for The Overpowered Gamer4/9 c7 bowers.larry
The older Daphne is a much different personality that any I have read so far. That is refreshing. I'll keep on reading.
The older Daphne is a much different personality that any I have read so far. That is refreshing. I'll keep on reading.
3/29 c3 
5BarbedCaress
"Have you seen a toad?"
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It's not Harry's fault she didn't ask the question she thought she asked.
5BarbedCaress"Have you seen a toad?"
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It's not Harry's fault she didn't ask the question she thought she asked.
2/22 c7 LKZ0
Honestly, the idea of the story is good, but after all that, and the defects drawn out by the “system”, it turned into a complete mess, unfortunately it's not a crack-fic.
Honestly, the idea of the story is good, but after all that, and the defects drawn out by the “system”, it turned into a complete mess, unfortunately it's not a crack-fic.
2/22 c13 Blake Langton
This is some of the dumbest shit ive ever read. There goes any respect i had for the author
This is some of the dumbest shit ive ever read. There goes any respect i had for the author
2/22 c9 Blake Langton
Author are you mentally fvcking retarded, go back and pick up that fvcking sword you daft cvnt
Author are you mentally fvcking retarded, go back and pick up that fvcking sword you daft cvnt
2/22 c5 Blake Langton
Yikes this is some hot garbage, lvl 100 and hes this fvcking useless, has he never tried picking up a fvcking book and learning something?
Yikes this is some hot garbage, lvl 100 and hes this fvcking useless, has he never tried picking up a fvcking book and learning something?
2/22 c4 Blake Langton
Him feeling guilty about quirrell makes 0 sense. Not even a little bit of sense. Its arguable some of the dumbest bullshit ive ever read
Him feeling guilty about quirrell makes 0 sense. Not even a little bit of sense. Its arguable some of the dumbest bullshit ive ever read
2/21 c25 andremartins511
O incestão gostoso aconteceu, não sou tão a favor em histórias de HP, mas não sou puritano e dizer que não é foda ler isso; infelizmente sua história é como muitas outras e harry é muito dependente/dominado por suas garotas, preferiria um harry mais dominar e ativo do que um dominado e passivo, ele é muito chicoteado pelas mulheres, falta pulso firme, basta olharem para ele com rostinho fofo ou triste e o cara quebra e faz tudo o que mandam.
Sendo sincero foi nojento a relação do Voldemort com A Voldemort, preferia ler a "necrofilia" que harry propôs fazer com a bellatrix.
O incestão gostoso aconteceu, não sou tão a favor em histórias de HP, mas não sou puritano e dizer que não é foda ler isso; infelizmente sua história é como muitas outras e harry é muito dependente/dominado por suas garotas, preferiria um harry mais dominar e ativo do que um dominado e passivo, ele é muito chicoteado pelas mulheres, falta pulso firme, basta olharem para ele com rostinho fofo ou triste e o cara quebra e faz tudo o que mandam.
Sendo sincero foi nojento a relação do Voldemort com A Voldemort, preferia ler a "necrofilia" que harry propôs fazer com a bellatrix.
1/31 c25 kellyashlee97
I can think of like 60 other ways that this could be handled differently but the tags are the tags so im not complaining
I can think of like 60 other ways that this could be handled differently but the tags are the tags so im not complaining
1/24 c66 MrGibbons
Overall a decent story several storylines you could of wrapped up but I enjoyed ending on a good laugh.
Overall a decent story several storylines you could of wrapped up but I enjoyed ending on a good laugh.
1/21 c21 2Sage-of-the-six-paths7777
But I thought the fighter class could level up to 1000 And his necromance is level three hundred So shouldn't that mean he would Four hundred and twenty one
2Sage-of-the-six-paths7777But I thought the fighter class could level up to 1000 And his necromance is level three hundred So shouldn't that mean he would Four hundred and twenty one