for Devil of a Wizard5/19 c4 george17
This was almost a straight replay of canon with all the canon events forced to happen even if it didn't really make sense. What's the point? There are a lot of reviews so maybe this gets better later, but after four long chapters and almost nothing new happening I'm passing on this.
Great idea for a fic but it's not taking advantage of any of the huge opportunities for something new that this crossover would suggest. Instead it's a retelling of canon with so far one or two very minor changes.
This was almost a straight replay of canon with all the canon events forced to happen even if it didn't really make sense. What's the point? There are a lot of reviews so maybe this gets better later, but after four long chapters and almost nothing new happening I'm passing on this.
Great idea for a fic but it's not taking advantage of any of the huge opportunities for something new that this crossover would suggest. Instead it's a retelling of canon with so far one or two very minor changes.
5/19 c48 Spiral-Voltron-Zero0Q1
This chapter was freaking great!
Really good to see James and Lily are doing okay, and they have a restraning order against Adam?
HA!
Thats hilarious!
And I loved that part with Cedric doing the thing from Planet of the apes!
So Funny!
This chapter was freaking great!
Really good to see James and Lily are doing okay, and they have a restraning order against Adam?
HA!
Thats hilarious!
And I loved that part with Cedric doing the thing from Planet of the apes!
So Funny!
5/16 c48 Puck627
I am glad you understand about my impatient.
Now i love what you've done with these chapter. Seeing James and Lily in there heaven forms was GREAT and my favorite moment from the Heaven part of the story, is hearing that James and Lily put a restraining order on Adam, THAT WAS FANTASTIC! Adam is a pain in the butt, so he totally deserves it too.
I'm sorry that you don't have Devil of a Wizard fanart up on DeviantArt, cause i think that this story deserves all the love that it gets from both fans and the amazing people that creates it! Here is an idea for one, Harry going on a date with his girls in Hogsmeade and drinking Butter Beer at the Three Broomsticks. I like this idea, cause i can picture Harry wearing a black leather jacket for the date.
I can't wait for the next chapter, where will see Satan and Belphegor in their human disguises, cause that is one of the things i'm looking forward to most, seeing all seven deadly sins in one place! I wonder if Lucifer will have two of the sins guard Barty Crouch Jr so Fudge will not murder the only witness that they have to prepare for war. Also i know you wont tell us about what you'll do to Umbridge, but can you tell us what you think of my Home Alone idea, cause i'd love it if Umbridge gets the blowtorch to the head trap. That's my favorite Home Alone trap. Now that i think about it, maybe Harry showing Fred and George the Home Alone movies wouldn't be a bad idea, cause they could do all the traps or some of their own on Umbridge right there at Hogwarts or sent her a letter about a secret meeting place made by Dumbledore, so she and her helpers go there and it rans hell on earth, thanks to them walking into trap after trap!
Also what has happen to Blitzo, Millie, and Moxxie? We haven't seen them for a while. What do you have in mind for them? And that's all i've got right now, other then wondering about what will you do with Krum once he is in Hell? Does he help Harry and the gang or does he stay with the Spider Overlord, who's name i always have trouble spelling.
Anyway LOVE Chapter 48 and i knew it would be a good one and i'm very GLAD to see you put in Emily at long last, i thought she wouldn't appear in this story, but i'm glad i was wrong. PLEASE UPDATE as soon as you can and i'll try not pasture you about hurrying to put up the next chapter!
I am glad you understand about my impatient.
Now i love what you've done with these chapter. Seeing James and Lily in there heaven forms was GREAT and my favorite moment from the Heaven part of the story, is hearing that James and Lily put a restraining order on Adam, THAT WAS FANTASTIC! Adam is a pain in the butt, so he totally deserves it too.
I'm sorry that you don't have Devil of a Wizard fanart up on DeviantArt, cause i think that this story deserves all the love that it gets from both fans and the amazing people that creates it! Here is an idea for one, Harry going on a date with his girls in Hogsmeade and drinking Butter Beer at the Three Broomsticks. I like this idea, cause i can picture Harry wearing a black leather jacket for the date.
I can't wait for the next chapter, where will see Satan and Belphegor in their human disguises, cause that is one of the things i'm looking forward to most, seeing all seven deadly sins in one place! I wonder if Lucifer will have two of the sins guard Barty Crouch Jr so Fudge will not murder the only witness that they have to prepare for war. Also i know you wont tell us about what you'll do to Umbridge, but can you tell us what you think of my Home Alone idea, cause i'd love it if Umbridge gets the blowtorch to the head trap. That's my favorite Home Alone trap. Now that i think about it, maybe Harry showing Fred and George the Home Alone movies wouldn't be a bad idea, cause they could do all the traps or some of their own on Umbridge right there at Hogwarts or sent her a letter about a secret meeting place made by Dumbledore, so she and her helpers go there and it rans hell on earth, thanks to them walking into trap after trap!
Also what has happen to Blitzo, Millie, and Moxxie? We haven't seen them for a while. What do you have in mind for them? And that's all i've got right now, other then wondering about what will you do with Krum once he is in Hell? Does he help Harry and the gang or does he stay with the Spider Overlord, who's name i always have trouble spelling.
Anyway LOVE Chapter 48 and i knew it would be a good one and i'm very GLAD to see you put in Emily at long last, i thought she wouldn't appear in this story, but i'm glad i was wrong. PLEASE UPDATE as soon as you can and i'll try not pasture you about hurrying to put up the next chapter!
5/15 c48 Fire turtle
He it's been a while so I can't quite remember, where are we in the hazbin hotel/ helluva boss story? Or have we not started that yet.
He it's been a while so I can't quite remember, where are we in the hazbin hotel/ helluva boss story? Or have we not started that yet.
5/16 c48 
10supersandman86
Well that should be an interesting next chapter with all the sins in one castle. I wonder what disguise Satan would take? I mean personally myself I thought he'd look cool as a Tim Curry lookalike like in "Legends". At least we know how James and Lily will get to see their son. Also Sara may be naive not thinking God doesn't know what she's up to. But I could be wrong as God can't be everywhere, he's not Santa after all. Can't wait to see how Harry handles the maze with how he been raised and trained, I don't think even Riddle will know what to do with that. Only thing I can see different is the death. Viktor will die of course but will Cedric too? We'll just have to see.
10supersandman86Well that should be an interesting next chapter with all the sins in one castle. I wonder what disguise Satan would take? I mean personally myself I thought he'd look cool as a Tim Curry lookalike like in "Legends". At least we know how James and Lily will get to see their son. Also Sara may be naive not thinking God doesn't know what she's up to. But I could be wrong as God can't be everywhere, he's not Santa after all. Can't wait to see how Harry handles the maze with how he been raised and trained, I don't think even Riddle will know what to do with that. Only thing I can see different is the death. Viktor will die of course but will Cedric too? We'll just have to see.
5/16 c48 1rathiane700
C’est quand que Harry vas recevoir la baguette que Lucifer a demandé à Monsieur Ollivander ?
1rathiane700C’est quand que Harry vas recevoir la baguette que Lucifer a demandé à Monsieur Ollivander ?
5/15 c48 12Esmereilda
one of these days adam's mouth is get him into more trouble than he can get himself out of and sera isn't gunna be there to bail him out also barty is all the closer to getting caught than before
12Esmereildaone of these days adam's mouth is get him into more trouble than he can get himself out of and sera isn't gunna be there to bail him out also barty is all the closer to getting caught than before
5/15 c48 HPneedsHAREMS
OOOOOOOOOOOOHOHOOHOOOO SHIIIIIIIIT! The third event is gonna go to hell...literally! I mean all the sins, the king and queen, Charlie and maybe vaggie, and his three girlfriend's!
The carnage and rage will be LEGENDARY! I wanna say fuck pubic views and have them do partial transformations or release their rage in a form a miasma that could poison or kill those with evil/taint in their souls while the truly innocent only have cold chills, vomiting/shitting/pissing themselves, or pass out! Like a mix of bleach's spiritual pressure, one piece's conqueror's haki, and naruto's bijuu's toxic chakra!
OOOOOOOOOOOOHOHOOHOOOO SHIIIIIIIIT! The third event is gonna go to hell...literally! I mean all the sins, the king and queen, Charlie and maybe vaggie, and his three girlfriend's!
The carnage and rage will be LEGENDARY! I wanna say fuck pubic views and have them do partial transformations or release their rage in a form a miasma that could poison or kill those with evil/taint in their souls while the truly innocent only have cold chills, vomiting/shitting/pissing themselves, or pass out! Like a mix of bleach's spiritual pressure, one piece's conqueror's haki, and naruto's bijuu's toxic chakra!
5/15 c48 Foxhound17
Another great chapter! Also, Sera, your arrogance is showing if you think God has no idea what you and Adam are doing. Can't wait to see you get ripped a new one like a bratty child deserves.
Another great chapter! Also, Sera, your arrogance is showing if you think God has no idea what you and Adam are doing. Can't wait to see you get ripped a new one like a bratty child deserves.
5/14 c48 samoht
Super Bravo! :)
Super Bravo! :)
5/15 c48 7Legend of the Kyuubi
I can already imagine Fudge’s reaction to Satan pissing him off.
“And who are you, sir, to talk that way to me.”
Satan’s chuckles are deep throaty and rumbled like stone falling down a mountain, his tone hotter than magma, unsettled the British Minister of Magic, as the disguise Sin answered, “I am the mastermind.”
7Legend of the KyuubiI can already imagine Fudge’s reaction to Satan pissing him off.
“And who are you, sir, to talk that way to me.”
Satan’s chuckles are deep throaty and rumbled like stone falling down a mountain, his tone hotter than magma, unsettled the British Minister of Magic, as the disguise Sin answered, “I am the mastermind.”
5/15 c48 Kitobeater123
amazing chapter. but a better explanation on the restraing order would be nice as well as hevans and Gods reactation to the extermination via the graveyard scene.
regards
Kitobeater123
amazing chapter. but a better explanation on the restraing order would be nice as well as hevans and Gods reactation to the extermination via the graveyard scene.
regards
Kitobeater123
5/15 c48 Y0h.N3e
Great chapter reading
- The Heaven segment: I am not surprised to read that Adam got a restraining order from the Potters is the funniest and appropriate action towards him.
- Lilith is in mama bear mode at Harry's girlfriends to give him some more space because of training and being a target by a Death Eater spy. Also, a slow buildup of her wrath nearly releasing is very
- My favorite part that gets me excited is when Lucifer and Fudge argue. It is a good conflict on how Cornelius Fudge is too focused on himself as "important" which will prove Lucifer and anyone suspicious of the current Minister's agenda.
- Belle/Belphegor is likely to be a peacemaker between Lucas/Lucifer and Stan/Satan. She is very fluffy and cute.
- The third match is going to be wild in a scary way.
Can't wait for the next one
Great chapter reading
- The Heaven segment: I am not surprised to read that Adam got a restraining order from the Potters is the funniest and appropriate action towards him.
- Lilith is in mama bear mode at Harry's girlfriends to give him some more space because of training and being a target by a Death Eater spy. Also, a slow buildup of her wrath nearly releasing is very
- My favorite part that gets me excited is when Lucifer and Fudge argue. It is a good conflict on how Cornelius Fudge is too focused on himself as "important" which will prove Lucifer and anyone suspicious of the current Minister's agenda.
- Belle/Belphegor is likely to be a peacemaker between Lucas/Lucifer and Stan/Satan. She is very fluffy and cute.
- The third match is going to be wild in a scary way.
Can't wait for the next one
5/14 c48 The Background Conquerer
Well that was a good chapter!
I did like the segment of Heaven. Adam still being no different than the demons he slaughters, Emily being... well, Emily as usual.
Glad that Lilith kept Harry's girlfriends in line this time.
And now we're nearing the third tournament and the return of Lord Voldemort!
Also, I hope that you add in the Sphinx riddle from the book because for some reason, I just loved that moment during the Third Task chapter.
Also, will the rest of the Morningstar family find out the James, Sirius, Pettigrew and (somewhat) Lupin were bullies to Snape? If they do, how will they take it when they find out that James isn't the person that everyone said he was?
Well that was a good chapter!
I did like the segment of Heaven. Adam still being no different than the demons he slaughters, Emily being... well, Emily as usual.
Glad that Lilith kept Harry's girlfriends in line this time.
And now we're nearing the third tournament and the return of Lord Voldemort!
Also, I hope that you add in the Sphinx riddle from the book because for some reason, I just loved that moment during the Third Task chapter.
Also, will the rest of the Morningstar family find out the James, Sirius, Pettigrew and (somewhat) Lupin were bullies to Snape? If they do, how will they take it when they find out that James isn't the person that everyone said he was?