for Dinner with the Swans5/1/2023 c7 B
It seems that some of the story has been cut?
It seems that some of the story has been cut?
5/2/2023 c7 KDMCAM
I just re-read chapter 6. I have a feeling you could drag out the job reveal for a few more seasons. We could get thru fall with the swans and then the holidays or wedding with . if they are doing porn Emmett is going to be the one to find a video. He would probably give it to one of them as a gift so everyone could see them open it. Or I wonder if she's a chef getting her own restuarant or a food critic. So glad you are adding more to their story!
I just re-read chapter 6. I have a feeling you could drag out the job reveal for a few more seasons. We could get thru fall with the swans and then the holidays or wedding with . if they are doing porn Emmett is going to be the one to find a video. He would probably give it to one of them as a gift so everyone could see them open it. Or I wonder if she's a chef getting her own restuarant or a food critic. So glad you are adding more to their story!
5/1/2023 c7 Ldrew4956
Oh yeah! I'm eager to see what happens with Tanya and Carmen! I'm excited about seeing how her relationship affects her personal growth and in turn affects her relationship with Bella.
Oh yeah! I'm eager to see what happens with Tanya and Carmen! I'm excited about seeing how her relationship affects her personal growth and in turn affects her relationship with Bella.
5/1/2023 c7 ChristyWIX
Ooh, yay! Saw both of these updates in my inbox, this announcement and the new story. Excited! This has been such a fun story. Thank you for the continuation. :)
Ooh, yay! Saw both of these updates in my inbox, this announcement and the new story. Excited! This has been such a fun story. Thank you for the continuation. :)
5/1/2023 c7 
7Lizzie Paige
I saw your new story was posting and realised I still had this one sitting here to read. I’m so sorry I didn’t review every chapter, but I’ve just gobbled this up, reading straight through. I loved this Bella so much, she may have been overlooked by her own family many times, but she is the true gem amongst them. Thank you for such a fun story, with great characters. I’m looking forward to reading more of this lot! :)
7Lizzie PaigeI saw your new story was posting and realised I still had this one sitting here to read. I’m so sorry I didn’t review every chapter, but I’ve just gobbled this up, reading straight through. I loved this Bella so much, she may have been overlooked by her own family many times, but she is the true gem amongst them. Thank you for such a fun story, with great characters. I’m looking forward to reading more of this lot! :)
5/1/2023 c7 friendsandlovers
Yay, thank you!
also excited to finally find out what both of their jobs are :)
Yay, thank you!
also excited to finally find out what both of their jobs are :)
5/1/2023 c7 it's simply me n you
So excited!
I enjoyed this family, plus it will be awesome to find out what Bella's job is.
Thanks
So excited!
I enjoyed this family, plus it will be awesome to find out what Bella's job is.
Thanks
5/1/2023 c7 Longing to Write
Great news!
I’m in no hurry to find out Bella’s job - the teasing and trying to guess is so much fun.
Looking forward to spending the Summer with the Swans.
Great news!
I’m in no hurry to find out Bella’s job - the teasing and trying to guess is so much fun.
Looking forward to spending the Summer with the Swans.