for Naruto Uzumaki: The Transcendent Child1/23/2022 c1 Guest
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1/17/2022 c1 
20Menydragon5
This is a pretty good beginning. I hope you continue this story. I'd like to see what happens next.
20Menydragon5This is a pretty good beginning. I hope you continue this story. I'd like to see what happens next.
11/28/2021 c1 Guest
Yo... this seems to be rather interesting. Looking forward to the rest of this fanfic.
Yo... this seems to be rather interesting. Looking forward to the rest of this fanfic.
11/19/2021 c1 WindyCitySlayer1
Hopefully naruto and kushina get together romantically speaking
Please continue
Awesome chapter
Can’t wait for more
Hopefully naruto and kushina get together romantically speaking
Please continue
Awesome chapter
Can’t wait for more
11/18/2021 c1 Guest
i like the story please update soon and more often thank you. i think naruto should date fuu yugito nee or yugiro uzzizike.
i like the story please update soon and more often thank you. i think naruto should date fuu yugito nee or yugiro uzzizike.
11/17/2021 c1 Guest DCDGojira
To author
I can immediately tell this is a stupid smut story if you exaggerate Kushina's breasts and ass by making them bigger than usual for smut purposes~! LOL
To author
I can immediately tell this is a stupid smut story if you exaggerate Kushina's breasts and ass by making them bigger than usual for smut purposes~! LOL
11/17/2021 c1 gwb620
Interesting premise and an excellent start. Looking forward to seeing where this goes.
Interesting premise and an excellent start. Looking forward to seeing where this goes.
11/17/2021 c1 daniel.santiago.4545
Excellent start for another amazing story, can't wait for what's to come next.
Excellent start for another amazing story, can't wait for what's to come next.
11/17/2021 c1 4DRADX
Lol Naruto definitely got Stockholm syndrome, wanting to protect something that treats you poorly is beyond me(even in the anime it didn't make much sense to me) it's like saying "I love the person that takes a shit in my front yard everyday and I'll protect that person with all of my heart".
Anyway I not hating on the story because as far as I can tell it was very well written and has a goal in mind that can be easily followed but unfortunately I had to stop reading when Naruto gave his speech to the soul because I couldn't get past that (it's mostly due to personal taste not the story)
I'd recommend anyone to give this a read tho, it's just not my taste.
4DRADXLol Naruto definitely got Stockholm syndrome, wanting to protect something that treats you poorly is beyond me(even in the anime it didn't make much sense to me) it's like saying "I love the person that takes a shit in my front yard everyday and I'll protect that person with all of my heart".
Anyway I not hating on the story because as far as I can tell it was very well written and has a goal in mind that can be easily followed but unfortunately I had to stop reading when Naruto gave his speech to the soul because I couldn't get past that (it's mostly due to personal taste not the story)
I'd recommend anyone to give this a read tho, it's just not my taste.