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2/22/2022 c8 Mugen-Muse
Still, Taylor acting as a conduit through which skills, spells, and anything else can come through from other universes sounds very interesting.
2/22/2022 c8 5Keldin
Huh. This is part of what was the previous chapter 7, right? Or was that what the top comment was about?
2/22/2022 c7 deadal
shame: You made me giggle!
2/22/2022 c7 Mugen-Muse
Still amusing though.
2/22/2022 c7 Xenoguyver
This was a fun read. But if Toltiir can read these comments, can I give a suggestion? Why not make Taylor a Deunamist/Compatible Ultraman Host or give her an Ultraman Factor and Ultraman themed Power Armor similar to the Ultraman Netflix Anime?
2/22/2022 c7 Keldin
Always fun seeing a new chapter from you, but I was right in the middle of reading the one with the silver dragon inside Taylor when I reloaded to see if the trailing 'p's had vanished. And they had. Along with the chapter itself?
2/22/2022 c7 6helpusobi1kenobi
where is the other chapter? One where Taylor had a Dragon sealed into her. I liked reading that.
2/22/2022 c7 Eriktheviking70
An intriguing story.
2/22/2022 c7 Jimm
I think something's gone wrong with your upload-chapter 7 has a 'p' at the end of every paragraph...
2/15/2022 c6 Difdi
Given the silver signature of the power Taylor has, this could also be a Sailor Moon fic - possibly an alternate spin on it where Queen Serenity annihilated Metallia (and all its forces) before giving her daughter another chance at life, but she only had enough power left for one reincarnation.
2/15/2022 c5 Difdi
Almost everything on the X-Wing could be replicated through normal engineering except the hyperdrive. Hyperdrive relies on the Force being present, and tunnels through it to reach destinations.

The weapons are definitely replicable. Proton torpedoes are fusion-based nuclear weapons (without the fission stage of conventional nukes), the ones on an X-Wing being variable yield with a maximum yield of about 5 kilotons and a minimum roughly equal to a concussion missile (conventional, albeit high tech, chemical explosive warhead). The laser cannons are exactly what it says on the tin - blasters would be impossible to replicate due to a lack of tibanna gas.

Repulsorlift systems originally needed the Force to produce, but you can use a repulsorlift system to make more repulsorlift systems, so as long as Libromancer operates the anti-gravity systems to make more, it would be replicable.

Everything else is just engineering.
2/15/2022 c4 Difdi
Actually, the Star Wars moon is a Bible reference.

A McDonalds worker turning into a zombie is kinda funny. That guy internalized ‘worker drone’ waaaay too much - though I suppose he might have wound up as a giant ant if he’d seen his work as more useful.

Being familiar with Worm but not Dragon Highway, and not having read Worm Turns, the name Rime was a bit jarring - Alexandria’s XO on the Los Angeles Protectorate team uses that name too.
2/15/2022 c3 Difdi
You have a contextual typo in the threat assesment - rogue hero is an oxymoron. What the PRT calls a rogue is a parahuman who chooses not to be a hero or a villain, and either just doesn’t use their powers at all, or uses them for civilian life. Most rogues eventually end up being forced to choose hero or villain, most commonly by tripping over the laws that make use of parahuman powers as a substitute for human skills in business competition with normal humans a crime. That’s how the rogue group Uppermost ended up turning into the villain group The Elite.
2/15/2022 c2 Difdi
Only “potentially terrifying”? Someone get MM a psych evaluation, immediately!

Bonesaw is a victim of Jack Slash’s Master power, not a willing accomplice. Mannequin is a Simurgh victim. Neither chose to be evil. Both would technically count as hostages, so why did Taylor murder them of she’s trying to prevent evil? Killing them for being victims of the Nine is actually more evil than if Taylor killed everyone in Shady Cove as collateral damage to taking out the Nine.
2/14/2022 c1 Difdi
That last scene - is Simmy about to visit Taylor and ask for a pokemon?
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