for A Breaking Point4/16/2022 c5 
11Weathergirl
Lovely wrap-up of this story. i like the way this came together because once they were away from SVU, they could see things for what they are. I'm a bit afraid that they're becoming too absorbed into cop life yet again and it's only when something big happens that they have some interaction. I think they need another wake-up call. Anyway, please know that your writing is always appreciated, and I know I'm not the only one who thinks so. :)
11WeathergirlLovely wrap-up of this story. i like the way this came together because once they were away from SVU, they could see things for what they are. I'm a bit afraid that they're becoming too absorbed into cop life yet again and it's only when something big happens that they have some interaction. I think they need another wake-up call. Anyway, please know that your writing is always appreciated, and I know I'm not the only one who thinks so. :)
4/16/2022 c5 BloodyMary1984
This chapter was amazing, the right amount of fun, hotness and fluff. You write them so good, I laugh so hard sometimes! I can't tell you how sad I am that these were your last fics. I read all of them (some more than once), my favourite is The in betweens. I want to really thank you for all your work. But I hope this won't be your last story (a girl can dream) Send you a lot of love girl!
This chapter was amazing, the right amount of fun, hotness and fluff. You write them so good, I laugh so hard sometimes! I can't tell you how sad I am that these were your last fics. I read all of them (some more than once), my favourite is The in betweens. I want to really thank you for all your work. But I hope this won't be your last story (a girl can dream) Send you a lot of love girl!
3/4/2022 c4 TV Angel 711
Wow! About bloody time! Amazing chapter! Can’t wait to see what happens next! Fabulous story!
Wow! About bloody time! Amazing chapter! Can’t wait to see what happens next! Fabulous story!
2/27/2022 c4 11Weathergirl
Jealousy has always been Elliot's trigger. I like that she's calling him on it. This could go in so many directions and I like that you leave us guessing. I have one though, but I'll wait and see how it develops. Excellent as always! Looking forward to the next update!
11WeathergirlJealousy has always been Elliot's trigger. I like that she's calling him on it. This could go in so many directions and I like that you leave us guessing. I have one though, but I'll wait and see how it develops. Excellent as always! Looking forward to the next update!
2/27/2022 c4 Anny Rodrigues
This guy Sebastian again, i don't like him, hummmm nono! Open your eyes Elliot, so Olivia will never return to SVU anymore?
This guy Sebastian again, i don't like him, hummmm nono! Open your eyes Elliot, so Olivia will never return to SVU anymore?
2/27/2022 c4 BloodyMary1984
I love their confrontation, so well written. Time to man up I guess!
I don't know if they made it on purpose but, in the show he always sounded and acted so jealous! And she never did anything about it.
It's so mean to end a chapter like this tho, I can't wait for more
I love their confrontation, so well written. Time to man up I guess!
I don't know if they made it on purpose but, in the show he always sounded and acted so jealous! And she never did anything about it.
It's so mean to end a chapter like this tho, I can't wait for more