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2/21 c2 lukeanimelover
Ohhhhh
2/21 c2 lukeanimelover
Im still confused on why there was a naruto earlier
2/21 c1 lukeanimelover
Holy shit. This better not have been abandoned or i swear to all hell i will find you. And j will mind fuck yoy so bad itachi would be wincing in sympathy
1/11 c16 spirouFr
thanks for the great story!
12/7/2023 c16 Rabcor
This is disappointing af. The story was actually super promising but you completely screwed the pooch on pacing.
The characters are great, premise is great, but the delivery?

We have had 16 chapters of mostly training in over 100k words, and in that huge amount of text naruko and sasuke are still kids, there is practically no progression. I lasted 8 chapters, then skipped to the last to see if this was ever gonna live up to it's potential, and my verdict is: author will probably drop this story before they even make it to chuunin, so no.
11/12/2023 c16 RuneFather
Awesome
11/11/2023 c16 ZeroFinder
Yeah, Sasuke is finished. He's actually done for in regards to Naruko, beyond over even. I don't think it ever began once it hit him that she's not a boy.

Puberty for him is going to suck balls.
11/11/2023 c16 Hadrian.Caeser
Awesome
11/7/2023 c16 PasiveNox
Great chapter
11/6/2023 c11 10Marcii Winters
YAY IN GENERAL FOR SASUKE FINALLY REALIZING HE'S BEING TOO MUCH OF A SOURPUSS!
11/6/2023 c9 Marcii Winters
THAT'S SO FUCKING SWEET!
I'M GONNA GET FUCKIN DIABETES U ASSHOLE AAAAAAAAAAAAA!
11/6/2023 c7 Marcii Winters
OKAY, IS SASUKE GONNA MELLOW OUT ANYTIME SOON?!
BC LIKE, I UNDERSTAND WHY HE'S SO TENSE AND PARANOID, BUT AT THIS POINT, THERE ARE SO LITTLE HAPPY MOMENTS LATELY THAT MOST OF THIS FIC SEEMS WAY TOO DARK, AS IF NOTHING WILL GET BETTER
11/4/2023 c16 Ivo446
Hope you'll get better soon. Thank you for another great chapter.
11/3/2023 c15 3Steatoda
Thanks for the update. feel better!
11/3/2023 c16 Amir2000
hope you get well soon, and thank you for the great chapter
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