
4/30/2022 c18 CoppertopJ
Wow, that was a powerful chapter. With all the emotions, I feel drained. You have done such a wonderful job with these two that they have become my favorite E&B. Thank you for the update.
Wow, that was a powerful chapter. With all the emotions, I feel drained. You have done such a wonderful job with these two that they have become my favorite E&B. Thank you for the update.
4/17/2022 c17 fresh-BLOOD-was-drawn-2night
Ohh I loved that Bella and Charlie got closure. And the way you had them merge their power. I feel that Jan should be stripped of her leadership power and either killed or exciel.
Ohh I loved that Bella and Charlie got closure. And the way you had them merge their power. I feel that Jan should be stripped of her leadership power and either killed or exciel.
4/17/2022 c17 traceybuie
That Lyndsey was an evil piece of work, wasn't she? Her and Caius both were, but at least she didn't lie and grovel when they were losing the battle. Ugh...
Thank goodness that our fighting crew only had part of the evil vamps left to deal with. Now they need to deal with Jane and any other traitors. grrr...
I'm relieved that Charlie got to apologize to Bella before he died. Bella needed that peace.
...What a great chapter that was well worth the wait... Thanks for writing and sharing. Looking forward to the decades long sex vacation for Bella and Edward... LOL
That Lyndsey was an evil piece of work, wasn't she? Her and Caius both were, but at least she didn't lie and grovel when they were losing the battle. Ugh...
Thank goodness that our fighting crew only had part of the evil vamps left to deal with. Now they need to deal with Jane and any other traitors. grrr...
I'm relieved that Charlie got to apologize to Bella before he died. Bella needed that peace.
...What a great chapter that was well worth the wait... Thanks for writing and sharing. Looking forward to the decades long sex vacation for Bella and Edward... LOL
4/16/2022 c17 Twi-Holic68
RIP Charlie...even though he was kind of a jerk it was still sad. Can't wait for the epi!
RIP Charlie...even though he was kind of a jerk it was still sad. Can't wait for the epi!
4/16/2022 c17 Shazzeer
I’m so sad for Bella. But at least Charlie got to tell her that he always loved her. Now let them live in peace!
I’m so sad for Bella. But at least Charlie got to tell her that he always loved her. Now let them live in peace!
4/16/2022 c17 CoppertopJ
One of those loose ends has to be Jane. Torch her freaking ass! I was sad that she couldn't save Charlie but so happy that they got their closure. You truly wrote one hell of a last chapter for this story. It has been fascinating, entertaining, and a pure adrenaline rush at times. Well done. Looking forward to the epi.
One of those loose ends has to be Jane. Torch her freaking ass! I was sad that she couldn't save Charlie but so happy that they got their closure. You truly wrote one hell of a last chapter for this story. It has been fascinating, entertaining, and a pure adrenaline rush at times. Well done. Looking forward to the epi.
4/11/2022 c16 Twi-Holic68
Ok first, I love the Pheromones Triology! Sorry I didn't review but I was too excited to the rest of it. I understand about being overwhelmed with RL so I won't put any pressure on you for the next chapter and Ii will try to be patient, lol. Hopefully I will see a update soon. Take care Twi-Holic68
Ok first, I love the Pheromones Triology! Sorry I didn't review but I was too excited to the rest of it. I understand about being overwhelmed with RL so I won't put any pressure on you for the next chapter and Ii will try to be patient, lol. Hopefully I will see a update soon. Take care Twi-Holic68
3/20/2022 c16 CoppertopJ
Ding, dong, the bastard Livius is dead. I was not happy with Edward’s performance, but thrilled that Bella came through. Now, let’s get the two douchebags and end this once and for all! Hope things get better for you soon, girl!
Ding, dong, the bastard Livius is dead. I was not happy with Edward’s performance, but thrilled that Bella came through. Now, let’s get the two douchebags and end this once and for all! Hope things get better for you soon, girl!
3/20/2022 c16 fresh-BLOOD-was-drawn-2night
Sorry to hear that. Hope all is okay. Happy they worked it out. Can’t wait to read the next chapter.
Sorry to hear that. Hope all is okay. Happy they worked it out. Can’t wait to read the next chapter.
3/20/2022 c16 traceybuie
That would have been an a 'too easy' battle if Edward didn't ALMOST ruin everything for everyone. I'm so relieved he snapped out of it, with Bella's help and the help of their powers. I can literally see him growing and changing during his run back to Forks and during the 'after battle' discussion.
Badass Bella held her own during the battle and during the argument, all while being loving and supportive to Edward. :)
Hopefully Edward will NOT repeat the same mistakes in the battle with Caius and Lindsey. But the group should be able to surprise Caius, since the 'cell phone' vamp was taken out first by Edward. That is a definite advantage. :)
Is the group going to take out Jane as well? Isn't she an enemy too? Hmmm...
Thanks for writing the great chapter and sharing it with us.
That would have been an a 'too easy' battle if Edward didn't ALMOST ruin everything for everyone. I'm so relieved he snapped out of it, with Bella's help and the help of their powers. I can literally see him growing and changing during his run back to Forks and during the 'after battle' discussion.
Badass Bella held her own during the battle and during the argument, all while being loving and supportive to Edward. :)
Hopefully Edward will NOT repeat the same mistakes in the battle with Caius and Lindsey. But the group should be able to surprise Caius, since the 'cell phone' vamp was taken out first by Edward. That is a definite advantage. :)
Is the group going to take out Jane as well? Isn't she an enemy too? Hmmm...
Thanks for writing the great chapter and sharing it with us.
3/16/2022 c12 Shazzeer
Ha ha, Poor Alistair. But no choice with a mate like Tanya. Quite the ironic pairing but just perfect. But yeah, give me all the lemony godness ;)
Ha ha, Poor Alistair. But no choice with a mate like Tanya. Quite the ironic pairing but just perfect. But yeah, give me all the lemony godness ;)