for Fleur De Lis5/7 c21 Ipswichian
A readable story although (perhapsj) Harry too powerful and knowledgeable to be true.
One criticism, the quote is 'power TENDS to corrupt, absolute power corrupts absolutely.'
Power itself does not necessarily corrupt although the exercise of it needs firm control to
avoid corruption.
A readable story although (perhapsj) Harry too powerful and knowledgeable to be true.
One criticism, the quote is 'power TENDS to corrupt, absolute power corrupts absolutely.'
Power itself does not necessarily corrupt although the exercise of it needs firm control to
avoid corruption.
3/31 c18 
5BarbedCaress
This version of Harry Potter seems strangely trusting, given his childhood.
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And veryy naive
5BarbedCaressThis version of Harry Potter seems strangely trusting, given his childhood.
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And veryy naive
3/31 c15 BarbedCaress
It is hard to avoid assuming Davis is the bad guy here.
I'm enjoying the story, so I hope it is not that obvious and Harry is not oblivious to Davis being at the scene.
It is hard to avoid assuming Davis is the bad guy here.
I'm enjoying the story, so I hope it is not that obvious and Harry is not oblivious to Davis being at the scene.
3/30 c5 BarbedCaress
It is PPS, I do believe.
PS being "post script" and PPS being "post post script."
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An enjoyable story.
Thank you for sharing your time and talent!
It is PPS, I do believe.
PS being "post script" and PPS being "post post script."
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An enjoyable story.
Thank you for sharing your time and talent!
3/21 c7 FluffyMama42
I love how Justin puts his absolute trust in Harry. the story is way better than all the other stories I have read when Harry had a sibling. In those you have the topical hateful relationship between Harry and his family. This story is much better
I love how Justin puts his absolute trust in Harry. the story is way better than all the other stories I have read when Harry had a sibling. In those you have the topical hateful relationship between Harry and his family. This story is much better
3/21 c3 FluffyMama42
I love how you gave Harry the family he always wanted. And a brother that he can protect and teach and love.
I love how you gave Harry the family he always wanted. And a brother that he can protect and teach and love.
3/12 c13 Guest
What the hell did the poor dragon do. The ego of harry just to kill a innocent dragon just so he can show his power to the world. At last this time he is a mini dark lord harming innocent beasts just because he can.
What the hell did the poor dragon do. The ego of harry just to kill a innocent dragon just so he can show his power to the world. At last this time he is a mini dark lord harming innocent beasts just because he can.
2/12 c3 Daggerxxx
Boring, clichéd story. The characters are flat and the dialogue is terrible. I thought they don’t write things like that anymore these days.
"Patreon" Clearly, clearly. This is already becoming a mark of “quality”.
Boring, clichéd story. The characters are flat and the dialogue is terrible. I thought they don’t write things like that anymore these days.
"Patreon" Clearly, clearly. This is already becoming a mark of “quality”.
2/8 c33 2Shadeslayer2291
Great Story. i look forward to your new chapters every week. Especially dreams of home and the newest one. This one was great. i read it in less than a day. i could not set it down. Thanks for all of the great stories
2Shadeslayer2291Great Story. i look forward to your new chapters every week. Especially dreams of home and the newest one. This one was great. i read it in less than a day. i could not set it down. Thanks for all of the great stories
12/26/2024 c9 1Tatsumi Partas
im reading this and damn, its a good story so far and i love it.
since we have a second Potter, i really wished Harry would have been Gellerts heir basically taking his name as Harry Grindelwald and maybe naming his future son Gellert.
that would be nice and since this is a Harry x Fleur fic, i can see Harry moving to france to live there with Fleur... however i shall see how this fic goes since im only at chapter 9 :D
1Tatsumi Partasim reading this and damn, its a good story so far and i love it.
since we have a second Potter, i really wished Harry would have been Gellerts heir basically taking his name as Harry Grindelwald and maybe naming his future son Gellert.
that would be nice and since this is a Harry x Fleur fic, i can see Harry moving to france to live there with Fleur... however i shall see how this fic goes since im only at chapter 9 :D
12/4/2024 c10 potterlegend93
I dont understand the purpose of the whole dual wands situation. while the concept of dual wielding swods does exist, it's usually regarded as being less effective and less efficient because of the need to split your focus. i feel like wands would require more focus and more concentration than swords.
Then there's the idea that he wanted to keep his ability to dual wield a secret. If that was the case, why didn't he just say that he wouldn't be using the other wand in the tournament? Then his secret wouldn't have gotten out. If he was planning on using it in the tournament, why is he upset that the secret came out a couple weeks early?
This may have been why I stopped reading around this point last time i read this story. I had decided to reread it because i couldn't remember. I'm going to continue this time, but it does bother me a bit.
I dont understand the purpose of the whole dual wands situation. while the concept of dual wielding swods does exist, it's usually regarded as being less effective and less efficient because of the need to split your focus. i feel like wands would require more focus and more concentration than swords.
Then there's the idea that he wanted to keep his ability to dual wield a secret. If that was the case, why didn't he just say that he wouldn't be using the other wand in the tournament? Then his secret wouldn't have gotten out. If he was planning on using it in the tournament, why is he upset that the secret came out a couple weeks early?
This may have been why I stopped reading around this point last time i read this story. I had decided to reread it because i couldn't remember. I'm going to continue this time, but it does bother me a bit.