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4/17 c4 30LanceSennin
So is Yumiko the pairing? Or will you give Spidey his harem?
4/13 c1 6XXxxxadisxxxXX
There are noticeable English errors all throughout, especially in the last few scenes.
4/3 c4 Rice with Chest-Nuts
also... forgot to mention it earlier, but... i was expecting him to have an organic web-shooters, not mechanical one. lmao, anyway...
4/3 c4 Rice with Chest-Nuts
oh! oh! yes! i could see it in my fockn head!
Hachiman will has that Peter Parker-like persona, he could be that one who was a kinda Worst version of Peter but a Better version of Spiderman... and Yumiko will has Gwen-like persona in this case! while Zaimokuza will be his best-bud, an assistant or some sort!
oh me, oh my~ quite an interesting takes! don't you think?! nice! like his suit design too! Noir is badass! can't wait for the next one! anyway, continue~ please~ by all means~
4/3 c3 Rice with Chest-Nuts
...holy cow! that just... wow, that went dark fast, okay.
4/2 c2 Rice with Chest-Nuts
wait, hang on... did MAX Coffee contained no caffeine? i mean... Spider drunk on caffeine right? so... if he is okay with drinking MAX then,

anyway... this is quite interesting indeed, im actually hoping he will have Noir suit for his final phase, but... oh well. quite a great idea for the fan-story, nice takes and setting too! alright! onwards~
3/31 c1 Rice with Chest-Nuts
ooohh~ Spiderman Noir?! Hachiman as? yeees! that would fit him to a T! im definitely on-board with that! yes. Spider-Man Noir please! lmao. xD
3/31 c1 Rice with Chest-Nuts
is this HachiYumi fics?! ooohhh~ i real wish this, is a HachiYumi fics with Spiderman theme~
3/15 c4 jargax
Nice to see this story continue, keep adding on to what you have done before. Take your time with the story and good luck with classes.
3/15 c4 Hachiman fan
Thanks for the update bro. A mistake there, riding bicycle, not driving bicycle. Will kingpin help him, like how lex luthor help superman in some of comic book instead of just enemy? Noir costume, eh? Nicely done. Until next time, stay healthy and stay safe.
3/15 c4 Chickenbreast22
People involved in such as the previous incident will be questioned by authorities, they are witnesses after all. Also they should go through counseling especially since they are kids. I think you should at least skim those events. Since you ended last chapter in such a tone, this chapter will be very hard to write. Kudos to you for making it through.
3/14 c4 1NNathann
Another good chapter! Keep up the good work!
3/14 c4 3prietar
I need hachiman and yukino fix the misunderstanding
3/14 c4 4SkyChaser17
Good ol hero's backstory before they fully reached the golden days as city's savior. And ooc or not, that self awareness of self hating monologue summed 8man well.

That limousine scene... I see you have plan concocted up for future interaction with girl who can't lie and a man who boast himself as monster of logic. Can see Yukino Route is kinda blocked even if he already say it's in the past. His empathize on freedom part solidifies it on my eyes.

Oh ya that spidey sense... Gosh wish I can do that darn it, it's bullshit on overnight part with his science and math grades werent the best. But I swear it's so comic book plot and butter to make main character could suit up.

Wish there's a twist on kingpin part considering 8man wasn't Peter minus the social awkward moment. I mean... There's many fic of Yukinoshita's family doing business in the background is pretty abundant too, so have fun on making the one you liked the most.
3/14 c4 Guest
So no one asked Hikigaya to go to therapy? After seeing mutilated bodies like that... Yeah okay man
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