
2/27/2022 c15 traceybuie
The Logan family's death and it's 2 cover ups made me so sad. I would have puked two. I almost did just reading about it. shivers...
Now hopefully Livius and his small group will die painfully, slowly and completely in the next chapter. Side note...I really don't like Lyndsey. Ugh...
Edward is going to get yelled into the proverbial dog house by Bella. LOL He will hopefully learn just how strong his mate is. ;)
Thanks for writing and sharing.
The Logan family's death and it's 2 cover ups made me so sad. I would have puked two. I almost did just reading about it. shivers...
Now hopefully Livius and his small group will die painfully, slowly and completely in the next chapter. Side note...I really don't like Lyndsey. Ugh...
Edward is going to get yelled into the proverbial dog house by Bella. LOL He will hopefully learn just how strong his mate is. ;)
Thanks for writing and sharing.
2/27/2022 c15 CoppertopJ
Okay, the Logan family, while their deaths were heartbreaking and depressing, taught a valuable lesson and did serve a true purpose for Alistair. As for Livius...I am thinking they should remove his limbs and have him watch as they roast them over an open fire like chestnuts. ;)
But Lindsey...I truly hope you have one sadistic and horrific torture and death planned out for that bitch.
Great update.
Okay, the Logan family, while their deaths were heartbreaking and depressing, taught a valuable lesson and did serve a true purpose for Alistair. As for Livius...I am thinking they should remove his limbs and have him watch as they roast them over an open fire like chestnuts. ;)
But Lindsey...I truly hope you have one sadistic and horrific torture and death planned out for that bitch.
Great update.
2/27/2022 c15 fresh-BLOOD-was-drawn-2night
Edward needs to see that Bella is a vampire now and that she can take care of her self more than when she was human. But I also see Edward old fashioned values as well as him trying to protect his mate.
Can’t wait to read about the battle.
Livius is going down.
Edward needs to see that Bella is a vampire now and that she can take care of her self more than when she was human. But I also see Edward old fashioned values as well as him trying to protect his mate.
Can’t wait to read about the battle.
Livius is going down.
2/20/2022 c14 traceybuie
Caius might kill Lyndsey himself for letting Bella and the others know about Livius and his talent. HA!
I loved that bad ass Bella can keep Edward from 'hiding' shit from her with his over protectiveness. Edward was shocked when Bella read him against his will. LOL Pushing her thoughts to Tanya was amazing too.
Poor Alistair is still a little wary. Since the group is so out numbered, the planning is going to be key to survival and winning.
Is it bad that I still don't care about Charlie? LOL Thanks for writing and sharing.
Caius might kill Lyndsey himself for letting Bella and the others know about Livius and his talent. HA!
I loved that bad ass Bella can keep Edward from 'hiding' shit from her with his over protectiveness. Edward was shocked when Bella read him against his will. LOL Pushing her thoughts to Tanya was amazing too.
Poor Alistair is still a little wary. Since the group is so out numbered, the planning is going to be key to survival and winning.
Is it bad that I still don't care about Charlie? LOL Thanks for writing and sharing.
2/20/2022 c14 CoppertopJ
My idea for Livius...FLAME THROWER. Hit him with a flame thrower! Get the others when they leave to hunt. Catch them when they are going after their meals. They leave but never come back. As for that bitch Lindsey...tits on the bbq. I was about to scream at Bella for her moment of weakness until I remembered that they haven't had a break since meeting. Okay, I am getting my seatbelt buckled and ready for the bumpy ride coming up.
My idea for Livius...FLAME THROWER. Hit him with a flame thrower! Get the others when they leave to hunt. Catch them when they are going after their meals. They leave but never come back. As for that bitch Lindsey...tits on the bbq. I was about to scream at Bella for her moment of weakness until I remembered that they haven't had a break since meeting. Okay, I am getting my seatbelt buckled and ready for the bumpy ride coming up.
2/6/2022 c13
2That'sMzPeachesTYVM
They should be able to shield him from where they’re at, right? And their physical shield outfit to be able to crush Lyndsey, if they use them in tandem. Or, I would think , at least!
I can’t wait for them to be able to just stand in their meadow and destroy Jane without lifting a finger.
Their combined powers are a definite force!
*huggles*

They should be able to shield him from where they’re at, right? And their physical shield outfit to be able to crush Lyndsey, if they use them in tandem. Or, I would think , at least!
I can’t wait for them to be able to just stand in their meadow and destroy Jane without lifting a finger.
Their combined powers are a definite force!
*huggles*
2/6/2022 c13 traceybuie
Edward and Bella sure had a romantic, wonderful healing and training day by themselves. I loved how they helped and cheered for each other in between sexy times.
Hopefully, our sexy powerful couple can get to Tanya and Alistair, or get their shields there, in time to help them. Maybe they can get rid of this Lindsey.
Thanks for writing and sharing the truly great chapter. :)
Edward and Bella sure had a romantic, wonderful healing and training day by themselves. I loved how they helped and cheered for each other in between sexy times.
Hopefully, our sexy powerful couple can get to Tanya and Alistair, or get their shields there, in time to help them. Maybe they can get rid of this Lindsey.
Thanks for writing and sharing the truly great chapter. :)
2/6/2022 c12 That'sMzPeachesTYVM
I got sidetracked from this chapter last week, and didn’t remember to come back to it! Dagnabbit!
I am SO glad I realized it. I am so glad they finally completed this bonding. Can’t wait to see how it changes them.
I got sidetracked from this chapter last week, and didn’t remember to come back to it! Dagnabbit!
I am SO glad I realized it. I am so glad they finally completed this bonding. Can’t wait to see how it changes them.
2/6/2022 c13 fresh-BLOOD-was-drawn-2night
That was an amazing chapter. I really like there new connection. Can’t wait to see all the drama unfold next chapter.
That was an amazing chapter. I really like there new connection. Can’t wait to see all the drama unfold next chapter.
2/6/2022 c13 CoppertopJ
Oh, they are going to kick Lindsey's ass, rip her apart, and bbq her tits on a LaPush bonfire! So happy to see this update. Hope you are doing well. I read the author's notes and will be sending positive thoughts your way.
Excellent update.
Oh, they are going to kick Lindsey's ass, rip her apart, and bbq her tits on a LaPush bonfire! So happy to see this update. Hope you are doing well. I read the author's notes and will be sending positive thoughts your way.
Excellent update.