for The Mustard Caper6/1/2022 c2 
90eoraptor
I like it, so far you have gotten the tone of the series down pat and I am looking forward to the next chapters to find out who Kimie's first arch foe will be.
90eoraptorI like it, so far you have gotten the tone of the series down pat and I am looking forward to the next chapters to find out who Kimie's first arch foe will be.
3/26/2022 c2 134bcbdrums
ohhhh poor kim and bonnie, sounds like they're in for a stressful field trip! but perhaps this is where tara's interest in ron begins? very interesting. and LOL at ron having destroyed a painting! i'm excited for the next chapter!
134bcbdrumsohhhh poor kim and bonnie, sounds like they're in for a stressful field trip! but perhaps this is where tara's interest in ron begins? very interesting. and LOL at ron having destroyed a painting! i'm excited for the next chapter!
11/26/2021 c1 bcbdrums
ahhhh a hilarious beginning! i now want to try a fried pickle dipped in mustard! and i noticed an overalls cameo!
ahhhh a hilarious beginning! i now want to try a fried pickle dipped in mustard! and i noticed an overalls cameo!
11/11/2021 c1 Brondoser
Great start :D
Like the dialogue, and you retained the integrity of each character (I can envision this as an actual episode)
Best of luck
Great start :D
Like the dialogue, and you retained the integrity of each character (I can envision this as an actual episode)
Best of luck