for Fleur De Lis1/11/2023 c1 
6Lord Shiva
So, any reason as to why Harry decided to shout out his spells at loud? Instead of silent casting?
6Lord ShivaSo, any reason as to why Harry decided to shout out his spells at loud? Instead of silent casting?
1/10/2023 c7 Sean Emery
OrionB15 can I have your discord name so I can find your server so I can join I’ll give you my discord name in case you need it to send me an invite to your server just pm me when you get a chance to read this comment
OrionB15 can I have your discord name so I can find your server so I can join I’ll give you my discord name in case you need it to send me an invite to your server just pm me when you get a chance to read this comment
1/10/2023 c28 SKFF
Amazing work.
Truly a great morning when I wake up and see an update to this story.
Really keen to see the showdown in the next chapter.
Can’t wait!
Amazing work.
Truly a great morning when I wake up and see an update to this story.
Really keen to see the showdown in the next chapter.
Can’t wait!
1/10/2023 c28 kailashmaharana2500
Justin is already more powerful than fluer. I tried hard to like this fic but I can't. One of the biggest reason is making Harry's brother as powerful as Harry (even if he is not yet you have indicated he will be there). This chapter just ruined my interest in this story.
Justin is already more powerful than fluer. I tried hard to like this fic but I can't. One of the biggest reason is making Harry's brother as powerful as Harry (even if he is not yet you have indicated he will be there). This chapter just ruined my interest in this story.
1/6/2023 c27 Guest
Pretty good story.
Pretty good story.
1/3/2023 c5 Deccam
I really wanted to like this fic, but the dialogue is akward and stilted most of the time. That along with this Harry reading like your generic self insert power fantasy. He knows everything, is the best at everything, and does "wow super impressive" things all the time like wandlessly animating his spoon to drink soup just to show off how "badass" he is. it reads as incredibly cringy.
Your beta's are clearly doing the bare minimum and they need replaced if they cant even point out how awful the dialogue is.
Considering you talk about reading ahead im also going to assume you have a Patreon, which is infuritating and completely unforgivable considering the poor quality of the writing.
This is a very harsh criticism, but it is a criticism not flame. not a word of what i've said is untrue.
I really wanted to like this fic, but the dialogue is akward and stilted most of the time. That along with this Harry reading like your generic self insert power fantasy. He knows everything, is the best at everything, and does "wow super impressive" things all the time like wandlessly animating his spoon to drink soup just to show off how "badass" he is. it reads as incredibly cringy.
Your beta's are clearly doing the bare minimum and they need replaced if they cant even point out how awful the dialogue is.
Considering you talk about reading ahead im also going to assume you have a Patreon, which is infuritating and completely unforgivable considering the poor quality of the writing.
This is a very harsh criticism, but it is a criticism not flame. not a word of what i've said is untrue.
12/31/2022 c8 Guest
Grindelwald was absolutely right in his goals though a bit extreme when you say he is wrong and sorry it's spitting on his ideals. I finally thought I would read a novel where Harry believes in the threat muggles pose if left to their own devices.
Grindelwald was absolutely right in his goals though a bit extreme when you say he is wrong and sorry it's spitting on his ideals. I finally thought I would read a novel where Harry believes in the threat muggles pose if left to their own devices.
12/28/2022 c6 ImHateful
It was interesting for a while but I couldn't handle the dialogue, it was awkward and felt forced, it didn't really flow correctly.
I tried pushing through but I just couldn't shake the feeling of the dialogue feeling wrong somehow.
I'm not writing this as a hate message, I hope you have an amazing day/week and stay safe. Take care.
It was interesting for a while but I couldn't handle the dialogue, it was awkward and felt forced, it didn't really flow correctly.
I tried pushing through but I just couldn't shake the feeling of the dialogue feeling wrong somehow.
I'm not writing this as a hate message, I hope you have an amazing day/week and stay safe. Take care.
12/28/2022 c7 Fuck Names
Absolutely fucking love the brotherhood between Justin and Harry. It's a shame that the main pairing is Fleur and Harry, otherwise I would have definitely kept on reading this story. Alas, for some reason, I've never really liked Fleur at all despite my attempts to like her by reading fics like Cadmean Victory and a couple of other popular Fleur fics.
Absolutely fucking love the brotherhood between Justin and Harry. It's a shame that the main pairing is Fleur and Harry, otherwise I would have definitely kept on reading this story. Alas, for some reason, I've never really liked Fleur at all despite my attempts to like her by reading fics like Cadmean Victory and a couple of other popular Fleur fics.
12/28/2022 c3 Fuck Names
This is wholesome asf. Would have loved a story where he just did all this without the romance.
This is wholesome asf. Would have loved a story where he just did all this without the romance.