper 3000, but I swear it's my only effective coping skill."
"
First of all, you just nailed the American psyche in the first line, and gave some hope for their future with her speed addiction - something Harry can definitely share with her! :D
Holy crap, he got the tat stone... erm, well, relatively sober! lol
Harry's stories of Ron just keep getting... freer... with every telling!
I finished with a big, happy grin on my face, well done and thanks!
Holy crap, this goes from punch line to punch line, it had me laughing regularly, I am well and truly hooked!
"
"What the bloody hell happened?" he said, after his brain finally rebooted. "Why's your shirt all wet and why in Merlin's saggy bollocks are you wearing Nagini's American cousin for trousers? Did someone mug you?"
"
*oh crap oh crap oh crap that had me about crying*
"
"Please don't sue me," she said, taking deep breaths in to calm herself. "I'm still paying off my broomstick loans. I know I shouldn't have bought the Viper 3000, but I swear it's my only effective coping skill."
"
First of all, you just nailed the American psyche in the first line, and gave some hope for their future with her speed addiction - something Harry can definitely share with her! :D
Holy crap, he got the tat stone... erm, well, relatively sober! lol
Harry's stories of Ron just keep getting... freer... with every telling!
I finished with a big, happy grin on my face, well done and thanks!
2/22/2022 c1 owl3764
Beaut little story. Glad Ron got lucky (he cops enough crap - mostly deserved) and Harry had a good time too.
Beaut little story. Glad Ron got lucky (he cops enough crap - mostly deserved) and Harry had a good time too.
2/11/2022 c1 Guest1138
Why did you write the entire thing as a flashback? It was unnecessary. Just slip the first part near the end and you have a concise and complete story with no stupid plot devices.
Since neither of them remembered the night in that much detail, the flashback removed the suspension of disbelief required for the story in the first place. How can we read it from Mattie's perspective (or Harry's as he listens to her story) if she was foggy on what happened? Right, we can't.
There are times when flashbacks are necessary, and this wasn't one of them.
Why did you write the entire thing as a flashback? It was unnecessary. Just slip the first part near the end and you have a concise and complete story with no stupid plot devices.
Since neither of them remembered the night in that much detail, the flashback removed the suspension of disbelief required for the story in the first place. How can we read it from Mattie's perspective (or Harry's as he listens to her story) if she was foggy on what happened? Right, we can't.
There are times when flashbacks are necessary, and this wasn't one of them.