for Jon Snow and the Dragonverse of Madness Book One: The Conquest3/20/2023 c15 Isles
Awesome update! Look forward to the reaction from the Dornish on the fate of House Qorgyle
Awesome update! Look forward to the reaction from the Dornish on the fate of House Qorgyle
3/20/2023 c15 DaAR
Great
Great
3/20/2023 c15 DaAR
Great will soon have forgotten the boy. For the dance story this probably means that not Daemon kills the children but Aemon?
Great will soon have forgotten the boy. For the dance story this probably means that not Daemon kills the children but Aemon?
3/20/2023 c15 xan-merrick
Great chapter will Aemon become legend past down by House Targaryen that a he will appear at their houses time of need. Can't wait for more
Great chapter will Aemon become legend past down by House Targaryen that a he will appear at their houses time of need. Can't wait for more
3/9/2023 c14 Lady Galactica
Very good chapter. Does Aemon have friendly interactions with other families besides the Targaryens & Starks?
Very good chapter. Does Aemon have friendly interactions with other families besides the Targaryens & Starks?
3/7/2023 c14 Ovcjkim5
Fantastically done. Aemon probably stands by some ancestors more than others. The Dornish will now reject any marriage offer, just as the Targs are hated.
Fantastically done. Aemon probably stands by some ancestors more than others. The Dornish will now reject any marriage offer, just as the Targs are hated.
3/6/2023 c14 UKK472
Great 's just a pity that he only made more enemies. With his time jump to the dance, I wonder if Aemon is on the side of the black people-what would be his relationship toAlicent?
Great 's just a pity that he only made more enemies. With his time jump to the dance, I wonder if Aemon is on the side of the black people-what would be his relationship toAlicent?
3/6/2023 c14 
4Lady Octarina
I love how Aemon used what he learned in his future past from more experienced commanders for an easier Conquest! It's funny how he's treating with the Dornish, though, as if Meria Martell weren't his ancestor just as much as Aegon and Rhaenys lmao No other approach would work on them, though.
Gotta love how long it took Visenya to realize she's pregnant,even with all her knowledge. She's what, 29 now? Better than the 40 when she had Maegor. I never really understood why it took so long for Rhaenys and Visenya to have children. I mean, what's the point of conquering an entire continent if you have no heirs to rule it afterwards? They should have had children before setting off on their dragons. And then Rhaenys dies after having just the one child, a sickly little boy who they couldn't be sure would survive to adulthood, and it still takes Visenya 7 years or sth to get pregnant, wtf?
4Lady OctarinaI love how Aemon used what he learned in his future past from more experienced commanders for an easier Conquest! It's funny how he's treating with the Dornish, though, as if Meria Martell weren't his ancestor just as much as Aegon and Rhaenys lmao No other approach would work on them, though.
Gotta love how long it took Visenya to realize she's pregnant,even with all her knowledge. She's what, 29 now? Better than the 40 when she had Maegor. I never really understood why it took so long for Rhaenys and Visenya to have children. I mean, what's the point of conquering an entire continent if you have no heirs to rule it afterwards? They should have had children before setting off on their dragons. And then Rhaenys dies after having just the one child, a sickly little boy who they couldn't be sure would survive to adulthood, and it still takes Visenya 7 years or sth to get pregnant, wtf?
3/6/2023 c14 Lannister
Aemon was great. The other Targs don't impress me. Aemon would have managed the conquest all by himself without the others.
Aemon was great. The other Targs don't impress me. Aemon would have managed the conquest all by himself without the others.
3/5/2023 c14 1Hyokage
Always enjoy the updates for this story. As you have confirmed Visenya’s pregnancy I am curious to know if you intend for Aemon’s Longclaw to become the ancestral sword of his line or if Dark Sister is to become the Ancestral Sword of the Targaryens of the Riverlands (Aemon and Visenya’s line of the family).
Also, will the family retain their royal titles or will they eventually become a Great Family on level with other Paramount Families? Asking this stuff might be spoilers but I find myself very curious. I know it is going to be absolutely gut wrenching when you pull Aemon from this time and send him forward. Not looking forward to it at all.
1HyokageAlways enjoy the updates for this story. As you have confirmed Visenya’s pregnancy I am curious to know if you intend for Aemon’s Longclaw to become the ancestral sword of his line or if Dark Sister is to become the Ancestral Sword of the Targaryens of the Riverlands (Aemon and Visenya’s line of the family).
Also, will the family retain their royal titles or will they eventually become a Great Family on level with other Paramount Families? Asking this stuff might be spoilers but I find myself very curious. I know it is going to be absolutely gut wrenching when you pull Aemon from this time and send him forward. Not looking forward to it at all.
3/5/2023 c14 pattyboy227
I really don't understand why Aemon wants to put the Tullys second in command of the Riverlands. I mean, the idea that he can somehow force Lord Stark to marry a Tully 300 years in the future is simply ridiculous. If anything, the Starks would marry the true power of the Riverlands, Aemon's descendants, not his vassal. Not to mention there's zero guarantee that his cousins will ever be born (and if they are, they will most likely have different personalities and characters).
Also, has Aemon put any thought onto how the other Riverlords will see this decision? They won't like that a vassal was elevated above all others for seemingly no good reason. Unlike the Tyrells, House Tully isn't Lord Paramount and Riverrun isn't Highgarden, so their usefulness to the Targaryen cause isn't much. This is just gonna cause unnecessary problems for Aemon's descendants, and dragons aren't a magical solution to everything.
Overall, this seems out of character for Aemon. For someone who suffered years of shitty treatment by Catelyn, and knows how unlike the Starks Hoster only allied with Robert because of two opportunistic marriages, he should be inclined to be at the very least neutral towards the Tullys.
I really don't understand why Aemon wants to put the Tullys second in command of the Riverlands. I mean, the idea that he can somehow force Lord Stark to marry a Tully 300 years in the future is simply ridiculous. If anything, the Starks would marry the true power of the Riverlands, Aemon's descendants, not his vassal. Not to mention there's zero guarantee that his cousins will ever be born (and if they are, they will most likely have different personalities and characters).
Also, has Aemon put any thought onto how the other Riverlords will see this decision? They won't like that a vassal was elevated above all others for seemingly no good reason. Unlike the Tyrells, House Tully isn't Lord Paramount and Riverrun isn't Highgarden, so their usefulness to the Targaryen cause isn't much. This is just gonna cause unnecessary problems for Aemon's descendants, and dragons aren't a magical solution to everything.
Overall, this seems out of character for Aemon. For someone who suffered years of shitty treatment by Catelyn, and knows how unlike the Starks Hoster only allied with Robert because of two opportunistic marriages, he should be inclined to be at the very least neutral towards the Tullys.
3/5/2023 c14 SeaweedBrainIsBlue
yo, awesome work , you letting Dorne keep the status of princedom ? like I'd be super fucking unfair to the Starks if you did they were much more reasonable and if anyone should be able to keep their royal status should be them.
see ya
yo, awesome work , you letting Dorne keep the status of princedom ? like I'd be super fucking unfair to the Starks if you did they were much more reasonable and if anyone should be able to keep their royal status should be them.
see ya