for A Flaw in Fate12/30/2024 c69 erlinggomez23
... tengo miedo de que podria pasarle a ese pequeño rayito de solD no quiero que se valla ...
... tengo miedo de que podria pasarle a ese pequeño rayito de solD no quiero que se valla ...
12/28/2024 c72 fallendemon248
Damn it was a long shot but it was shot. God damn it looks like the only way is to give up the diary
Damn it was a long shot but it was shot. God damn it looks like the only way is to give up the diary
12/24/2024 c72 steve
or just stop being a dick and trying to get people to support your ass and do it yourself.
or just stop being a dick and trying to get people to support your ass and do it yourself.
12/25/2024 c72 
2SPJaymo117
Layer upon layer of secrets. Love seeing how much leeway dumbledore will gove Harry
2SPJaymo117Layer upon layer of secrets. Love seeing how much leeway dumbledore will gove Harry
12/24/2024 c72 Hydrus15
Merry Christmas first of all. Wow This chapter was interesting, I wonder what the third rule of blood magic will be. I feel like there are too many things going on at once in this story. There are interesting subplots, the return of Lady Voldemort is happening, although at the same time the thing about the rose of the High Order and everything that has to do with Grindelwald occurs. By the way, Vinda Rosier was a follower of Grindelwald if I'm not mistaken. I have a lot to say, but I don't know how to put it, sorry if my English is not the best. I like the romance between Gabrielle and Harry, it's unique, when I started reading your fanfic I imagined it was another DaphnexHarry but it suddenly changed and focused on a different "Romance". I say this in quotes because I still haven't decided who the final couple will be, since Daphne has already been relegated to the background. And for now I don't know what kind of relationship Harry will have with Voldemort, So I take Harry and Gabrielle as the most likely couple. Moving on to the topic and continuing with Voldemort, I would like to point out that Harry is becoming more and more like her, well I imagine the author He wants to show that because currently Harry when he gets angry or feels strong emotions his eyes shine sickly, and not to mention the use of dark magic by Harry, This makes me wonder which side Harry will be on, will he be with Voldemort, Dumbledore or a third side, I don't know yet. Before the last chapter came out I was thinking that maybe Harry I could ask about the blood magic in Emily's diary, it's supposed to be fixed, apart from that it would be interesting to see the reunion between Harry and that piece of Voldemort.
Merry Christmas first of all. Wow This chapter was interesting, I wonder what the third rule of blood magic will be. I feel like there are too many things going on at once in this story. There are interesting subplots, the return of Lady Voldemort is happening, although at the same time the thing about the rose of the High Order and everything that has to do with Grindelwald occurs. By the way, Vinda Rosier was a follower of Grindelwald if I'm not mistaken. I have a lot to say, but I don't know how to put it, sorry if my English is not the best. I like the romance between Gabrielle and Harry, it's unique, when I started reading your fanfic I imagined it was another DaphnexHarry but it suddenly changed and focused on a different "Romance". I say this in quotes because I still haven't decided who the final couple will be, since Daphne has already been relegated to the background. And for now I don't know what kind of relationship Harry will have with Voldemort, So I take Harry and Gabrielle as the most likely couple. Moving on to the topic and continuing with Voldemort, I would like to point out that Harry is becoming more and more like her, well I imagine the author He wants to show that because currently Harry when he gets angry or feels strong emotions his eyes shine sickly, and not to mention the use of dark magic by Harry, This makes me wonder which side Harry will be on, will he be with Voldemort, Dumbledore or a third side, I don't know yet. Before the last chapter came out I was thinking that maybe Harry I could ask about the blood magic in Emily's diary, it's supposed to be fixed, apart from that it would be interesting to see the reunion between Harry and that piece of Voldemort.
12/24/2024 c72 Hank1967
Excellent chapter! Rather interesting how Harry is being backed into a corner. Wondering why Dumbledore is unwilling to help her - reminds me of Star Wars I, II, and III. Rather a shame how a 'light' wizard is unwilling to help an innocent victim such as Astoria. Glad to see him getting closer to Gabby, however, I'm still a diehard H/D shipper. Enjoying all the world building you have been doing. Glad to see Harry facing original challenges! Update soon please! Can't wait to see what's next!
Excellent chapter! Rather interesting how Harry is being backed into a corner. Wondering why Dumbledore is unwilling to help her - reminds me of Star Wars I, II, and III. Rather a shame how a 'light' wizard is unwilling to help an innocent victim such as Astoria. Glad to see him getting closer to Gabby, however, I'm still a diehard H/D shipper. Enjoying all the world building you have been doing. Glad to see Harry facing original challenges! Update soon please! Can't wait to see what's next!
12/24/2024 c72 llIMagic
Fascinating story. I like how the worldbuilding has grown so much but without being incoherent or way too expansive a lot. I'm a big fan of this Gabrielle as well, the slow unveiling of her character as Harry gets to know her more has been very well done. She is a good peer for Harry with a background to him, isolated and kind of prodigious. Thanks for keeping up with the story, very interesting how Harry is surrounded by all these powerful people with an interest in him but still able to carve his own way to a certain degree. Merry Christmas!
Fascinating story. I like how the worldbuilding has grown so much but without being incoherent or way too expansive a lot. I'm a big fan of this Gabrielle as well, the slow unveiling of her character as Harry gets to know her more has been very well done. She is a good peer for Harry with a background to him, isolated and kind of prodigious. Thanks for keeping up with the story, very interesting how Harry is surrounded by all these powerful people with an interest in him but still able to carve his own way to a certain degree. Merry Christmas!
12/23/2024 c72 Qhristhian
Entretenido, pero yo digo que acaba quemando Durmstrang con un Protego Diabólica, por puro despecho.
Entretenido, pero yo digo que acaba quemando Durmstrang con un Protego Diabólica, por puro despecho.
12/23/2024 c72 WalkerFRD
A história tá incrível como sempre, mas você realmente tá se esforçando pra fazer Harry parecer patético, embora as interações dele com Dumbledor sejam incríveis.
A história tá incrível como sempre, mas você realmente tá se esforçando pra fazer Harry parecer patético, embora as interações dele com Dumbledor sejam incríveis.