for Everybody Wants to Be My Enemy4/10 c10 BeoWolf666
Loved the Reference too Mordin Solus He was one of my favorite characters seconded only to Tali
Loved the Reference too Mordin Solus He was one of my favorite characters seconded only to Tali
4/10 c7 BeoWolf666
Cracked skulls are real bitch to deal with don’t wanna experience another one every again
Cracked skulls are real bitch to deal with don’t wanna experience another one every again
3/30 c21 Guest
Sigue con la historia
Sigue con la historia
3/28 c21 Indra Cedar
Teaching Elko means chakra? I don’t think so, neaten he’s just teaching him how to fight? Something like that
On the other topic, Piltover and Zawn, these ones, are more like the parallel universe from the 6th episode? It seems from the small glance to the future
Teaching Elko means chakra? I don’t think so, neaten he’s just teaching him how to fight? Something like that
On the other topic, Piltover and Zawn, these ones, are more like the parallel universe from the 6th episode? It seems from the small glance to the future
3/26 c9 AadenFo
If theres one complaint I have about all your naruto stories, its how he is depicted. You almost always have him go through the growth of "I cant change anything without killing," along with the whole him becoming a leader thing. No matter what age he is at the start of the fanfics, you always make him seem naive to the world somehow. You do realize he fought a delusional goddess who wanted to enslave mankind as well as a ninja war? You fr think he never dealt people who couldnt be reasoned with, who only learned through violence? Its a bit of cheap character growth you go through in every story, always making naruto become "hardened," to whatever world you insert him into, when in reality he doesnt need to be. He has seen all the horrors already.
If theres one complaint I have about all your naruto stories, its how he is depicted. You almost always have him go through the growth of "I cant change anything without killing," along with the whole him becoming a leader thing. No matter what age he is at the start of the fanfics, you always make him seem naive to the world somehow. You do realize he fought a delusional goddess who wanted to enslave mankind as well as a ninja war? You fr think he never dealt people who couldnt be reasoned with, who only learned through violence? Its a bit of cheap character growth you go through in every story, always making naruto become "hardened," to whatever world you insert him into, when in reality he doesnt need to be. He has seen all the horrors already.
3/20 c20 qalleesyawesome
yeah i love the dynamic between the two. so much true colours shines through. everyone has their guards down and can be themselves. its really good. thanks for the chapter!
yeah i love the dynamic between the two. so much true colours shines through. everyone has their guards down and can be themselves. its really good. thanks for the chapter!
13/18 c20 Ame Uzumaki
Really enjoying all of the updates for the Arcane stories. Definitely biased but I enjoy these more than some of the other crossovers. Actually inspired me to try writing my own Arcane story.
Really enjoying all of the updates for the Arcane stories. Definitely biased but I enjoy these more than some of the other crossovers. Actually inspired me to try writing my own Arcane story.
3/17 c21 Guest
Awesome as always, can’t wait to see where you take this!
Awesome as always, can’t wait to see where you take this!
3/17 c21 Guest
I always love the interactions between Naruto and Powder with how you write them, they’re always great.
Thanks for another great chapter, I can’t wait for more!
I always love the interactions between Naruto and Powder with how you write them, they’re always great.
Thanks for another great chapter, I can’t wait for more!
3/18 c20 Braeden1002
If there was ever a time that I wanted Naruto to know the Edo Tensei or to be visited by the spirits of those that passed it would be now. I don't want him to see his parents and Naruto asking if he's done well, I don't want Jiraya to visit and ask if he's turning into Nagoto; I want him to be visited by the man known as the Professor. I would love for a scene between Naruto and Sarutobi as out of everyone he is the only person that was influential in his life that ever led a village of warriors and navigated politics between warring states for decades. To have that conversation with Sarutobi about what to do and how to do it I think would come across better for Naruto than the way it's been going.
I can see the points that Vander and Heimerdinger are raising and I can understand where they are coming from. But the issue that they have run into is that they are confronting him after the fact in the same room that everything just happened. They should have just held their tongues and spoken to him alone and in a more relaxed setting. This way it doesn't feel as if they're confronting or accusing him.
While I fully trust that Powder is wanting to have Naruto train Ekko I hope that it doesn't devolve into arguments or fights for Powder's affection. While I don't see Powder having eyes for anyone other than Naruto who knows what will happen as she blossoms into a woman and becomes more powerful and sure of her place in the world. It would honestly be interesting to see Naruto take on Caitlyn as an apprentice as well and see a relationship between her and Ekko.
If there was ever a time that I wanted Naruto to know the Edo Tensei or to be visited by the spirits of those that passed it would be now. I don't want him to see his parents and Naruto asking if he's done well, I don't want Jiraya to visit and ask if he's turning into Nagoto; I want him to be visited by the man known as the Professor. I would love for a scene between Naruto and Sarutobi as out of everyone he is the only person that was influential in his life that ever led a village of warriors and navigated politics between warring states for decades. To have that conversation with Sarutobi about what to do and how to do it I think would come across better for Naruto than the way it's been going.
I can see the points that Vander and Heimerdinger are raising and I can understand where they are coming from. But the issue that they have run into is that they are confronting him after the fact in the same room that everything just happened. They should have just held their tongues and spoken to him alone and in a more relaxed setting. This way it doesn't feel as if they're confronting or accusing him.
While I fully trust that Powder is wanting to have Naruto train Ekko I hope that it doesn't devolve into arguments or fights for Powder's affection. While I don't see Powder having eyes for anyone other than Naruto who knows what will happen as she blossoms into a woman and becomes more powerful and sure of her place in the world. It would honestly be interesting to see Naruto take on Caitlyn as an apprentice as well and see a relationship between her and Ekko.