for The Defensive Space Force Ship Requirement4/25 c12 Ericaldrius
I started reading this story today and I have enjoyed it very much. I'm quite impressed with your attention to real world detail and how you utilize it in this story. I am also quite thrilled that you have properly considered how things butterfly due to changes made in canon, so few others can do that well and it's very pleasing.
I'm off to the next chapter!
I started reading this story today and I have enjoyed it very much. I'm quite impressed with your attention to real world detail and how you utilize it in this story. I am also quite thrilled that you have properly considered how things butterfly due to changes made in canon, so few others can do that well and it's very pleasing.
I'm off to the next chapter!
4/24 c52 AJGuardian
Now THAT is a motherfking crater. The whole strato volcano blew up. Worse than Mt. Saint Helen's
Now THAT is a motherfking crater. The whole strato volcano blew up. Worse than Mt. Saint Helen's
4/23 c48 AJGuardian
Yup. Once you see it happen it's already too late. Never mind the fact that Neutron Stars already have MASSIVE gravity wells. Time dilation was already a factor. And gravity propagates at the speed of light. If you see one forming you're already fucked.
Yup. Once you see it happen it's already too late. Never mind the fact that Neutron Stars already have MASSIVE gravity wells. Time dilation was already a factor. And gravity propagates at the speed of light. If you see one forming you're already fucked.
4/23 c47 AJGuardian
Removing the second gate removes a few plot lines indeed.
Hope they find the Ancient base later. Find the location of Atlantis.
Removing the second gate removes a few plot lines indeed.
Hope they find the Ancient base later. Find the location of Atlantis.
4/22 c25 AJGuardian
I believe the insistence of having to touch it is to stop accidental travelers from piggy-backing.
I believe the insistence of having to touch it is to stop accidental travelers from piggy-backing.
4/15 c56 
1J.K Holdenwood
Still this story is fun even you have strange teleportation ideas. We will wait until you continue..
Just ignore those negative reviews it’s hard to be original.
1J.K HoldenwoodStill this story is fun even you have strange teleportation ideas. We will wait until you continue..
Just ignore those negative reviews it’s hard to be original.
4/11 c25 20crocket
good point all them weasleys and harry grabbing a shoe or tin can yer a rope can see bu as you say they all touch item not each other
20crocketgood point all them weasleys and harry grabbing a shoe or tin can yer a rope can see bu as you say they all touch item not each other
4/6 c56 ImploringIdeal
I can't believe I'm only finding this fic now! It is an amazing read and I really like how you integrated HP and SG. Very well done! I can't wait to see what happens next. I'm kind of curious to see how it plays out in the alternate universe (the one where Harry became Undesirable 1), with Ron leaving them. I like how you portrayed the original Universe and I'm curious to see how it plays out in this one. Some people I can see slotting into their spots and some I can't (Ron leaving, Marietta Edgecombe turning in the DA, etc). And Harry as Minister is very amusing! There are so many things that I've loved and I can't wait to see what the next chapter brings! Thank you for sharing!
I can't believe I'm only finding this fic now! It is an amazing read and I really like how you integrated HP and SG. Very well done! I can't wait to see what happens next. I'm kind of curious to see how it plays out in the alternate universe (the one where Harry became Undesirable 1), with Ron leaving them. I like how you portrayed the original Universe and I'm curious to see how it plays out in this one. Some people I can see slotting into their spots and some I can't (Ron leaving, Marietta Edgecombe turning in the DA, etc). And Harry as Minister is very amusing! There are so many things that I've loved and I can't wait to see what the next chapter brings! Thank you for sharing!
3/15 c56 St. Fyrecat
I am really enjoying this story, so far.
I see that you have not posted in 7 months. Does that mean you have abandoned it? I hope not.
I will follow and favorite in hopes of new chapters soon.
Thank you!
I am really enjoying this story, so far.
I see that you have not posted in 7 months. Does that mean you have abandoned it? I hope not.
I will follow and favorite in hopes of new chapters soon.
Thank you!
2/24 c27 kennw
slight problem with what you said about terraforming mars. you would also need to restart mars's magnetic field. it currently doesn't have one.
slight problem with what you said about terraforming mars. you would also need to restart mars's magnetic field. it currently doesn't have one.