for Russia Bound1/7/2022 c14 Margaret Gautier
WOW, I just got through reading all of the chapters. Christmas holidays were busy, and my fan fiction got neglected. What a story, Walter giving each a letter, to each family member, and absorbing all of the blame for the white lye, he gave to Paige. He certainly made sure he they all were financially covered. He earned himself, and goes to Russia, to go back down the rabbit hole, with Collins. He does leave some clues, and hopes, his family find himsurprise, he has a child 3 yrs. Of age, who has inheritated his IQ.
Love the way the archangel, Michael and Raphael approach him with, Megan, and tell Jim they are there to help him if he believes, and believes they will help him.
I like the way the ghosts of "Christmas Carol", navigate him, through finding how each of his family are repenting their share of pain, they inflicted on Walter. He also finds he has a son.
Walter, escapes the rabbit hole and his family attempt to make amends, but Walter has different plans, called Ireland. Yuri and his gang, are torturing Collins, but my guess he will slip away. Looks like there is more to this story. called in for Walter, who appears devastated, and confused.
Well written story with action, mystery, and hopefully another story
Looks like more to this story. Dr. Rizzuto gets involved
WOW, I just got through reading all of the chapters. Christmas holidays were busy, and my fan fiction got neglected. What a story, Walter giving each a letter, to each family member, and absorbing all of the blame for the white lye, he gave to Paige. He certainly made sure he they all were financially covered. He earned himself, and goes to Russia, to go back down the rabbit hole, with Collins. He does leave some clues, and hopes, his family find himsurprise, he has a child 3 yrs. Of age, who has inheritated his IQ.
Love the way the archangel, Michael and Raphael approach him with, Megan, and tell Jim they are there to help him if he believes, and believes they will help him.
I like the way the ghosts of "Christmas Carol", navigate him, through finding how each of his family are repenting their share of pain, they inflicted on Walter. He also finds he has a son.
Walter, escapes the rabbit hole and his family attempt to make amends, but Walter has different plans, called Ireland. Yuri and his gang, are torturing Collins, but my guess he will slip away. Looks like there is more to this story. called in for Walter, who appears devastated, and confused.
Well written story with action, mystery, and hopefully another story
Looks like more to this story. Dr. Rizzuto gets involved
12/30/2021 c14 
10railman
Walter's mind must still be effected by his trip down the rabbit hole he as gone back to before he experienced Paige's love Dr Rizzuto is going to have a hard job to pull Walter back but with Ralph's help he will no doubt succeed
10railmanWalter's mind must still be effected by his trip down the rabbit hole he as gone back to before he experienced Paige's love Dr Rizzuto is going to have a hard job to pull Walter back but with Ralph's help he will no doubt succeed
12/29/2021 c13 railman
You may think it is a lack luster chapter but it is still interesting Collins captured at last Will we find out what Yuri decides to do to Collins Paige back in pure Moma bear style
You may think it is a lack luster chapter but it is still interesting Collins captured at last Will we find out what Yuri decides to do to Collins Paige back in pure Moma bear style
12/26/2021 c12 railman
This chapter as cleared up a lot but were did the rings come from and the pendant ? roll on the next chapter and the capture of Collins ,hopefully
This chapter as cleared up a lot but were did the rings come from and the pendant ? roll on the next chapter and the capture of Collins ,hopefully
12/25/2021 c11 87Grykon
Great little chapter for today! Merry Christmas or Happy Holidays if you prefer! Thank you for the update!
87GrykonGreat little chapter for today! Merry Christmas or Happy Holidays if you prefer! Thank you for the update!
12/25/2021 c11 10railman
I have to admit i am really enjoying the story but at the same time with the introductions of Michael Gabriel and the ghost of of Megan it is becoming more of a fantasy story . Was this your intention or will we be getting another twist in the story . awaiting for the action to begin in the restaurant.
10railmanI have to admit i am really enjoying the story but at the same time with the introductions of Michael Gabriel and the ghost of of Megan it is becoming more of a fantasy story . Was this your intention or will we be getting another twist in the story . awaiting for the action to begin in the restaurant.
12/24/2021 c10 railman
A very interesting interpretation of a sacred appearance if that is what it was or has Walter's brain reacted to the rabbit hole and naturally bought him out of it by forcing images into it .Will raouls team upset the apple cart with is investigation by speaking to Yuri bring on the next chapter
A very interesting interpretation of a sacred appearance if that is what it was or has Walter's brain reacted to the rabbit hole and naturally bought him out of it by forcing images into it .Will raouls team upset the apple cart with is investigation by speaking to Yuri bring on the next chapter
12/24/2021 c9 railman
Nice little back story on Walter jnr. .It actually appears to have made the others feel even more guilty ..
Nice little back story on Walter jnr. .It actually appears to have made the others feel even more guilty ..
12/23/2021 c10 87Grykon
Good chapter! Thank you for continuing! Can't wait to see what happens next! As for speculating, I'm not sure at all what will happen next, but I'm ready for it! I think. lol
87GrykonGood chapter! Thank you for continuing! Can't wait to see what happens next! As for speculating, I'm not sure at all what will happen next, but I'm ready for it! I think. lol
12/22/2021 c7 87Grykon
A glimpse into the rabbit hole for Walter. Interesting Collins it appears has figured out a way to pull himself back out. And here he is wanting to capture Walter pre-Scorpion, to use him. Definitely not a good situation. And of course Collins plans to double cross his benefactors. He wouldn't be Collins if he didn't. I sometimes wonder how he could ever trust Walter to begin with as it seems that it is his nature not to trust anyone. Well done!
87GrykonA glimpse into the rabbit hole for Walter. Interesting Collins it appears has figured out a way to pull himself back out. And here he is wanting to capture Walter pre-Scorpion, to use him. Definitely not a good situation. And of course Collins plans to double cross his benefactors. He wouldn't be Collins if he didn't. I sometimes wonder how he could ever trust Walter to begin with as it seems that it is his nature not to trust anyone. Well done!
12/22/2021 c7 10railman
A complex but intriguing chapter your interpretation of the Rabbit hole seems a description of what it may be ,until i started to follow Scorpion ,a rabbit hole was were they bolted when afraid . but listening to Happy in an earlier episode it would seem to be similar to your description . Nice touch bringing Megan into his mind .The Russian mob could be a problem for the rescue squad , hope Ralph as taken it into his recue plan
10railmanA complex but intriguing chapter your interpretation of the Rabbit hole seems a description of what it may be ,until i started to follow Scorpion ,a rabbit hole was were they bolted when afraid . but listening to Happy in an earlier episode it would seem to be similar to your description . Nice touch bringing Megan into his mind .The Russian mob could be a problem for the rescue squad , hope Ralph as taken it into his recue plan
12/20/2021 c6 RoMitri-Waige
Can you tell us more about Walt Junior? Can we focus more on the bonding of Ralph and Walt Jr please? And Has Paige showed him who his father is? Even when she didn't tell Walter about him.
Can you tell us more about Walt Junior? Can we focus more on the bonding of Ralph and Walt Jr please? And Has Paige showed him who his father is? Even when she didn't tell Walter about him.
12/20/2021 c5 Guest
fantastic one question did everyone know about Walters son even Cabe and Ray ? Cause there was no reaction from either one of them seeing a 3 year old there.
fantastic one question did everyone know about Walters son even Cabe and Ray ? Cause there was no reaction from either one of them seeing a 3 year old there.